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FF - Mystery of Mrs.MSK Thread#1 | Part 1 to 27 (Page 96)

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
i cant wait for the next part, he is going to stop her right? thanks for the PM.

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nihatri IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
solve the mystery about geet yaar

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
arey yaar...atleast give some strong clue...itna tadapao math am not intelegent as jugnu multi vitamin also

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Part 21

M: (st) ye mein kya soch raha hu? I don't even know who she is...phir ye kaise ehsaas hai.

Geet realises what she is doing

G: (st) geet! ye tum kya kar rahi ho? Maan ko akele chodkar tum yesa kaise jaa sakhi ho? Don't you remember your promise? You are such a selfish geet!

Geet stops at the gate. Maan notices that and he is relieved. But he didn't even realise his relief

Geet turns towards maan who is staring at her.

M: (st) why she has stopped?

Geet wipes her tears

G: (st) no... i won't go away from my maan

Geet walks towards maan. maan's heart skips a beat.

M: (st) is she really coming back?

Geet comes close to maan and stands in front of him. She looks into his eyes and says

G: maan! I won't go anywhere

Maan don't know how to react. He remains silent

Geet is surprised by his silence

G: (st) what happened to him? Why is he not protesting?

Maan composes himself

M: (st) maan! Don't heed to your emotions. Now listen to your brain.

He goes back to MSK mode

M: get out geet

Geet ignores him and starts to walk towards the mansion. Maan is irritated by her act and he has lost his cool. Maan grabs her left arm and pulls her close to him

M: geet! Don't mess with me

G: maan! Ek minute meri haath chodiye

M: kyun?

G: don't you care about your feet?

M: (confused) kya?

G: see maan! I am still carrying these bags. if you want to save your poor feet from these killer bags, now please leave my arm

Maan thinks that she tries to run into the mansion. So he ignores her warning and he drags her towards the gate. geet is loosing her grip on her bags. she throws the bags to some distance so as to prevent them from falling on maan's feet again. Maan didn't notice it. geet tries to pulls her arm out of his grip.

G: maan! Ab mera haath chodiye

Maan tightens his grip and squeezes her arm

G: maan! Mujhe dard horahi hai

Maan is so desperate to send her out of the mansion. So he couldn't hear any of her words. He is still dragging her towards the gate

G: maan! Aap ne suna nahi maine kya kaha? Sach mein mujhe dard horahi hai maan

Maan didn't loose his grip even a bit. A tear drop escapes geet's eyes and falls on maan's hand which is grabbing geet's arm tightly. this brings him back to his senses. He looks into geet's tearful eyes and he immediately releases her arm from his grip. Geet is relieved.

Maan curses himself

M: (st) maan! Why are you behaving so rudely with her? she is hurt maan. Just few minutes back she cried for you when your foot was hurt. But what are you doing to her in return?

Geet's arm has become red. She starts to blow into her arm and carases it gently. Maan notices that and he feels bad for her. maan calls her in a hesitant voice

M: geeth!

G: haan maan

Maan is surprised by her reply

M: (st) is she not angry with me for this?

Geet looks up and notices maan's worried face

G: (st) is he feeling bad for me?

She wipes out her tears. maan notices this. she tries to cheer up him

G: maan! How many bones are there in my arm?

M: (confused) kya?

G: just now you were trying to count them by squeezing my arm. Hena?

Maan feels guilty for his act and he stumbles and tries to apologise to her

M: geet! i am sor...

She didn't want him to apologise to her. so she cuts his words short.

G: chup bilkul chup


G: now tell me how many bones?

He again tries to apologise to her

M: geet...wo...wo...i am...

Geet againg cuts his words short

G: kya geet...wo...wo...i am? Didn't you count properly?

G: don't you know one, two, three or what?
by her question, maan has almost forgotten about the serious thing happened just now.

M: (amused) kyaaa?

G: kya kyaaa? Do you know it or not?

Maan rolls his eyes

M: (st) ye geet bhi na? She is impossible

G: why are you silent? Iska don't know one, two, three. Hena?

