Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 10)

mechantefille IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
good one...plz update soon!

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hansasma Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
do pm me next. Yayy!! bechara maan begging to be with Geet. lol

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rahmona_pakswe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged


@rosh. Yay you were first. LOL

I knew you would like the 'arising' bit. I knew it, I knew it! ROFL Actually I had you in mind when I wrote that bit. Rosh dear you have been a big (and bad) influence on me.

We always see Maan dominate but I wanted to see what it's like when the tables are turned. I don't expect to see Geet like this at all in the show so I thought why not write about it. I'm just happy you all like Geet this way.

Thanks for the wonderful compliments and yes I will continue to write. I still need to improve my writing skills a lot.


@sonali_N. Thanks dear!

@khwaishfan. Thanks for saying I'm a wonderful writer. I'm blushing now. Embarrassed
@tanya94. Ooo, that's the best thing you can say to I writer that you could imagine Maaneet in every bit of my OS. Embarrassed

@preethia. Yup she's almost there. But will she truly succeed? Hmm, you will found out in the next part.

@anky_1205. What bechara Maan? He deserves it. LOL And thanks for finding the story interesting.

@am_sweet_pari. Res. LOL

@zaara. You too? Angry A big RES from me too! Humph!  

@misschulbuli. I hope it gets more interesting. I don't want it to fall flat.

@t_areeb. Nope! No mercy yet. Evil Smile LOL

@shalini. Yes! I'm killing you all softly. Evil Smile.

@mehr. Good Lord! I'm enjoying this far too much. I love it when you all get frustrated. ROFL And you read it 6 times?! Talk about giving my ego a big boost. Thanks! Hug

@jas. Thanks for liking the update and for saying that I'm a good writer.

You can't see Maan like that but I LOVE it. Just so you know Geet is not done with him yet. LOL

@hopehot. Thanks!

@mish. I had to look up in the dictionary to see what the word evolving meant. ROFLShows how much I need to improve my English skills. ConfusedThanks for the compliment though. LOL

@maaneetfanatic. Me like jealous Maan too. Blushing

@sergeant. You've done it again. Shocked How do you know what goes on in my brain?

Thanks for liking the fantasy.

@krishdgr8. Thanks for finding it nice enough!

@mansi. What a huge comment! Me likey! If you are in wonderland after reading the update then I'm in wonderland for making you feel like that. Embarrassed And thanks for liking me writing skills.

@fourleafclover. Yes poor Maan! ROFL But isn't it fun to see him like this? LOL Hmm, Geet really should get an award for this masterplan.  Thanks for loving the story!

@sweet scorpio. This is nothing compare to what is yet to come. Wink

@millie_maaneet. Thanks!

@amrutha. Thanks!

@hansasma. Yup! There's a lot of begging and his patience is dearly being tested. LOL.


@EVERYONE. I'm so sorry for the late replies but thank you so much for reading and commenting. Hug

Edited by rahmona_pakswe - 20 May 2011 at 8:36am

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
dear when r u updating
am_sweet_pari Goldie

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged

waiting...Day Dreaming

waiting...Day Dreaming

waiting...Day Dreaming

waiting...Day Dreaming

fullyfaltu Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
its awesome... plz add me to ur pm list

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Maya_P IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Mona..on my god i'm loving Geet attitude.for once she has MSK under total Maan jealous and seducing him.our Sherni is on a roll...y do i think that the climax will create some explosionLOLEmbarrassed...i also loved Manesha was totally in the character.and him holding purple flower..i could totally picture it...when u update pls don't forget to PM me also...special thanx.for adding the dialog in english also...update the way u have written it also

Edited by Maya_P - 21 May 2011 at 1:21pm

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rahmona_pakswe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
@juliel. Thanks!
@fullyfaltu. Thanks! And Ok.
@prema. The'll see what happens. Wink 
And thanks for appreciating the English dialogues. It was hard work and at one point I was about to give up but I didn't.

Edited by rahmona_pakswe - 22 May 2011 at 3:58am

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