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M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 19)

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dreamy_Mystique

fabulous OS
Thanks! Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet scorpio

this geet was really BOLD!Blushing
Yup! I know. LOL 
She was truly a 'sherni'.
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneet1985

that was hot!!!
Thanks!
Hopefully I steamed up a few windows. LOL 
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Saba..

sure intrested : )

greatt writer u are and i loved it mona .. too gud <3
Thanks for being interested Saba! Hug
 
If you think I'm a great writer then I humbly accept the compliment. Embarrassed
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sree10

Write more please. You are good.
Hopefully I will write more. Thanks for the encouragement! Hug
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by soni4eva

just read ur os it iz awsome 
u shud rite more
Another one who says I should write more? Shocked My oh my the pressure! LOL
 
Thanks for reading it and finding it awsome! Hug
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mansi95

awesome update mona auntHug..i am spellbound...truly magicalDay DreamingDay Dreaming.. that was a very passionate and torrid updateBlushingBlushingBlushingi am hyperventilatingWinkomg... u have virtually killed me with this one...DeadDeadDeadso at last the mission is accomplished...loved the naughty and dominating geet unlike what we see everydayLOLLOLpoor maan dunno how did he control himself??Evil Smile

you have described each moment and emotion so distinctly that i seem to be visualizing itEmbarrassedEmbarrassedi am still out of breath...LOLi will better take sum rest to regain my senses and read the update again thoroughly...Blushingi hope there was still a continuation...but alas!!!it came to an endOuch

please do write an ff because you are truly capable of that.Embarrassedi wish to read more and more updates from your side.

p.s: aunt now you can't call me a child..because you yourself have pmed me this updateLOLLOLLOLso at last i am free from this baccha thing and allLOLLOL
Nope can't call you bacha anymore when I now have helped you to become a woman. LOL  But you are still my darling niece! Hug
 
Good to know you could visualize everything and understanding from your reaction you did it quite vividly. Blushing And still you want a continuation?! How corrupted do you want to get? Shocked LOL
 
You are one of many who have liked a dominant Geet and I really appreciate that. I wanted to show her in a different avatar and seem to have succeed. Embarrassed
 
Writing an FF? Don't you need a lot of patience for writing one? LOL I don't think it can work as patience and me are bitter enemies. LOLLOLLOL Howver thanks for the encouragement. Hug
 
 

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tere_liye_10

A novice Writer? R U mad?Confused
That was amazing!!!!!
U write better than anyone i know nd hus FF's i've read nd i've read ALOTEmbarrassed
I thot i was pretty gud but u completely floored me wid this!!!EmbarrassedClapClap
U shud Defo Write FF'sSmile
Im still BlushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
It was soo Sweeet,Romantic,Passionate,What we expect 4m MaaneetLOLWink
I wish this is shown in RealSmileTongue
Sara xxSmile
Are you calling me mad? Ouch No seriously I'm new to writing. I have previously written silly little poems here and there but a full fledged story? Not since I was a kid and that was many many years ago when mullets still were highest fashion. LOL
 
Wow! You think I'm a better writer than you...wow that means a lot coming from you. Embarrassed Btw Sara how do you manage to write so many FF's at the same time? I really admire that because personally I can only focus on writing one thing at a time.
 
Writing an FF, as written in another post, I don't have the patience nor do I think I'm ready for it. Maybe in the future...

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