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Originally posted by: naamteeg
Dramatic and comedic parts are coming together so well, Tonya!It is almost like we are riding the roller coaster ride of Maan and Geet's emotions.😭You made me feel sad for Geet when she walks out and sits outside contemplating Maan's attitude towards her.😊Then you lighten the mood by brining her back to the bedroom with a smile on her face and admiring a sleeping Maan.🤣Then you jump into a comedic scene of them comparing arms and biting each other's fingers.The transition of emotions are great and you are handling them so well.🤣And on a funnier note. Below are a couple of things I noticed for the first time in your SS/FF🤣🤣- "pins her down on the bed"...ahem.. ahem.. Tonya you are getting daring hon🤣- "please click here for next part" 🤣 takes away the pleasure of going through each page looking for your update and stopping to read and enjoy other's comments. I guess it works well on SS but not on FF...I couldn't stay away till the weekend to read your post... see I am so addicted😳 ... now I have to go make some tea to keep myself up to finish some work... it was all worth it! Loving the new FF!
hi dear,
thank you so much for coming before the week end and encouraging me with your comments.
about your funnier note...
OMG!!! you are monitoring my thoughts with an hawk eye...is there any ways to escape from them????
- "pins her down on the bed"...ahem.. ahem.. Tonya you are getting daring hon🤣
hi dear, this pinning down is not a romantic one...but it was an outcome of his anger.
buddy, please remember onething... in PKL whenever Maaneet are in some trouble maan goes to romantic mood... in MMM he may become romantic whenever he is angry...OMG!!! waise bhi...MSK is always angry...that means...he is always romantic...hena?????? oh God please forgive me for confusing naamteeg so much.
"please click here for next part" 🤣 takes away the pleasure of going through each page looking for your update and stopping to read and enjoy other's comments. I guess it works well on SS but not on FF...
yes dear...what you are saying is correct. so i'll restrict myself with the index. because reading this FF without all those hilarious comments will not serve any purpose. the commentators are doing an amazing job and adding more fun to this thread.
all the best for your project dear
143 buddy
Tonya
for the wonderful FF😊
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