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M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 16)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

Hey dear...hot n passionate last update!! Loved the update...wonderful end to ur OS! Looking forward to anything tha u write...do pm wen u do. Smile U r a brilliant writer! Please do write something soon.
I'm a brilliant writer?! Shocked And this is only my second OS. Stern Smile Wow! Thanks for saying that. Embarrassed
 
So pleased to know that you liked the ending and yes whenever I write more I will try to remember to pm you. But don't hope to much for it...I have a terrible memory so sorry in advance. LOL

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babygurl10

Speechless!Clap
Aww, thanks! Hug
Never knew I could actually make people speachless. Embarrassed

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fourleafclover

It was a fitting end to the stunning OS that u wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U hardly seem a novice writer,i was amazed to hear it,do warite some other things now that this is overHug

And wat do i say,whatever it wud b less...The 'vengeful' geet was awsuum,n wat a way to take revenge!!!!!!!!!!!LOL
Wat is gud to see s geet completely dominating maan for once n maan at her mercyWink but denevrything endedd wid a sweet note
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Stunning OS? Not a novice writer? You were amazed? Shocked Now my head is spinning from all the praise. Wacko But thank you so much for all the compliments! Hug
 
We always see Maan as the dominant one and I thought it would be fun to see what it was like when the tables are turned. Also there had been a great discussion among my friends to see Geet as the dominant one. We don't ever expect her to be like that in the show...so I thought why not write about it instead.
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jasraj123

mona it was sooo awesome and hottt. omg geet accomplished her mission but poor maan had to go through alot of torutureWinkWinkLOL. hayeee my  dil goes for him but finally she made him relize that what he saidLOL.

thanks for pm.

it was brilliantly written and was reallly really goodClap
What poor Maan?! I think he pretty much enjoyed it...in the end.  Wink LOL Beside Geet had all the right as a wife to make him realise what he had said...which ever way she wanted. Blushing
 
O meri sherni! I'm so happy you liked it and thanks for the compliments. Hug
 
 
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tanya94

hey...uve yet again done a great job...Smile...well i find nothing to critisize as uve really written well and reading ur os was very enjoyable...ya i can tell u wat was diff in ur os and wat i liked most about it...well i liked the fact that we got to see geets passion as usually we get to see maan in a passionate mood and geet responding to him.this time geet initiating it was really nice .then ireally really love to see a jealous maan  and i got to see it.so i guess ur mission of writing an awesome os has been accomplished.u should try many more missions like this and i would always love to be a part of them.Tongue
 
If you have nothing to criticize then I take that as a big compliment. Embarrassed I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it different. My mission was to write something that has never been written before and from reading all the response I think I have accomplished it to some extend. Embarrassed
 
I will hopefully write more and yes you are more than welcome to be a part of it. Hug  Thanks!
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rs12345

awesome and great..
just now only i read the all parts 
pls add me to u r pm list
So you read it all in one go? Hmm, then I didn't get the chance to make you wait for the next part. Ermm I was kind of enjoying making people wait. Evil Smile LOL But thank you so much for liking my OS! Hug
 
And I've added you to my pm list.
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
OMG...BlushingBlushingBlushingDeadDeadDead
*faints*

just awesome...Clap

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehraan

hmmm mona...wat can i say yaar??im bowled over by ur writing...i dnt hve anythng 2 criticize..it was mre than perfect!!i really enjoyed reading ur OS as i got 2 visualize how wud geet be as a seductress...n i loved each n every dialogue tat u had penned 4 her...she was bold n passionate completely the opposite of geet vich v see...i liked her bold talk of not wearing the underw...tat also made my mind go blank 4 a sec..  jus like MAAN ...LOL i didnt xpect tat coming...Wink n had 2 read tat line thrice 2 swallow it hard, let it sink in my mind...the whole OS had the detailed lovemaking vich i dnt get  2 read in any SS..tat makes it stand apart  4 me ...
mona thanx  4 writing it so brilliantly n believe me im goin 2 read tis over n over agn unless n until i dnt get ur other OS cming up...Wink
 
Mehr dear, I was afraid that it might not have been up to your standards. I remember from my last OS you had some requests. With that in mind I tried to fulfil some of them and I'm happy you came to like what I wrote. Embarrassed But believe me it wasn't easy to write the last part. Whew! *whipes away sweat* It was a lot of hard work. Blushing ROFL
 
Hmm, you don't either have anything to critize?! Should I now let my ego blow to the size of Jupiter? LOL

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