G: mmm...mm...mmm...
Chandu: (st) ye tho geet madam ki awaz hai. What happened to her?
M:geet! Tum teek tho hena?G:maan! Mera haath chodiye
M:nai chodunga
Chandu: (st) i think some romantic scene is going on inside.G:please maan! Ab mujhe jane deejiye
M:nai tho?
maan...do u know wat chandu is thinking...continue yaar..let him think so...π
M: nai geet! Meine kaha thana ki mein tume nai chodunga. Until i get what i want, this door will not be opened
maan if u do like this u can never open that door...π
Chandu:(st) sirf ek hi raat me maan sir itna romantic hogaye!!! Par kaise?... Iska matlab... geet madam is maan sir's wife. Hena?
mujhe bhi yahi doubt hai chanduπ
Dadi: chandu! Are maan and geet coming?
Chandu: nai dadima. They won't comeπ
Chandu: kyunki...they are busy with some important workHi buddies,
Thank you so much for your lovely and hilarious comments. This part is very serious one. But it is necessary for the story. Please Don't be upset. Good times are coming soon. Your frank criticisms are welcome. So please let me know how you feel about this part.
143 sweethearts...
Tonya
Part 11
Dadi: chandu! Aap yesa kya soch rahe hai? Jawab deejiye
Chandu: nai dadima i don't think they are fighting
Dadi: phir?
Chandu: (st) ye mein kaise batatu?
@maaneet room
Geet is tired of arguing with maan. She takes a deep breath and sits next to him on the bed
G: teek hai maan! I am not going anywhere. Ab mera haath chodiye
Maan releases her hand and smirks
G: ab boliye! What do you want to know from me?
M: don't you remember my questions?
G: no. Why don't you please repeat them?
M: who are you? Where did you come from? Why are you doing all these drama? What do you want from me?
G:I'm your wife. I came from my maika. I am not doing any drama. I don't want anything from you except your love
Geet's last sentence " i don't want anything from you except your love" echoes in his ears. He looks into her eyes. His heart beat quickens. He couldn't understand what is happening to him.
M: what this girl is doing to me? Mujhe yesa kyun ho raha hai?
After a few seconds, Maan comes out of the trance and goes back to MSK mode
M:(st) Yesa kuch nai ho saktha. Kyunki Maan Singh Khurana ko nafrat hai emotions se
Geet is silently starring at him
G:(st) what is he thinking about?
Maan is still looking away from geet and he asks in a cold voice
M: Who are you?
Geet senses the extra coldness in his voice but tries to lighten the situation
G: maan! Aap bhi na? Phir se shru? Mein aap ka biwi hu
Maan turns towards her and gives a stern look
M: ab tumari ye natak ban karo
G: maan!...
M: chup
G:...
M: now get out of this house
Geet tries to tell him about dadima's permission for her stay in Khurana Mansion for 3 months
G: maan! 3 months...
Maan misunderstands that geet is about to lie that she is 3 months pregnant. He cuts her short and says sarcastically
M: oho! ye tumari naya drama hai
Geet thinks that maan is also talking about dadima's permission
G: maan! I'm not lying. This is the truth
M: ab muje samaj aa gaya. Women like you will go to any extent to achieve their ulterior motives
G: (confused)
M: if you need money you can earn it in many honest ways. Why are you doing such cheap things?
G: (shocked)
M: being a girl, don't you feel ashamed to do all these cheap things?
Geet: (dumbstruck)
M: i know your intentions very well. Since i'am a rich man, you are doing all these drama for money
Tears start to roll down from geet's eyes. Maan notices her tears and feels bad for her. But with in a fraction of a second he reverts back to MSK mode and continues his harsh talk...
M: now why are you crying? Are you worried that your plan didn't work out with Maan Singh Khurana?
Geet is crying more. Maan couldn't stand her tears. But he is too angry to even realise that her tears are hurting him.
M: your fake tears cannot do anything to me. Maan Singh Khurana hates emotions. Samji tum?
Geet wipes her tears immediately. Maan's is relieved. But his anger overcomes all his other emotions
M: 3 days...just wait for 3 days. i myself will find out your entire history and kick you out of this house. Better be prepared for that
Saying this maan walks out of the room leaving Geet startled. Maan words are echoing in geet's ears and tears roll down from her eyes
G:(st) maan! I already knew that you will not treat me well. After knowing this also, i decided to fulfil my promise and i have come here for the sake of your happiness. Though I was prepared for this kind of humiliations, now your words are hurting me to the core. I donno why? Maan! I want to go away from you forever ...forever
Geet realises what she just said and she is shocked by her own words
G:(st) ye mujhe kya hogaya? Why am I thinking so selfishly? Why am i thinking of leaving maan?Hey babaji! I should never be thinking of leaving maan. It doesn't matter how bad he treats me. I am ready to tolerate everything for his happiness.. i'll be with him forever. It's my promise
Geet wipes her tears and leaves for the drawing room
@ the breakfast table
Dadi: chandu why are you silent? Ab boliye! What maan and geet are doing there?
Chandu: wo dadima...wo...
Jugnu: oye aage bolo chandu
Chandu: mamaji!!! maan sir ne geet madam ke sath...
Dev and anni are wondering what maan is doing with geet
Dadi: geet ke sath? Aage boliye chandu
When chandu is about to say something, maan comes there. As soon as seeing maan, chandu's mouth closes automatically. But chandu dares to give maan some weird looks. Maan who is already mad at geet, is annoyed by chandu's weird looks. So maan gives chandu a murderous look and there starts the maahiii...maahiii eyelock between Maan and Chandu.
(omg!!! What am i doing?... I'm using Maaneet's BG score for maandu (maan+chandu = maandu) eyelock... Buddies! For this sin, you can kill me right now...lol...)
M:(asks in stern voice)chandu! Tum yesa kyun dekh raha ho?
Chandu is scared and he didn't know what to answer.
M: chandu! Tum kya soch raha ho? Do you want to ask me something?
Chandu: ji
M: pucho
Chandu is too scared to use his brain. So he asks a dangerous question...
Chandu: sir, aap ki biwi kahan hai?
Edited by tonyahk - 12 years ago