The Touch Of Fear - Sajan SS...prt6 updtd

BabajiKaThullu thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey frnds Radhi here... i knw u will all socked dat i have already 5 stories to write n updt bt nw m here with new story ...???? sry bt plzz dont throw chappals at me plzz... we all knw abt  monaya..they launched their official blog.. n m damn happy..
so i wanted to write more abt them bt as a SAJAN...

n this will be a sajan Story...




The Touch Of Fear ...





Here is CS...


Samrat Shergill:

Ab Samrat Shergill haii to obviously handsum hunk or apni college ka cool dude hi hoga... as we knw his image every girls heart  throab.. n as usual girls ki apni ungliyo pe nachata haii... love means nthing to him... just funloving .. prankster... n ofcourse a basketball champ... these all his positive side... more over he is also arrogent.. short tempared... gussa bahut
jaldi aa jata haiii... angry young man...ek number ka zidddi... every1 called him Amir baap ki bigri hui aulaad...[thoda negative hai] bt the fact thet his parents died when he was 5 years old...
n he has only one elder brother Armaan bhai.. his jaan... his world his only family...his dad.. his mom .. his brother  n his everything is his Armaan bhai...If samrat is ziddi n bigra hua so its all
because of Armaan.. Armaan gives him everything wt he wants n wish... Actually Armaan gives him everything before he wished ... both lives in USA... as Armaan's bussiness in USA...


Armaan Shergill:

samrat's elder brother... A richest indian in USA... his everything is Samrat.. n can do anything for Samrat..
After his parents death... Armaan looked after him... so Samrat was his baby...he love Samrat a lot...n spoiled him a lot... n Armaan have soft corner for his Frnd Riddhima...


Gunjan Bhushan:

A brillient student of Excel college...bookworm.. always comes first in college... simple n shy... same as gunjan in MJHT...she is madly in love with his class mate Mayank... bt never told  him...She is nt rich... bt want to complete her dearms...


Mayank Sharma:

A brillient student of excel college in mumbai... book worm.. n same his image... bt he is nt rich... n madely in love with Gunjan his classmate.. bt never told her...


Riddhima Gupta:

A doctor (its nt u Dr. lolz).. lives in USA... Armaan's frnd... actually she loves Armaan a lot... n she has told Armaan abt her feeling...

There a other characters..

bt will tell u as story unfolds...


STORY PLOT:


Samrat n Armaan lives in USA... they will come india soon... as Armaan shifted his bussiness to india...
n story will start frm here...


[i knw aap kuch jagah par confussed hoge.. bt jaise hi story stary
hogi sab clear ho jaayega...]


IMP NOTE:plz tell me should i continue or nt????????


hope i will nt disappoint u... meri bhavnao ko samjo lolz...



IF u like the Character Sketch plzzz tell me...
write a comment atleast...


Love
Radhi...


Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

329

Views

47558

Users

69

Likes

409

Frequent Posters

BabajiKaThullu thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
---INDEX---

part 1 -- page 7
part 2 -- page 15
part 3 -- page 22
part 4 -- page 27
part 5 -- page 32
part 6 -- page 39




Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 12 years ago
SIZZZLER thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi RADHiKA !!  Awesome CS and Plot...Please continue soon...Looking really nteresting...just like your other creations...but...wait...wait...wait...What about Your other Updates...??πŸ˜‘πŸ˜•  Through Chappals is very short word actually😑...Bas mujhe 1 Khoon Maaf Ho jaaye...πŸ˜‘πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜Š Phir...dekhna😳

Ok...just kidding... Please,Unhen bhi update karo Yaar...U treat them as a 'Step' WriterπŸ˜†.
    

Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
😲Radhuu really a very pleasant surpriseπŸ˜ƒ!!New SS...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜²πŸ˜†Really awesome concept & CS.It looks like another mystery story of Mystery Queen..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†.Can't  wait to read it .Plzzz continue ASAP.
Kinarandomness thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome concept
continue soon😊
koolgurl thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely CS u should cont it i would luv to read it
thanxs for PM
cont soon

BabajiKaThullu thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Anjali_12

😲Radhuu really a very pleasant surpriseπŸ˜ƒ!!New SS...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜²πŸ˜†Really awesome concept & CS.It looks like another mystery story of Mystery Queen..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†.Can't  wait to read it .Plzzz continue ASAP.



Dont be socked dii... yeh meri story haii to thodi mystry to hogi hi...

bt u will love this story i hope...

thnks for mast comment...

love u dii
Radhu
πŸ˜‰
KuchBhiMatBol thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
ress hahahaha bhavnao kn samjho ha ha ha poori nautanki

unress hahaha i cmt believe tht m aactually unress it hahaha
Dear pp,
dekh tune kaha na isilye unress kar rahi hoon warna u knw aisa karne ka mera koi bhi irada nhi tha
waisd talking abt cs hmmm thheek hi ghak tha hhahahahaha jst joking bhot hi mast tha by fod totally different n this is cheating tune mjhe iske story nhi btayi pp tune mjhe dhoka diya hai main tjhe kbhi maaf nhi karoongi hehehehe
mmm about story kabootaro ka adda hahahaa joke tha itna mat has what abt pyaar main twist or pyaar ka ehsas baki t u hi jaan aur decide kar my sweet mumma hehehdEdited by sweetsurabhi94 - 12 years ago
BabajiKaThullu thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sweetsurabhi94

ress hahahaha bhavnao kn samjho ha ha ha poori nautanki



tere sath reh rahi hu na is liye nautanki karne lagi hu...

warna muje nautanki na N bhi nahi pata tha..

btw unres jaldi karna warna m gonna kill u...

n suggest me a name of this ss

KD...

BabajiKaThullu thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Hi RADHiKA !!  Awesome CS and Plot...Please continue soon...Looking really nteresting...just like your other creations...but...wait...wait...wait...What about Your other Updates...??πŸ˜‘πŸ˜•  Through Chappals is very short word actually😑...Bas mujhe 1 Khoon Maaf Ho jaaye...😊 Phir...dekhna😳

Ok...just kidding... Please,Unhen bhi update karo Yaar...U treat them as a 'Step' WriterπŸ˜†.
    



SOHAM BHAiii

kyu mera mazak uda rahe hoπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

abt other updt i weill try..vacations haii to guest aaye haii ghar pe vacation ke liye to time nahi mil rhaa haiii sryyy

wt do u mean bt chappal is very shorttt????😭😭😭😭😭

n Ek khun maaf...?????😑😑😑

Fir kya aap muje maar daaloge??? mera kassor kya haii bhai????
πŸ˜•

ohhh u was just kidding...

to fir koi baat nahi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

karte raho... like a kid...

kya bhai aap bhi... step writer.,,,🀣

will updt all updts soon ok.,...