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FF - Mystery of Mrs.MSK Thread#1 | Part 1 to 27 (Page 92)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
great update dear
loved it
update soon

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Finally got up with the updates ...

ll comment later in my style Wink

Part 15 - 19

Beautiful parts ...loved it!!!


143 Buddy

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
awesome part...
loved it..
continue soon...

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Hi buddies,

Thank you so much for your comments. Most of you have asked me to reveal something about geet. i have given some clues in this update also. in the upcoming updates we will come to know something about geet from maan's point of view. before revealing the mystery, i have planned many things to happen between maaneet...so pleassseee wait for the story to unfold buddies... hope you will bear with me. Until the mystery is revealed please keep posting your wonderful predictions sweethearts...143...Tonya

 

Part 20                      

M: (shouts) geet! Rukh jao

Geet stops. Maan gets up from the ground and walks to her.

M: geet! Now get out of the mansion

G: why should i?

M: you are not my wife

G: but you are my husband

M: what is your plan geet? Why are you doing this drama? What is the proof that you and i are married?

G: maan! do you need any proof for our love?

M: stop it geet! Don't play with words

G: you don't play with our life maan

M: geet! Between you and me, there is no such thing called 'our life'. You are just a stranger to me. That is it. Samji tum?

G: but you are not a stranger to me maan. I know you since my...

Geet realises what she was about to say and she stops in the middle. She is shocked and covers her mouth with her hand

G: (st) hey babaji! ye meine kya karni wali thi? If maan comes to know about it, then what will happen? Geet! tum bhi na? bolne ke pehle kabhi soch nahi karthi ho

Maan notices her shocked face and he is confused by her sudden silence

M: aage bolo geet! What were you saying?

G: wo...wo...kuch nahi maan

M: no geet! you were saying something like you know me since your...

G: nahi nahi meine yesa kuch nahi kaha

M: (st) what is she trying to hide from me?

G: (st) babaji! Mujhe madad karna

M: geet! don't try to fool me. You said that

Geet tries to divert the conversation

G: chodiye maan! If say i that, are you going to trust me or what? Since yesterday, you didn't trust any of my words. Then why are you so concerned about what i was about to say a few minutes back?

Maan is speechless by her question

M: (st) she is right maan! You yourself know very well whatever she says is a lie only. Then why are you giving unnecessary attention to her words? Don't care about her words. Now just send her out of the mansion

Geet is keenly observing his changing expressions

G: (st) what is he thinking? Is he suspecting my words?

Maan comes out of his thoughts and says in a cold voice

M: geet! ab bahar niklo

G: no maan! I won't go away from you

M: listen geet! i hate women. I don't want any woman in my life. Now get lost from my life

Geet bursts out into tears

G: kya kaha aap ne? Should i get lost from your life?

Maan is hurt by her tears

Geet couldn't control her emotions and she keeps on talking even without realising what she is talking

G: maan aap ki zindagi meri zindagi hai. how can you so easily ask me to walk out of your life? Please don't do this to me maan

Maan is speechless. He couldn't understand what is happening to him.

G: maan! you always think about you only. You never think about other's problem. Without knowing other people's side of the story you are always jumping into conclusions and taking wrong decisions. Till date you didn't change even a bit.

M: (st) what is she talking about?

G: ek aur baath bhi sun lejiye! You may not need me in your life. But I need you maan. You are my life. I can't live with out you. Samji hai aap?

Geet words..." i need you maan. You are my life" echoes in his ears. his heart beats quicken

G: Have you ever thought about me? How can i live with out you? Boliyena maan!

M: (st) why i am not able to say anything to her? does she really love me?

Geet realises what she was talking for all these time and she is shocked

G: (st) ye mujhe kya hogaya? Why i am telling all these things to him? Do i expect him to love me in return? Am i becoming a selfish? Why i expect him to think about my life? Where did the question of my life arise from? Instead of thinking about his happiness, have i started to think about my happiness? Nahi geet! ye galat hai. Don't expect anything from maan

M: (st) why i am having a feeling that her words are from her heart? Why it seems to me that her tears are true?

Maan realises what he is just thinking and closes his eyes in frustration

M: (st) what happened to you maan? Why are you giving so much importance to her words? You know na...she is lying. Then why are you getting confused? Don't trust her maan.

Geet is silently watching him. Maan says in a stern voice

M: enough of your lies. ab bahar niklo

Though Geet expected this from him, she couldn't take it. She didn't know what to do. Tears roll down her cheeks. She turns and silently walks towards the gate to leave the mansion

Maan didn't expect this from her. he is startled. He is silently staring at her leaving. Geet has almost reached the gate.

M: is she really leaving me?

Maan didn't know why he said that

M: (st) ye mein kya soch raha hu? I don't even know who she is...phir ye kaise ehsaas hai.

 
 
buddies, if possible i'll post the next part tonight. please let me know your views about this part...143


Edited by tonyahk - 26 May 2011 at 6:58am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
[<:-p] yipee!!!! [<:-p]
m 1st... Big smile
wOw!!! geet is such a gud wrd plyr... she cn confuse ne1... LOL
wt is she hidin????
mainly Y???? Unhappy
its such a mystery...
hw cn geet leave maan Broken Heart
hope geet cum bck soon ...
cont soon...
w8in... Smile

Edited by DILKASHII - 26 May 2011 at 5:15am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
oh no...
why she is leaving, hope she has some excuse to stay...Maan doesnt seems the one who will stop her

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
oh tonya 
nw im in jugnu mama detective mood
hmmm hmmm
nw i think geet is d girl jugnu mama was talking abt tht day 
of maans past
when maan got angry n left d house
bt otherwise awesomeee
n geet tusi na jaooo

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awesome ... 

thnx 4 d pm ... continue soon ...


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