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FF - Mystery of Mrs.MSK Thread#1 | Part 1 to 27 (Page 91)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Amazing! update soon.

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

Hi buddies,

Thank you so much for appreciating my senti updates also. Your comments really help me to improve this FF. So please let me know what you feel about this update. If possible, i'll post part  13 today itself...143...Tonya

 

Part 12

M: chandu! Tum kya soch raha ho? Do you want to ask me something?

Chandu: ji

M: pucho

Chandu is too scared to use his brain. So he asks a dangerous question...

Chandu:  sir, aap ki biwi kahan hai?

Maan looks at chandu as if he is going to kill him right now

Before maan could say anything, annie interferes and says in a warning tone

Annie: chandu! Better behave yourself. Maan bhai doesn't have any wife

Chandu: phir, geet madam kaun hai?

Maan sits and he is silently watching chandu, thinking how far chandu can go...

Annie: ye hi tho sirf bhagvan ne malum hai ki wo ladki kaun hai?

Chandu: I too know who geet madam is?

All including  maan, dadi and jugnu mama are surprised and curious to know who geet is. Maan almost jumps from his chair

M:chandu! Do you really know who geet is?

Chandu: ji sir

Maan is relieved that at last he can get some information about geet and her intentions

M: chandu! Ab jaldi se batao ki ye geet kaun hai?

Chandu thinks that maan is again trying to create a scene as if he doesn't know geet

Chandu: (st) ye maan sirbhi na? Ye tho bothat bada actor hai. Unko zarur Oscar award dena hi padega. just now he was romancing with geet madam. But now in front of everyone, he acts as if he has never seen geet madam in his entire life. Now i've to reveal to everyone about his double act

Maan and others are eagerly waiting for chandu's answer

M: chandu! I'm waiting. Ab jawab do

Chandu: sir, what did you ask?

Maan rolls his eyes and repeats his question

M: geet kaun hai?

Chandu: aap ki biwi hai   (wow!!!... Chandu bhaiya what a discovery!!!!... Keep it up)

All including maan are shocked by chandu's reply

M: kya?

Chandu: haan sir. Geet madam is your wife

(OMG!!!!... Oye! chandu bhaiya where are you getting all this courage from? Please remember yaar, you are talking with Murder Singh Khurana)

Maan feels like killing chandu right now but he controls his anger

M:(sarcastically) acha. chandu are you sure that geet is my wife?

Chandu: 200% sir. Just now i confirmed it for myself

Maan's gussa meter is increasing at jet speed. All others are silently watching Maandu's conversations

M: (sarcastically)chandu! Can you please tell me from where you got this confirmation?

Chandu: from your bedroom

M:(shocked) kya?

Chandu: haan sir. In your bed room, you and geet madam were...

Suddenly chandu's brain starts working. So he stops in the middle.

Chandu:(st) how could i tell, maan sir's romance so publicly?

At the same time, geet passes by the breakfast table and she is stopped by chandu's words

G:(st) yaha kya horaha hai? Is chandu bhaiya trying to tell about the argument between maan and me?

Geet stands at some distance away from the breakfast table and listens to the conversation between maandu. Maan and others didn't notice geet's presence.

Dev: (st) this chandu is a useless person. He can't say anything properly. Donno, what bro was doing with that geet in his bed room?

M: aage bolo chandu

Chandu: you and geet madam were...

Geet is eagerly waiting to hear what chandu is going to say...

Maan too misunderstands that chandu is trying to tell about the argument he had with geet in his bedroom.

M: (st) when chandu was knocking at my room door, he must have listened to my argument with geet. That is what he is trying to tell. Hena?

M: chandu! Do you know what happened in my room?

Chandu is super duper embarrassed by maan's question and he starts blushing like anything. Maan is hell confused by chandu's blushing. All others including geet are looking at maandu with lot of confusion

M:(sarcastically) chandu! Why are you blushing like a newly-wed bride? Ab jawab do

Chandu is still blushing

Maan rolls his eyes and shouts

M: chandu! Ab tumari ye bakwas ban karo

Chandu is really having a hard time in controlling his imagination about maan's romantic dialogues. He doesn't realise what he is doing. So he keeps on blushing and smiling weirdly

Maan is exhausted by chandu's non-stop blushing and his weird smile.

