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M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 13)

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Mona diHug

I am completely surrendered in your story!Embarrassed

What an Is; magnificent; briliantly written emotionsClapClap

Kudos you rock galStarStar

I loved this OS more because yours was the first in whcih Maan was under Geet's control and I enjoyed every word of it! And the last aprt made me blushBlushingBlushing I can so imagine Maaneet like thatDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Kash CVz meri wish poori karde:")

So sorry for the late reply! Was busy with completions etc; and then thank you for the OS!

PS- I want you to write more!

Love And Luck 
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Very Nice ...Fabulous,Fantastic,Wow...


I really enjoyed reading it.:)

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OMG Mona, you are killing me, I got your PM and very eagerly started reading it in the office, can you imagine my condition, I can hardly breathe. I read all the parts together, thank God for small mercies I wouldn't be able to take the suspense or not reading it all.
 
I only hope no one walks into my office or I won't be able to utter a single coherent sentence.
 
I really truly loved it, I visualized the whole scene while reading and quite graphically I must admit Blushing Your description was so vivid that I couldn't help but get lost in their world.
 
I loved that you showed Geet take the initiative, loved to see Maan dance like a puppet to her music.
 
Here's a big hug from me Hug and BTW I still can't breathe properly and my face is all red and flushed Blushing
 
OK my last comment in Marathi; "Tujhi OS vachoon majhi ashi haalat zaali aahe ki kai bolu, ghari jaaon parath vachnar aahe. Tu aata laukar doosri OS livaila shuruvat kar, mala vachnyachi ghai zali aahe. Tu pharach chan lihite, me aata diwas bhar thonda var ek motthi smile gehoon phirnar aahe. Me aaj Mantra Mukhth zaali" Wink


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Thanks for the lovely comments! Hug
I promise I will reply to all of you. This time individually.Big smile 

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omg,,,,,wht a sensual hot end,u r just fab.very well written,,,,me half dead here,u r too gud writer.keep writing sch os...god bless u.

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i loved the grand finale!!!!!!!!!!...that jet was awesome...and the ride was even betterWink...you did a fantastic job writing that love making scene...i know you were thinking it over in your favorite place to come up with ideas...and let me tell you...it worked...you wrote it all out perfectly...i could visualize it ...as if you had painted a picture...mona i hope to read a lot more from youEmbarrassed

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