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FF - Mystery of Mrs.MSK Thread#1 | Part 1 to 27 (Page 23)

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

I know i'm very late but Congratulations on ur new FFDancing

wonderful story-line,entirely on a different node!!!Thumbs Up

loved it...all 8 parts were Brilliant!!!Clap

But whether Maaneet are really married,if so then y can't Maan remember anything,Confused

whether Maan has become FF ghajini???

ab Maaneet Ak chod kar,fingre bites ki peeche padi haiLOLLOL

thanks for the PMTongue

143 BuddyHug
 
 
 
hi dia,
 
are you back? yipppeee!!!!
 
143 dear


Edited by tonyahk - 12 May 2011 at 11:44am

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

I know i'm very late but Congratulations on ur new FFDancing

wonderful story-line,entirely on a different node!!!Thumbs Up

loved it...all 8 parts were Brilliant!!!Clap

But whether Maaneet are really married,if so then y can't Maan remember anything,Confused

whether Maan has become FF ghajini???

ab Maaneet Ak chod kar,fingre bites ki peeche padi haiLOLLOL

thanks for the PMTongue

143 BuddyHug
 
 
hi Dia,
 
are you back? yipppeee!!!
 
whenever and whereever i see your posts, all i could remember is Jugnu mama's bhangra. OMG!!! that was too funny to forget. you know what?... the other day i was watching the SBS segment in which Maaneet were dancing for the patiala song. immediately my eyes started to search for Jugnu mama and i found him dancing in the background . suddenly your graphic about jugnu mama's bhangra came to my mind and i was laughing like anything.ROFL thanks buddy for that funny post.
 
 
thank you so much for your greetings dear.
 
143
 
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
awesomeee superbbb
loved it
do continue soon

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tonyahk

 
hi Teja,
 
don't worry about my heart dear. you  please go ahead with you stupid and silly comments about my stupid and silly updatesROFL. for your killer comments i can even withstand few heartattacks and keep myself alive...143 sweetheart
 



i will do by best to keep up to u dear...Wink
luv u tonya
and where is next update yaar...its really long time waiting...
omg...wat  will happen to me if i wait like this...CryWink

luv u
ur tejaSmile

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged

Hi buddies,

Sorry for this late update... was lil bit busy. I have read all your comments and loved them very much. Thank you so much. To some of the comments i have given my reply. Sorry for my inability to reply to each and every comment individually. Please bear with me buddies.  

 

Regarding this FF, i am trying my best to make it as funny as possible. The original concept of this FF is very serious one. So it will be very easy for me to write senti scenes. But now i'm deliberately avoiding senti scenes because i don't want to spoil the fun we used to have in my other FFs. Even i am thinking of writing both sad and funny version of the " Mystery of Mrs. MSK" simultaneously in two separate threads. But i donno whether i'll get time to do that. So buddies, Please comment on this.

Enjoy the update sweethearts...143..

 

Part 9

M: geet! you know what i'm asking. ab jawab do

G: maan! this is my home

M: geet! Don't try my patience again. Now tell me where your home is

G: in India

M: Now stop your drama

G: maan! It is not drama. Me sach me sach bol rahi hu. Hamara ghar india hi me hai

M:geeettt!!!!

G:  boliye maan

M: geet! Now get out this house

G: what did you say?

M: get out of this house...abhi

G: hey babaji! Iska matlab...should i leave India? But maan! Mera pas passport nai hai. So how can i go out?

M: (sarcastically) passport?

G: ji

M: for leaving Khurana Mansion?

G: ji

Maan rolls his eyes. Geet smirks.

Maan thinks that geet is really a mad and he feels bad for her

M:(st) ye bechari geet tho sach me pagal hai. That is why she is saying that i'm her husband. Donno how she became like this

Geet is silently watching maan's facial expressions

G:(st) what is he thinking so deeply? Is he thinking to send me out of India itself?

M: (st) has she escaped from a mental hospital?  i must help her to get back there

G:maan! Aap kya soch rahe hai

Maan is looking at geet compassionately

G:kya hua maan? Aap mujhe yesa kyun dekh rahe hai?

M:(says softly) I am sorry geet

G: (confused) kis ke liye maan?

M: i shouldn't have asked you like that geet?

G: like what maan?

M: sorry geet! I have asked you a very wrong question. You must have been hurt by that

G: which question maan?

M: " where is your home?"

G: this is my home maan

M: nai nai geet! You please don't bother to reply for this question.

G:kyun maan?

M: kyunki, i know where you must have come from

G:(st) hey babaji! Has maan found out everything? Ab mein kya karu?