M: (sarcastically) haan

G: kya? Maan Singh Khurana doesn't know one, two, three? I can't believe this

Maan is starring at her without blinking his eyes (bechara how can he blinkROFL)

G: wo chodiye! Now let me ask you another question

Maan lifts his eye brow questioningly

G: do you know four, five, six atleast?

M: (st) ye ladki sach mein pagal hai

G: kya hua maan? Don't you know this too?

M: geeettt!!!

G: teek hai. You don't know four, five, six either. Chodiye...ab ye batayiye Do you know seven, eight, nine?

M: tum koi nursery school me teacher hai kya?

G: don't change the topic. Now tell me... do you know seven, eight, nine or not?

M: (sarcastically) nahi

G: teek hai. now let me ask you an important question

M: hmm

G: are you really the Managing Director of Khurana Constructions?

M: hmm

G: par kaise?

M: geeettt!!!

G: don't shout. Everyone is thinking that Maan Singh Khurana knows everything. But you dont' even know one, two, three. Above all these, a few minutes back, you created a scene as if i don't know anything about M.S. Dhoni

Maan is shocked at the mention of M.S. Dhoni's name itself

M: (st) is she again going to start MSD's biography or what?

Geet reads his face and understands what is going on in his mind. She controls her laughter with lot of difficulty. She starts to tease him

G: Mahendra Singh Dhoni was born on July 7, 1981 in Ranchi...

Maan is terrified and he almost screams

M: geet! aage math bolo

Geet bursts out into laughter. Maan is lost in her laughter. After some time geet stops and maan comes out of the trance

G: maan! Now i am going to reveal the secret to everyone

Maan is excited that geet is talking about the secret on their so called marrige

M: haan jaldi bolo geet

G: itna jaldi kya hai maan! Wait kejiyena

M: geet bolo..abhi

G: first let me call everyone

M: first tell that to me

G: teek hai. Now come close to me

Maan is so desparate to know the truth about the so called marriage and geet's drama. So he leans towards geet. geet whispers in maan's ears...

G: wo kya hena...Maan Singh Khurana doesn't know one, two, there, four, five, six, seven, eight and nine

Hearing what geet said, Maan is super duper disappointed and he grinds his teeth

M: geeettt!!!!

G: why are you shouting? Ye secret nahi hai kya?


G: agar ye secret nahi hai tho iska matlab... everyone knows that Maan Singh Khurana doesn't know one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight and nine. Hena?

Now maan literally hits his head with his hand. Geet notices his gesture. She smiles and admires him and she is lost in some thoughts

G: (st) maan is hitting his head with his hand like a baby. he is such a cute kid. Who can resist this cuteness? That is why she was always thinking about maan. She had missed him a lot. Poor soul. Hena babaji?

Maan notices that geet is lost in some thought

M: geet! tum yesa kya soch rahi ho?

Geet comes out of her thoughts and fumbles

G: wo...maan...

M:(st) achanak ye geet ko kya hogya?

Geet is still upset. Maan is disturbed by the sudden change in her mood. He tries to lighten the moment

M: geet!


M: now let me ask you one question

Geet is worried

G: (st) hey babaji! Is he going to ask about my self thought? Ab mein kya karu?

Geet is looking at maan with a worried face

M: geet! do you know one four three? (thank God! atleast we are geeting 143s in this FFBig smile)

Geet couldn't believe her own ears.Geet is super duper surprised at maan's question. She is looking at him with her mouth wide opened

M: tum yesa muv kolkar kya dekh rahi ho? Do you know it or not?

G: (St) baabaaajiii! Is he really Maan Singh Khurana? I can't believe this. (geet! we too can't believe thisEmbarrassed)

M: geet! i am waiting

Geet knows what one four three means. But she lies

G: nahi maan

M: oh...really?

Geet makes a baby face and says

G: haan maan! Mein sach me sach keh rahi hu. Won't you trust this also?

M: ...

G: i know one hundred and forty three only. But never heard of this one four three. Iska matlab kya hota hai maan?

M: i hate you

(OMG!!!! In MSK's dictionary 143 means 'I Hate You'. What an interpretation!  Buddies please don't mistake my 143s to you for MSK's 143.  In my dictionary 143 means ' I Love You' only. I swear. Please trust me buddiesBig smile)

Geet understands what he says. But she didn't take it seriouly

G: what? Do you hate me just for having asked this doubt? It's not fair maan

M:wo nahi hai geet!