M: (st) patha nahi, ye chandu ko kya hogaya? He too must be admitted in a mental hospital along with geet. Mujhe lagtha hai ki ye geet ne ek hi din me puri khurana family ko pagal kardiya. She must be the sole manufacturer and wholesale supplier of mad people to all the 930 mental hospitals in delhi. Bilkul pagal ladki hai wo.

Maan's  funny thought about geet brings a smile on his face. He doesn't realise what he is doing. So he starts to smile. Geet notice maan's smile and she is happy. Immediately she too starts smiling

G: (st) when maan smiles, he is looking too cute. Hey Babaji!  Sirf ek hi guzarish hai. Always keep my maan happy and please never let his smile to die down

 Dadi, jugnu mama, dev and annie are confused by chandu's blushing and maan's smile in response to that.

Dadi: hey bagavan! What is happening between Maan and Chandu?

Annie: dev bhai! Why maan bhai is smiling at chandu?

Dev: pata nai annie. I think, because of that geet fiasco bro has gone bonkers

Jugnu: maan beta! Tum teek tho hena?

Maan didn't even hear jugnu mama's question and he keeps on smiling at chandu.

Chadnu notices the smile on maan's face and he thinks that maan is still lost in his lala land with geet. Now chandu goes to the dream world and imagines that maan is romancing geet with the BG score  "pee loon" song. Chandu's excitement goes out of bounds and he couldn't control himself. He literally starts singing the pee loon song in a loud voice

Pee Loon Tere Neele Neele Naino Se Shabnam,
Pee Loon Tere Geele Geele Honto ki Sargam,
Pee Loon Hai Peene Ka Musam,

Maan is still in trance. Maan didn't realise that chandu is staring at him and singing a romantic song. Maan is still smiling.

This time, Geet is also shocked by chandu's song and maan's soft reaction to that

G:(st) Is there any dostana going between maan and chandu bhaiya? Chi chi babaji!!!

Dadi and others are almost fainting because of the happenings between maandu.

Dadi holds her heart and says: ye kya ho raha hai? mujhe chakar aa rahi hai

Jugnu: mujhe bhi maaji

Dev and annie didn't know what is happening

Chandu keeps on singing at a very high pitch and maan is still in trance and he keeps on smiling...

Tere Sang Ishq Karni hai,
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai,
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko,
Tere Sang Bekarari hai...

Jugnu:  maaji! I think something fishy is going on between maan and chandu. That is why maan is not accepting geet as his wife.

Hearing what jugnu mama said, geet couldn't control herself. She bursts out into laughter. Geet's laughter brings maan back to this world. Chandu also stops singing.

Maan and others are turning towards geet. She is still laughing out loud holding her stomach tight. Maan is lost in her laughter.

G:(controls her laughter and says loudly) Mamaji! What did you say? Maan Singh Khurana is in dostana with Chandu bhaiya. That is why he is not accepting me as his wife.  Hey babaji!!! (she again bursts out into laughter)

Maan didn't even realise what she is talking. He keeps on staring at her and he is still lost in her laughter.

 
 
Superb writting...you made me laugh like crazy today...superb writting skill yaar...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
I have a lot of catching up to do lol
will be back after reading last couple of parts lol

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
poor maan nd his his foot
cant wait 4 more
also very upset (no AK)
con soon with plenty of AK's
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
really nice update, please update again soon and reveal some secrets.please please.

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
ur name is queen of suspense
tonya ur damn good at it


waiting next part
thanks 4 pm
143 buddy

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
awesome part
loved reading it
iam just loving this geet , loved all her dialogues to maan
mainly
kya farak padtha hai maan? aap bhi mera hai-
and maan singh dhoni
waiting for the next part
do continue

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