G: where did i come from?

M: Mental Hopital

G: kya? (mouth wide opened)

M:  ab tumara muv ban karo

Geet closes her mouth immediately

M: geet! Now let me rephrase my question

G:???

M: which mental hospital did you escape from?

G: dust danav

M: Dust Danav Mental Hospital...good!! it sounds great

G:wo nai hai maan...

M:(says sarcastically) geet! don't worry about the hospital's name. it doesn't make any difference. At the end of the day, all mental hospitals are mental hospitals only. A perfect place for people like you

 

Geet is staring at him with her jaws dropped.

 

M: acha, ab ek bath patao geet

 

G:???

M: for how long have you been there in that hospital?

 

Geet is fuming internally

M: why are you silent? Have you forgotten it?

G:...

M:acha. if you couldn't recollect it, then it means that you must have been there in that hospital for a very long time. Am i right?

G:...

M: are you missing that hospital?

G:...

M: don't worry geet. Mein hun na

G:(asks sarcastically) where? In mental hopital?

Maan smiles at her question. Geet is shocked.

G: (st) hey babaji! What happened to Maan Singh Khurana? Why is he smiling?

Maan calls adi over phone. Adi in semi-sleep and he attends that call

Adi: hello

M: adi! Mein Maan bol raha hu

Adi: ji sir

Geet is wondering what maan is going to do now

M: how many mental hospitals are there in Delhi?

Adi is looking at the watch, he didn't hear maan's question. Adi reads the time loudly

Adi: 9.30

Maan mistakes that there are 930 Mental Hospitals in Delhi

M: what? 930?

Adi: ji sir. 9.30

Maan whispers in geet's ears: wow...geet. there are 930 Mental Hospitals in Delhi itself. So you have a lot of options

G:(whispers) haan maan! Even you too could easily get an admission in one of those hospitals

M:(whispers) don't worry about me geet. I'll be alright after you leave Khurana Mansion

G:maan! i won't go anywhere

M:geet! Meri bath suno

Maaneet are continuing their whisperings. Since adi is in semi sleep he couldn't understand anything.

Adi:(st) geet? Ye geet kaun hai? Whom maan sir is talking with?

Suddenly yesterday's mandap scenes pops into adi's mind.

Adi:(st)haaan!!! I got it. Geet is Maan sir's so called wife. yesterday maan sir didn't even accept her. But now what he is doing with that girl

Maaneet are still continuing their argument by whispering in each other's ears. Our very smart adi sir mistakes that for romantic whispers and he is shocked

Adi:(st) ye kya horah hai? Maan sir and romance? Iska matlab... what that geet said is true. She is maan sir's wife.

Adi misunderstands that instead of staying in Khurana Mansion, Maan is secretly staying with geet somewhere else without the knowledge of MSK's family members'

Adi:(st) i think, right now, maan sir is secretly staying with his secret wife. Then why did he refuse her claim in the mandap yesterday. Is maan sir scared of dadima? Why is he hiding his marriage from dadima and others? OMG!!!!! Dadima trusts him like anything. But he is doing so many things secretly. Is this the same Maan Singh Khurana? I can't believe this

Finally, Adi comes to a conclusion that maan has really married and living with geet secretly.

On the other hand maaneet have almost forgotten that adi is on the line. maaneet's argument(whispering) is still going on

Adi:(st) i must inform dadima about maan's sir's secret marriage

Immediately, Adi cuts maan's call.

 

Maaneet's argument...

Both are almost exhaused...

G: maan! Finally what do you want?

M: I'll want to send you to the place where you belong (buddies...he means mental hospital)

G: maan! I belong to you only

Maan is dumbstruck by her words. It echoes in his ears. He senses that some unknown feeling is filling his heart. He couldn't understand what it is.

M: (st) ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? Ye kaisa ehsaas hai?

 
thanks for reading buddies. let me continue later


Edited by tonyahk - 25 May 2011 at 4:01am

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
me first
i think inhe
kahin jaane ki jarrurat nahi hai
ab jaldi hi
khurana house
bhi mental asylum ban jaayega


Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 May 2011 at 11:37pm

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
first of all congrats for ur rank in civils... ALL THE BEST 4 UR FUTURE



n secondly nice n funny...
hey iam ready 4 ur serious version also as long as maaneet r together...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

me first
i think inhe
kahin jaane ki jarrurat nahi hai
ab jaldi hi
khurana house
bhi mental asylum ban jaayega
 
omg!!!!! Khurana Mansion Mental asylmROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL. yes definitely it will.
 
hey thank you so much for this killer dear.
 
i can't stop laughing.
 
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