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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by souroj

Originally posted by vijayam

Chitra, both the storyline are wonderfully written...Clap...though I like the 2nd one as it has a happy ending...

but you're right, nobody deserves happiness in this dumb serial, how about this:

Tappu & Iccha despite their new found puky friendship cant move a feather, Satya & Sanchi succeed in their plans...make bundela parivar a pauper, expose tappu, defame Veer by implicating him in a false rape case with Sanchi...Veer as expected gives in as he cant remember a thing and is very repentant.  Veer divorces Iccha, gets married to Sanchi & leaves for US...as he hates both tappu & iccha now...and cant face people any more after the sanchi episode...so atleast he gets saved from these 2 good for nothing rotten ladies...meanwhile jogi does a favor to mai by giving her a cook's job in the same canteen managed by ammo, so mai reports to ammo...atleast she earns some money to feed daddaji at a hut they cud manage to rent somehow...baba become a sanyasi & goes away somewhere unknown...
both iccha & tappu are accepted by Rathod as maids in his house..post delivery tappu gets a paralytic stroke that make her immobile, seeing her friend's pathetic state...iccha loses her voice officially...
Rathod orders..iccha to take care of the baby & handicapped tappu...doctor prescribes a treatment of handing out 50 lashes everyday to tappu by iccha with nani & divya watching them...which cud cure her to some extent...and iccha does that dutifully every day...Smile

none of them deserve Vansh to be reborn or with them again...Angry

howzzthat...




Vijaya I am laughing like crazy ROFLROFLespecially the bold parts but u have given a happy ending to Veer and finally oh finally he goes to USLOLLOL
LOL

@ bold.. Happy ending?...Seems like punishment to me..ROFL


Edited by hermoinee - 10 May 2011 at 5:14am

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by souroj

@ Vijaya.
I am continuing ur story a bit moreSmile.
Now that the babies r growing up Iccha is not having enough time to lash Taps faithfully, so Rathod hires a guy for Tapu's treatment and guess who the guy is- Its SidEmbarrassed
Iccha looks after the babies and Sid continues lashing Taps.
I want justice for Sid-the unsung hero


yeah, sounds even better, poor guy, rotting in jail, while the queen of sins is having a whale of a time outside...Angry

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
@ hermoinee... brilliant story Clap with excellent ending Clap i simply loved it ...very goodClap

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hermoinee

Originally posted by vijayam

Chitra, both the storyline are wonderfully written...Clap...though I like the 2nd one as it has a happy ending...

but you're right, nobody deserves happiness in this dumb serial, how about this:

Tappu & Iccha despite their new found puky friendship cant move a feather, Satya & Sanchi succeed in their plans...make bundela parivar a pauper, expose tappu, defame Veer by implicating him in a false rape case with Sanchi...Veer as expected gives in as he cant remember a thing and is very repentant.  Veer divorces Iccha, gets married to Sanchi & leaves for US...as he hates both tappu & iccha now...and cant face people any more after the sanchi episode...so atleast he gets saved from these 2 good for nothing rotten ladies...meanwhile jogi does a favor to mai by giving her a cook's job in the same canteen managed by ammo, so mai reports to ammo...atleast she earns some money to feed daddaji at a hut they cud manage to rent somehow...baba become a sanyasi & goes away somewhere unknown...
both iccha & tappu are accepted by Rathod as maids in his house..post delivery tappu gets a paralytic stroke that make her immobile, seeing her friend's pathetic state...iccha loses her voice officially...
Rathod orders..iccha to take care of the baby & handicapped tappu...doctor prescribes a treatment of handing out 50 lashes everyday to tappu by iccha with nani & divya watching them...which cud cure her to some extent...and iccha does that dutifully every day...Smile

none of them deserve Vansh to be reborn or with them again...Angry

howzzthat...




Wonderful Vijaya..ClapClap
@ Bold.. Veer gets saved from two rotten ladies to get tied to another rotten vengeful lady Sanchi who does not hesitate to plot and kill or has no shame..LOL A befitting punishment..LOL

@ Blue.. Did Ichcha ever have a voice even unofficially?.. All the more easy for her as now nobody will get irritated or blame her because she can stand like a statue for ever and we will be saved from her stammers and stutters..LOL

@ Red.. Hilarious.. Did you by any chance ever live in the middle east?...ROFL Anyway, I love this doctor.. Please make him prescribe some such nice treatment for the playboy senior and the 'Gun'lessWanti... ROFLROFL


'Gun'lessWanti..LOLLOL...since gunlesswanti & daddji will be penniless they cant afford this doctor...

