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Posted: 12 years ago

At the mercy of the man whom she had hoped to save from her life's tragedy and failure. !!!!!!!!!! Geet was trying to protect him!? the plot thickens!

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update...

now after he knows abt his daughter and her i dont think so he is going to let her go...

but wat happend that they had to split...

didnt he try to look out for her...

now lets c how maan makes her to trust him again and will their love thats lost somewhere rekindle bw them

pl cont soon

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kkaavvyyaa

@kkaavvyyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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186519

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks so much for updating!!! It was just perfect...Maan as the cold hearted yet sweet dad is so awesome to read!!!

I love love this line:

Maan had never imagined himself prisoner to the few moments of ecstasy that drugged his world and made him an addict.

this was written so beautifully!!!!!!! Thanks a bunch and good luck on your exams babe...hope you do amazing!!!!!!

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

nice update...

i thought that when geet said that she is getting married ...maan will be broken and sad...but no all your maan are stubborn and always get what they want...

he tied geet...😲 ...

loving this father - daughter relationship...

update soon...

by the way how was your exams..

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Dristi/twin/MK/D/dumbo/Drizzy

@DrashtiDhamiNo1

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG loved your update sooo much

you described it really well

awww loved the lil moment maan had with his daughter

it was really cute especially for her to call him daddy

man she is one smart kid

i cant believe a lil nine year old tracked down her long lost father

nice how maan forcefully dragged geet to his home 😆

that was great!!

but i cant believe he even tied geet to his bed

me cant wait till the next part

love how the story is unfolding bit by bit

cont soon please

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504887

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update
loving maan & anjalis bonding
poor geet-maan shudnt hv done this
i hope its nothing serious happened during these 9 yrs
maan has to do lot of things to appease geet and a lot of tym to compensate for these 9 yrs of loneliness for geet
n e ways loving this msk
update soon

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124304

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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you for the update🤗.. love Geet, NOT Maan... to leave and not look back and then to roughshod your way like a bull over anyone else to begin from where he left off... 😡... I hope theres something you re not showing that will reveal him to be not such a jerk after-all😆..

do post the next part soon..

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