Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 12)

mechantefille IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
babe ur anything but a novice writer. that was fantastic and definitely worth the wait!

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khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Hey n passionate last update!! Loved the update...wonderful end to ur OS! Looking forward to anything tha u pm wen u do. Smile U r a brilliant writer! Please do write something soon.

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babygurl10 Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:22am | IP Logged

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fourleafclover Groupbie

Joined: 21 February 2011
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:58am | IP Logged

It was a fitting end to the stunning OS that u wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U hardly seem a novice writer,i was amazed to hear it,do warite some other things now that this is overHug

And wat do i say,whatever it wud b less...The 'vengeful' geet was awsuum,n wat a way to take revenge!!!!!!!!!!!LOL
Wat is gud to see s geet completely dominating maan for once n maan at her mercyWink but denevrything endedd wid a sweet note

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jasraj123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:59am | IP Logged
mona it was sooo awesome and hottt. omg geet accomplished her mission but poor maan had to go through alot of torutureWinkWinkLOL. hayeee my  dil goes for him but finally she made him relize that what he saidLOL.

thanks for pm.

it was brilliantly written and was reallly really goodClap

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tanya94 Senior Member

Joined: 17 April 2011
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
hey...uve yet again done a great job...Smile...well i find nothing to critisize as uve really written well and reading ur os was very enjoyable...ya i can tell u wat was diff in ur os and wat i liked most about it...well i liked the fact that we got to see geets passion as usually we get to see maan in a passionate mood and geet responding to him.this time geet initiating it was really nice .then ireally really love to see a jealous maan  and i got to see i guess ur mission of writing an awesome os has been accomplished.u should try many more missions like this and i would always love to be a part of them.Tongue

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rs12345 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
awesome and great..
just now only i read the all parts 
pls add me to u r pm list

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mehraan IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 15 May 2008
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:05am | IP Logged
hmmm mona...wat can i say yaar??im bowled over by ur writing...i dnt hve anythng 2 was mre than perfect!!i really enjoyed reading ur OS as i got 2 visualize how wud geet be as a seductress...n i loved each n every dialogue tat u had penned 4 her...she was bold n passionate completely the opposite of geet vich v see...i liked her bold talk of not wearing the underw...tat also made my mind go blank 4 a sec..  jus like MAAN ...LOL i didnt xpect tat coming...Wink n had 2 read tat line thrice 2 swallow it hard, let it sink in my mind...the whole OS had the detailed lovemaking vich i dnt get  2 read in any SS..tat makes it stand apart  4 me ...
mona thanx  4 writing it so brilliantly n believe me im goin 2 read tis over n over agn unless n until i dnt get ur other OS cming up...Wink

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