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hermoinee

Originally posted by souroj

Originally posted by vijayam

Chitra, both the storyline are wonderfully written...Clap...though I like the 2nd one as it has a happy ending...

but you're right, nobody deserves happiness in this dumb serial, how about this:

Tappu & Iccha despite their new found puky friendship cant move a feather, Satya & Sanchi succeed in their plans...make bundela parivar a pauper, expose tappu, defame Veer by implicating him in a false rape case with Sanchi...Veer as expected gives in as he cant remember a thing and is very repentant.  Veer divorces Iccha, gets married to Sanchi & leaves for US...as he hates both tappu & iccha now...and cant face people any more after the sanchi episode...so atleast he gets saved from these 2 good for nothing rotten ladies...meanwhile jogi does a favor to mai by giving her a cook's job in the same canteen managed by ammo, so mai reports to ammo...atleast she earns some money to feed daddaji at a hut they cud manage to rent somehow...baba become a sanyasi & goes away somewhere unknown...
both iccha & tappu are accepted by Rathod as maids in his house..post delivery tappu gets a paralytic stroke that make her immobile, seeing her friend's pathetic state...iccha loses her voice officially...
Rathod orders..iccha to take care of the baby & handicapped tappu...doctor prescribes a treatment of handing out 50 lashes everyday to tappu by iccha with nani & divya watching them...which cud cure her to some extent...and iccha does that dutifully every day...Smile

none of them deserve Vansh to be reborn or with them again...Angry

howzzthat...




Vijaya I am laughing like crazy ROFLROFLespecially the bold parts but u have given a happy ending to Veer and finally oh finally he goes to USLOLLOL
LOL

@ bold.. Happy ending?...Seems like punishment to me..ROFL

If Veer can get positive vibes from TapsWackoWacko he will definitely fall in love wid SanchiLOLLOL
LOL

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jdfan

@ hermoinee... brilliant story Clap with excellent ending Clap i simply loved it ...very goodClap

Thank you jdfan..Big smile..I am sure that you liked the first one...LOLLOL.. Would love to see your valuable additions to the story...Smile
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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vijayam

Chitra, both the storyline are wonderfully written...Clap...though I like the 2nd one as it has a happy ending...

but you're right, nobody deserves happiness in this dumb serial, how about this:

Tappu & Iccha despite their new found puky friendship cant move a feather, Satya & Sanchi succeed in their plans...make bundela parivar a pauper, expose tappu, defame Veer by implicating him in a false rape case with Sanchi...Veer as expected gives in as he cant remember a thing and is very repentant.  Veer divorces Iccha, gets married to Sanchi & leaves for US...as he hates both tappu & iccha now...and cant face people any more after the sanchi episode...so atleast he gets saved from these 2 good for nothing rotten ladies...meanwhile jogi does a favor to mai by giving her a cook's job in the same canteen managed by ammo, so mai reports to ammo...atleast she earns some money to feed daddaji at a hut they cud manage to rent somehow...baba become a sanyasi & goes away somewhere unknown...
both iccha & tappu are accepted by Rathod as maids in his house..post delivery tappu gets a paralytic stroke that make her immobile, seeing her friend's pathetic state...iccha loses her voice officially...
Rathod orders..iccha to take care of the baby & handicapped tappu...doctor prescribes a treatment of handing out 50 lashes everyday to tappu by iccha with nani & divya watching them...which cud cure her to some extent...and iccha does that dutifully every day...Smile

none of them deserve Vansh to be reborn or with them again...Angry

howzzthat...



@ Bold.. I can even imagine Ichcha mouthing this dialogue while meting out this treatment to Tappu: 'Mujhe maaf karna Tappu.. Meh tere bhalaai ke liye hi ye sub kar rahi hu'... swishhh...LOL.LOL

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hermoinee

Originally posted by vijayam

Chitra, both the storyline are wonderfully written...Clap...though I like the 2nd one as it has a happy ending...

but you're right, nobody deserves happiness in this dumb serial, how about this:

Tappu & Iccha despite their new found puky friendship cant move a feather, Satya & Sanchi succeed in their plans...make bundela parivar a pauper, expose tappu, defame Veer by implicating him in a false rape case with Sanchi...Veer as expected gives in as he cant remember a thing and is very repentant.  Veer divorces Iccha, gets married to Sanchi & leaves for US...as he hates both tappu & iccha now...and cant face people any more after the sanchi episode...so atleast he gets saved from these 2 good for nothing rotten ladies...meanwhile jogi does a favor to mai by giving her a cook's job in the same canteen managed by ammo, so mai reports to ammo...atleast she earns some money to feed daddaji at a hut they cud manage to rent somehow...baba become a sanyasi & goes away somewhere unknown...
both iccha & tappu are accepted by Rathod as maids in his house..post delivery tappu gets a paralytic stroke that make her immobile, seeing her friend's pathetic state...iccha loses her voice officially...
Rathod orders..iccha to take care of the baby & handicapped tappu...doctor prescribes a treatment of handing out 50 lashes everyday to tappu by iccha with nani & divya watching them...which cud cure her to some extent...and iccha does that dutifully every day...Smile

none of them deserve Vansh to be reborn or with them again...Angry

howzzthat...



@ Bold.. I can even imagine Ichcha mouthing this dialogue while meting out this treatment to Tappu: 'Mujhe maaf karna Tappu.. Meh tere bhalaai ke liye hi ye sub kar rahi hu'... swishhh...LOL.LOL

ROFLROFL and Sid telling Tapasya mein tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.....swishhhLOLLOL
ROFL

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