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souroj
souroj @souroj IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by hermoinee



@ Bold.. Do you still have so much hope about her mental capabilities? The dumb Veer will become a pauper anyway with out anyone's help, but Ichcha's help will only quicken the process...🤣🤣

The first story is written as a punishment for the callous way everyone, namely Veer, Ichcha and Taps have forgotten the loss of a young life, the vulnerable, sick and helpless guy Vansh and are thinking of living a happy threesome while the two weird girls are deceiving everyone that Taps is carrying Vansh in her womb. Did Vansh not matter to anyone at all? They cannot dismiss him like that. They all have to pay for their uncaring attitude. Daddaji and Mai also have to suffer from loss of face when they know about Veer's infertility. But now, with the CVs trying to turn Taps positive, that exposure is becoming a big question mark.

This is really a big question mark.
Tapu never had any respect for any relation but Iccha, even she doesn't care about Vansh😕, no respect for Vansh's memory😡.Veer baap hone ke chakkar mein forgets everything and is now getting positive vibes from TVSB😲😕
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souroj
souroj @souroj IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Vijaya.
I am continuing ur story a bit more😊.
Now that the babies r growing up Iccha is not having enough time to lash Taps faithfully, so Rathod hires a guy for Tapu's treatment and guess who the guy is- Its Sid😳
Iccha looks after the babies and Sid continues lashing Taps.
I want justice for Sid-the unsung hero
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hermione8
hermione8 @hermione8 Goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by vijayam


Chitra, both the storyline are wonderfully written...👏...though I like the 2nd one as it has a happy ending...

but you're right, nobody deserves happiness in this dumb serial, how about this:

Tappu & Iccha despite their new found puky friendship cant move a feather, Satya & Sanchi succeed in their plans...make bundela parivar a pauper, expose tappu, defame Veer by implicating him in a false rape case with Sanchi...Veer as expected gives in as he cant remember a thing and is very repentant.  Veer divorces Iccha, gets married to Sanchi & leaves for US...as he hates both tappu & iccha now...and cant face people any more after the sanchi episode...so atleast he gets saved from these 2 good for nothing rotten ladies...meanwhile jogi does a favor to mai by giving her a cook's job in the same canteen managed by ammo, so mai reports to ammo...atleast she earns some money to feed daddaji at a hut they cud manage to rent somehow...baba become a sanyasi & goes away somewhere unknown...
both iccha & tappu are accepted by Rathod as maids in his house..post delivery tappu gets a paralytic stroke that make her immobile, seeing her friend's pathetic state...iccha loses her voice officially...
Rathod orders..iccha to take care of the baby & handicapped tappu...doctor prescribes a treatment of handing out 50 lashes everyday to tappu by iccha with nani & divya watching them...which cud cure her to some extent...and iccha does that dutifully every day...😊

none of them deserve Vansh to be reborn or with them again...😡

howzzthat...




Wonderful Vijaya..👏👏
@ Bold.. Veer gets saved from two rotten ladies to get tied to another rotten vengeful lady Sanchi who does not hesitate to plot and kill or has no shame..😆 A befitting punishment..😆

@ Blue.. Did Ichcha ever have a voice even unofficially?.. All the more easy for her as now nobody will get irritated or blame her because she can stand like a statue for ever and we will be saved from her stammers and stutters..😆

@ Red.. Hilarious.. Did you by any chance ever live in the middle east?...🤣 Anyway, I love this doctor.. Please make him prescribe some such nice treatment for the playboy senior and the 'Gun'lessWanti... 🤣🤣
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hermione8
hermione8 @hermione8 Goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by souroj



This is really a big question mark.
Tapu never had any respect for any relation but Iccha, even she doesn't care about Vansh😕, no respect for Vansh's memory😡.Veer baap hone ke chakkar mein forgets everything and is now getting positive vibes from TVSB😲😕

Very valid point souroj..👏👏 Vansh's life or suicide had no value for these morons.. Even when he was alive, they kept him locked up in a room and today this Mai speaks all the time about Vansh being reborn in the womb of the one who was responsible for his death and is being happy seeing her go out with her other son Veer.. She is pampering the girl who tortured him till death and ill treating the girl who married him in spite of everything and tried to love him and take care of him .. But Ichcha also did injustice to Vansh by marrying him to bring Veer and Tappu closer.. After his death, instead of being enraged towards Tappu, she readily forgave her and begged others also to forgive her, whereas she was quick to accuse Veer for his death.. 😕

All these three women will rest in peace only after Veer also commits suicide after Tappu's baby secret is exposed.. Then they can garland the big photo and keep on gazing it for ever..🥱🥱
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hermione8
hermione8 @hermione8 Goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by souroj


@ Vijaya.
I am continuing ur story a bit more😊.
Now that the babies r growing up Iccha is not having enough time to lash Taps faithfully, so Rathod hires a guy for Tapu's treatment and guess who the guy is- Its Sid😳
Iccha looks after the babies and Sid continues lashing Taps.
I want justice for Sid-the unsung hero

Wow, you all are coming up with wonderful ideas..👏👏..Keep it up..👍🏼
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hermione8
hermione8 @hermione8 Goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by souroj



This is really a big question mark.
Tapu never had any respect for any relation but Iccha, even she doesn't care about Vansh😕, no respect for Vansh's memory😡.Veer baap hone ke chakkar mein forgets everything and is now getting positive vibes from TVSB😲😕

@ Red.. There is a saying in Sanskrit, 'Vinaasha kaale vipareetha buddhi:', which means 'At the time of destruction (of self), the mind goes in inverted or in reverse gear'..  That is why Veer is getting positive vibes from the girl who instigated his brother to suicide and who, after being pregnant with some other guy's kid due to her infidelity, is even now lying to get him and he is blissfully unaware of it.. His mental faculties have got destroyed..😆😆
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hermione8
hermione8 @hermione8 Goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by souroj



Vijaya I am laughing like crazy 🤣🤣especially the bold parts but u have given a happy ending to Veer and finally oh finally he goes to US😆😆
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@ bold.. Happy ending?...Seems like punishment to me..🤣
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FunLyfe
Vijaya @FunLyfe Goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by souroj


@ Vijaya.
I am continuing ur story a bit more😊.
Now that the babies r growing up Iccha is not having enough time to lash Taps faithfully, so Rathod hires a guy for Tapu's treatment and guess who the guy is- Its Sid😳
Iccha looks after the babies and Sid continues lashing Taps.
I want justice for Sid-the unsung hero


yeah, sounds even better, poor guy, rotting in jail, while the queen of sins is having a whale of a time outside...😡
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jdfan
jdfan @jdfan IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ hermoinee... brilliant story 👏 with excellent ending 👏 i simply loved it ...very good👏
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FunLyfe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by hermoinee



Wonderful Vijaya..👏👏
@ Bold.. Veer gets saved from two rotten ladies to get tied to another rotten vengeful lady Sanchi who does not hesitate to plot and kill or has no shame..😆 A befitting punishment..😆

@ Blue.. Did Ichcha ever have a voice even unofficially?.. All the more easy for her as now nobody will get irritated or blame her because she can stand like a statue for ever and we will be saved from her stammers and stutters..😆

@ Red.. Hilarious.. Did you by any chance ever live in the middle east?...🤣 Anyway, I love this doctor.. Please make him prescribe some such nice treatment for the playboy senior and the 'Gun'lessWanti... 🤣🤣


'Gun'lessWanti..😆😆...since gunlesswanti & daddji will be penniless they cant afford this doctor...
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