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M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 18)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JULIEL

WOW!!! What a hot and passionate update!! Loved it!! Thanks for the PM!!
 
Thanks for loving my update and OS!  Embarrassed And you are welcome for the PM! Hug

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 7:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by somakazmi

very hot and awesomeBlushing...
congo on completing your first os...
tnx 4 pm and if u write more dont forget 2 pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 
I'm happy you liked it and that I made you blush. LOL FYI this is my 2nd OS and not the first. Embarrassed
 
About pm...*sigh*...when I write more then we will see. Can't guarantee anything because I really have poor memory. LOL
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maya_P

oh my god Mona...i was right the climax was an explosion...Geet was one hell of Sherni here...poor Maan.or should i say lucky Maan...lol...u did a fantastic job...i loved the fact that it was short and sweet...and ur way of writing is also very neat although is naughty...horse riding in jet...very interesting...btw so happy that u didn't give up on the english dialogues...pls don't in future also,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,waiting for ur next OS

Yup it was an explosion alright! LOL You guessed it right but I couldn't reveal that to you, could I? Big smile
 
Thanks for the compliments Prema and I did try to keep my language as neat as possible about something that is...err...not so neat. LOLBlushing  I'm not into graphic description of the deed. I think it's better when you hint rather then write it as it is. However a very difficult task to do so.
 
Don't you worry about the English dialogues. I will continue with them in my next OS, SS or FF whatever it will be.
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini01

oh my word...that was Day Dreaming Blushing
loved it, do continue writing soon.
That was surely ghrrr! *wiggles eyebrows*
 
Thanks for loving my OS Shalz! Hug And yes I will continu to write...soon.
 

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet

 
Thanks! Hug
 
Never knew one single word could hold so much power. Embarrassed
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maaneetfanatic

OMG MUJAI SHARAM AA RAHI HAIEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed  I dont have any words to describe how i feel after reading thisEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed  How can u write such rated X things and not blush...wow give u Thumbs Up a thumbs up for that!!!  fantastic
 
You were blushing that much? How cute! Embarrassed Beside who said I didn't blush when I was writing? My my, you have no idea. Blushing
 
Thanks for liking my OS! Hug
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by drdee142

OMG Mona, you are killing me, I got your PM and very eagerly started reading it in the office, can you imagine my condition, I can hardly breathe. I read all the parts together, thank God for small mercies I wouldn't be able to take the suspense or not reading it all.
 
I only hope no one walks into my office or I won't be able to utter a single coherent sentence.
 
I really truly loved it, I visualized the whole scene while reading and quite graphically I must admit Blushing Your description was so vivid that I couldn't help but get lost in their world.
 
I loved that you showed Geet take the initiative, loved to see Maan dance like a puppet to her music.
 
Here's a big hug from me Hug and BTW I still can't breathe properly and my face is all red and flushed Blushing
 
OK my last comment in Marathi; "Tujhi OS vachoon majhi ashi haalat zaali aahe ki kai bolu, ghari jaaon parath vachnar aahe. Tu aata laukar doosri OS livaila shuruvat kar, mala vachnyachi ghai zali aahe. Tu pharach chan lihite, me aata diwas bhar thonda var ek motthi smile gehoon phirnar aahe. Me aaj Mantra Mukhth zaali" Wink
OMG Dee! Who told you to read it in the office?! Shocked Hope you had AC over there...and ice-cold water. LOL
 
I'm glad you liked my way of writing and that you could imagine everything vividly. That was my goal((for everyone). The big bonus is that you were blusing and had some breathing trouble. LOL 
 
Ok, that was not nice writing in Marathi. I know many languages but Marathi is not one of them. Ouch Hmm, let me see...the OS had an effect on you and you don't know how to say it...you want me to write another one...err...the rest I don't get it. Confused But tell me did I guess some of it right? Confused
 
Ok darling, it translates to Reading your OS had such an effect on me that I can't describe, went home and read it again. Please start writing another OS soon, I impatient to read you next one. You really write very well, I've been walkng around the whole day with a big smile on my face LOL I'm totally mesmerized by this.
 
For some reason I thought you were Maharashtrian, me being stupid againD'oh and not checking with you. BTW from which place are you Smile Oh and Mona, you guessed a lot of it right Hug


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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged

@dee. What in the world made you think I was Maharashtrian? I'm not even Indian. LOL My parents are from Punjab Pakistan however I'm born and raised in Sweden. Now I live in UK. Complicated? Wacko Yup! Big smile

Yay! I guessed a lot of it right. DancingHowever thanks for the translation and oh my...the OS had some effect on you. LOL 
 
I will continue to write but I think the next one will not be as...err...x-rated as this one.

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