OMG Mona, you are killing me, I got your PM and very eagerly started reading it in the office, can you imagine my condition, I can hardly breathe. I read all the parts together, thank God for small mercies I wouldn't be able to take the suspense or not reading it all.
I only hope no one walks into my office or I won't be able to utter a single coherent sentence.
I really truly loved it, I visualized the whole scene while reading and quite graphically I must admit ☺️ Your description was so vivid that I couldn't help but get lost in their world.
I loved that you showed Geet take the initiative, loved to see Maan dance like a puppet to her music.
Here's a big hug from me 🤗 and BTW I still can't breathe properly and my face is all red and flushed ☺️
OK my last comment in Marathi; "Tujhi OS vachoon majhi ashi haalat zaali aahe ki kai bolu, ghari jaaon parath vachnar aahe. Tu aata laukar doosri OS livaila shuruvat kar, mala vachnyachi ghai zali aahe. Tu pharach chan lihite, me aata diwas bhar thonda var ek motthi smile gehoon phirnar aahe. Me aaj Mantra Mukhth zaali" 😉
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