G:wo nahi hai don't hate me. Hena?

Maan doesn't know what to reply. So he goes mute

(Oye! MSK why are you being silent? you hate women. Have you forgotten this also? Buddies, i am 200% sure. MSK is definitely having some short term memory loss problem.ROFL)

G: (st) what happened to him?

(geet! tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha. MSK has short term memory loss problemCryCry)

Maan composes himself and goes to MSK mode and says in a cold voice

M: i hate you

As soon as he said it, he himself is hurt by his words. But Geet ignores his words and says casually

G: teek hai. One four three maan (she means ' I love you')

Maan is shocked.

M: (st) does she hate me? or is she saying I love you to me?

Geet tries to read his face and asks him with fake innocence

G: kya hua maan?

M: (stumbles) wo...geet...wo 143...

G: haan wo 143 ko kya hua maan? Aage bhi boliyena

M: geet! 143 ka matlab ' i hate you' nahi hai

G: phir?

M: wo...wo...

G: 143 ka matlab "wo...wo..." hotha hai kya?

M: wo nahi

G: kya? wo nahi???  Phir 143 ka matlab sirf  "wo..." hotha hai kya?

M: wo bhi nahi

G: kya? wo bhi nahi? Phir 143 ka matlab dash hotha hai kya?

Maan has lost his patience and he blurts

M: I love you

Geet's heart skips a beat.(why just skips a beat? It almost stops) She looks into his eyes. Maan couldn't believe that he just said I Love You

M: (stumbles) wo geet... wo mera matlab hai...143 ka matlab hai...i love you hai

Geet is still looking into his eyes. He too looks into her eyes. So here starts " Mahiii...Mahiii" eyelock. After few seconds maan comes out of the trance and breaks the eyelock

M: (st) maan! Why are you behaving like a stupid? Have you forgotten that you are Maan Singh Khurana? Bolo maan!                                                         

(wow... Great going maan! You only can ask such brilliant questionsThumbs Up)

Geet too comes out of the trance

G: (st) geet! tum pagal hogayi kya? what is there to cheer about his ' I Love You'? You know very well na...he didn't mean it. He was just saying the meaning of 143. Ab tumari ye wild imagination ko ban karo

maan checks his watch. It is almost 11.45pm

M: (st) it is almost 11.45 pm. How can she leave the mansion at this time? I must let her stay here atleast for tonight. Tomorrow morning i can send her out

(OMG!!!! What Chandu said is 100% correct. MSK never hates women during night timeROFL)

M: geet! bohat raat chuki hai. Ab andhar aao

Geet is too surprised to react. She keeps on starring at him

M:  Tum yesa kya dekh rahi ho? Ab andhar aao

G: (st) is he allowing me to be with him forever? but, suddenly what happened to him?

M: geet! tumne suna nahi meine kya kaha? Ab aajao mere saath

Saying this maan walks towards the mansion.

G: shukriya babaji

Geet follows maan. On the way, she picks the bags which she threw some time back when maan was dragging her out. Maan stops and turns around and notices that geet is carrying all those heavy bags. maan remembers how he sqeezed her arm.

M: (st) her arm must be aching? how can she carry these bags?

maan comes back to geet and takes all those bags from her hand forcibly.

Geet is more surprised

G: (st) ye achnak inko kya ho gaya?

Maan again starts to walk carrying geet's bags.

She remembers about his foot injury. Not wanting to trouble him, she runs behind him and says

G: maan! Give me those bags

Maan is walking silently

G: maan! Give them to me

M: (sarcastically) kyun? Are you going to drop them again on my feet or what?

G: yesa nahi hai maan

M: nahi na?...ab chup chap aajao mere sath

She follows him silently

Edited by tonyahk - 26 May 2011 at 11:30am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged

great update. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged
awesome n hilarious update dear

love it to the core

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
lovely one pls give us sm hint in upcoming one plsss
adn compeele the mini 's seesion also i mean wriitn by mrinalini we wann that to be ocmplted plsss

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