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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
loved it Tongue
tx for the pm

Geet is Maan's wife and he is not remembering it hmmm Shocked
will wait for the other parts


Edited by zaara2212 - 09 May 2011 at 6:43am

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet

hi Tonya

part 1 was awesome different from all ur other ff
looking forward




hi dear,

thank you so much for the beautiful cards. loved them.

keep reading... few more parts coming up in few minutes


143 dear.

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hey u r back Clap Clap
looking forward for it Embarrassed Wink
i m sure i'll love it as always Smile Smile

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Loved it... Thanx for the PM

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
wow what a start 
lovely
geet maan wife
maan dont know her
pls cont waiting
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Part 3

maan looks at geet angrily and pushes her away from him. geet is startled

G: maan!

M:chup bilkul chup

geet cries silently

M:now get out of this place

G:maan! how can you...

M: bas. ek aur shabd nai

geet becomes silent

On the other side the bride is also crying. The bride's father has lost his trust on maan and he starts to accuse maan of cheating both geet and his own daughter. dadi tries to convince the bride's father. maan couldn't stand it anymore

M:(shouts) stop it

all are becoming silent

M:dadima! ye shaadi nai ho saktha

geet is relieved but all others are shocked

dadi: maan! ye aap kya kehrah hai?

M: dadima! in the beginning itself i refused this marriage. but you only forced me into this. now see what happened. enough! i can't take it anymore

dadi:maan! what do you mean? have you already married this girl? is she telling the truth?

M: stop it dadima! yesa kuch nai hai. i don't know who this girl is. she is lying

G: maan! am i lying?

M: shut up

G:...

M: now listen carefully. i'm saying for the last time that i don't know who you are. don't mess up with me. otherwise you have to face very bad consequences. this is my warning to you. samji tum?

geet is too shocked to react. maan leaves the mandap immediately leaving others shocked. geet is staring at maan's trailing image with tears in her eyes.

 

At Khurana Mansion

 

maan is laying on his bed with his eyes closed. he tries to figure out what just happened in the mandap. he is damn confused

M:(st) ye mujhe kya horah hai? why i myself stopped this wedding. where did she come from? i never wanted to see her again in my life. but why she is crossing my life? what does she expect from me?

maan remembers the scenes of geet's tears, her hug and her words " maan! I love you. i can't live with out you"

maan realises what he is just doing

M:(st) ye maine kya soch raha hu?

maan is frustrated that he couldn't find answer for any of his questions. after few minutes he dosses off.

 

 

after some time...

maan is still sleeping. loud noices keep on comming from the drawing room. he is disturbed by the noice but he couldn't open his eyes. Suddenly he hears geet's scream "maaan...maaan..". maan wakes up from his sleep with a jerk and he utters her name out of reflex "Geet".

he again hears geet's scream,"maaan...maaan...

maan immediately gets up from the bed and runs to the drawing room

 

in the drawing room...

dev is grasping geet's wrist and dragging her outside. maan comes there. but both dev and geet didn't notice maan. geet is still screaming

G: maan...maaann

dev: how dare you to come inside Khurana Mansion? now get out

G:dev! mera haath chodiye

dev: don't call me dev. just get lost

G:ye mera sasural hai. I won't go anywhere. ab mera haath chodiye

dev: now stop your lies

dev squeezes geets arm more. she cries in pain

G:maan! maan!

maan is watching silently.

dev is about to grab geet's hair to hurt her more. maan couldn't stand more than that

M:(shouts) stop it dev

G: maan!

dev is shocked and turns towards maan. hearing maan's shouting, dadima, jugnu mama, anni and chandu all are coming to the drawing room

dev is still holding geet's wrist

dev: bro! ye ladki yahan bhi aa gayi

M:bas dev! ab geet ko chodo

dev immediately releases geet. she runs and hugs maan. he is shocked. dadima and others are confused of what is happening between maaneet. geet is still hugging maan and she is sobbing.

G: maan! i won't go from here. please maan don't send me out

maan is couldn't understand what is happening to him. he is standing like a statue.

G: maan! i have promised that i'll always be with you in your every pain and pleasure. i won't go anywhere

geet cries more. maan's shirt has become wet because of her tears.

Without realising what he is doing, maan raises his arms to hug geet back and to soothe her. When he is about touch her back he realises what he is trying to do and he stops in the middle. dadima and others didn't fail to notice maan's act. now they are more confused. geet is still crying leaning on maan's chest. so she didn't know what maan tried to do just now.

M:(st)ye mein kya karne ke koshish kar raha hu? ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi

maan is frustrated at his own act and he immediately pushes geet away from him. geet is shocked

G:maan!!!

M: get out

G:please maan...

M:tumne suna nai maine kya kaha? get out

G:maan! i want to be with you. i won't go anywhere

maan throws geet an angry look and turns his back to her. geet is shocked





Edited by tonyahk - 25 May 2011 at 3:43am

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
awesome
do continue soon 143 :)

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
i cudnt stop laughing at this dramatic part
god ur gr8 in writing comedy...as well as normal stuff(i am telling normal bcoz of intro)

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