Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG MUJAI SHARAM AA RAHI HAI😳😳😳😳😳😳😳  I dont have any words to describe how i feel after reading this😳😳😳😳😳😳  How can u write such rated X things and not blush...wow give u 👍🏼 a thumbs up for that!!!  fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
this geet was really BOLD!☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
sure intrested : )

greatt writer u are and i loved it mona .. too gud <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Write more please. You are good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read ur os it iz awsome 
u shud rite more
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update mona aunt🤗..i am spellbound...truly magical😍😍.. that was a very passionate and torrid update☺️☺️☺️i am hyperventilating😉omg... u have virtually killed me with this one...🤢🤢🤢so at last the mission is accomplished...loved the naughty and dominating geet unlike what we see everyday😆😆poor maan dunno how did he control himself??😈

you have described each moment and emotion so distinctly that i seem to be visualizing it😳😳i am still out of breath...😆i will better take sum rest to regain my senses and read the update again thoroughly...☺️i hope there was still a continuation...but alas!!!it came to an end

please do write an ff because you are truly capable of that.😳i wish to read more and more updates from your side.

p.s: aunt now you can't call me a child..because you yourself have pmed me this update😆😆😆so at last i am free from this baccha thing and all😆😆
Edited by mansi95 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A novice Writer? R U mad?😕
That was amazing!!!!!
U write better than anyone i know nd hus FF's i've read nd i've read ALOT😳
I thot i was pretty gud but u completely floored me wid this!!!😳👏👏
U shud Defo Write FF's😊
Im still Blushing😳😳😳
It was soo Sweeet,Romantic,Passionate,What we expect 4m Maaneet😆😉
I wish this is shown in Real😊😛
Sara xx😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii
awesome os
loved it
loved maaneet
geet sooo different
loved da ending
sooo hottt
plz do pm me if u write more
thanksss
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: riza792

🤢...I'm breathless , almost dead after that explosive session!

I love Sherni Geet and Helpless Maan!😍😍😍
That was sooo☺️...😍🤢🤢

You want negative points?? I cant find any!😕
I always told you that you'll turn out to be an awesome writer👏...and you are..much more than we expected! Muuuaaah!!
Write more!!😍😍😍

OMG! I almost killed you! 😆 Yay!!!!  Do you know how difficult it is to please you? No no no not 'that way'...😲🤣...I mean with the writing. 😆 Your tolerance level is quite high in certain areas. Blushing😆
 
I would like thank you extra much as you have been one of my biggest supporter all the way through. First pushing me to write more and then always beimg the first one to write your comments after every update. 🤗  Love you darling!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mechantefille

babe ur anything but a novice writer. that was fantastic and definitely worth the wait!

Thanks Amruta! 😳
I'm so happy that you found the update worth the wait. 🤗