FF - Mystery of Mrs.MSK Thread#1 | Part 1 to 27 - Page 17

Originally posted by: tonyahk

 

 

hi teja!

 

thanks for the highlights dear. actually you have done a remix of this FF. OMG!!!! how you picked all these lines? what a selection by you!  when i read these lines one after the other i myself couldn't control my laugh. your remix version of this FF sounds far greater than the original version. you know what... i'm reading this post of yours again and again and killing myself by laughing. thank you so much dear.

 

 

Mystery of Mrs. MSK... remix version by Teja... recipient of Oscar Award👏👏👏...ufff kuch jyada hogaya.🤣

 

as saam said, you people are really doing a great job with your hilarious comments. thanks buddy.

 

 

143...Tonya

Originally posted by: mallu.crowe20

congratulations
and the update was tooo good
do continue

Originally posted by: teju2292

omg tonya...oscar award is really more...😉
but loved it...thank u dear
my remixes will continue dear...dont worry...
the thing which u should worry about is...take care of ur heart..my comments will be like this forever so stupid and silly...ha ha ha🤣

luv u tonya
ur teja😊

don't worry about my heart dear. you  please go ahead with you stupid and silly comments about my stupid and silly updates. for your killer comments i can even withstand few heartattacks and keep myself alive...143 sweetheart

Originally posted by: -dia-

I know i'm very late but Congratulations on ur new FF

wonderful story-line,entirely on a different node!!!👍🏼

loved it...all 8 parts were Brilliant!!!👏

But whether Maaneet are really married,if so then y can't Maan remember anything,😕

whether Maan has become FF ghajini???

ab Maaneet Ak chod kar,fingre bites ki peeche padi hai😆😆

thanks for the PM😛

143 Buddy🤗

 

 

Originally posted by: -dia-

I know i'm very late but Congratulations on ur new FF

wonderful story-line,entirely on a different node!!!👍🏼

loved it...all 8 parts were Brilliant!!!👏

But whether Maaneet are really married,if so then y can't Maan remember anything,😕

whether Maan has become FF ghajini???

ab Maaneet Ak chod kar,fingre bites ki peeche padi hai😆😆

thanks for the PM😛

143 Buddy🤗

Originally posted by: tonyahk

 

hi Teja,

 

don't worry about my heart dear. you  please go ahead with you stupid and silly comments about my stupid and silly updates🤣. for your killer comments i can even withstand few heartattacks and keep myself alive...143 sweetheart

 

Hi buddies,

Sorry for this late update... was lil bit busy. I have read all your comments and loved them very much. Thank you so much. To some of the comments i have given my reply. Sorry for my inability to reply to each and every comment individually. Please bear with me buddies.  

Regarding this FF, i am trying my best to make it as funny as possible. The original concept of this FF is very serious one. So it will be very easy for me to write senti scenes. But now i'm deliberately avoiding senti scenes because i don't want to spoil the fun we used to have in my other FFs. Even i am thinking of writing both sad and funny version of the " Mystery of Mrs. MSK" simultaneously in two separate threads. But i donno whether i'll get time to do that. So buddies, Please comment on this.

Enjoy the update sweethearts...143..

Part 9

M: geet! you know what i'm asking. ab jawab do

G: maan! this is my home

M: geet! Don't try my patience again. Now tell me where your home is

G: in India

M: Now stop your drama

G: maan! It is not drama. Me sach me sach bol rahi hu. Hamara ghar india hi me hai

M:geeettt!!!!

G:  boliye maan

M: geet! Now get out this house

G: what did you say?

M: get out of this house...abhi

G: hey babaji! Iska matlab...should i leave India? But maan! Mera pas passport nai hai. So how can i go out?

M: (sarcastically) passport?

G: ji

M: for leaving Khurana Mansion?

G: ji

Maan rolls his eyes. Geet smirks.

Maan thinks that geet is really a mad and he feels bad for her

M:(st) ye bechari geet tho sach me pagal hai. That is why she is saying that i'm her husband. Donno how she became like this

Geet is silently watching maan's facial expressions

G:(st) what is he thinking so deeply? Is he thinking to send me out of India itself?

M: (st) has she escaped from a mental hospital?  i must help her to get back there

G:maan! Aap kya soch rahe hai

Maan is looking at geet compassionately

G:kya hua maan? Aap mujhe yesa kyun dekh rahe hai?

M:(says softly) I am sorry geet

G: (confused) kis ke liye maan?

M: i shouldn't have asked you like that geet?

G: like what maan?

M: sorry geet! I have asked you a very wrong question. You must have been hurt by that

G: which question maan?

M: " where is your home?"

G: this is my home maan

M: nai nai geet! You please don't bother to reply for this question.

G:kyun maan?

M: kyunki, i know where you must have come from

G:(st) hey babaji! Has maan found out everything? Ab mein kya karu?

G: where did i come from?

M: Mental Hopital

G: kya? (mouth wide opened)

M:  ab tumara muv ban karo

Geet closes her mouth immediately

M: geet! Now let me rephrase my question

G:???

M: which mental hospital did you escape from?

G: dust danav

M: Dust Danav Mental Hospital...good!! it sounds great

G:wo nai hai maan...

M:(says sarcastically) geet! don't worry about the hospital's name. it doesn't make any difference. At the end of the day, all mental hospitals are mental hospitals only. A perfect place for people like you

Geet is staring at him with her jaws dropped.

M: acha, ab ek bath patao geet

G:???

M: for how long have you been there in that hospital?

Geet is fuming internally

M: why are you silent? Have you forgotten it?

G:...

M:acha. if you couldn't recollect it, then it means that you must have been there in that hospital for a very long time. Am i right?

G:...

M: are you missing that hospital?

G:...

M: don't worry geet. Mein hun na

G:(asks sarcastically) where? In mental hopital?

Maan smiles at her question. Geet is shocked.

G: (st) hey babaji! What happened to Maan Singh Khurana? Why is he smiling?

Maan calls adi over phone. Adi in semi-sleep and he attends that call

Adi: hello

M: adi! Mein Maan bol raha hu

Adi: ji sir

Geet is wondering what maan is going to do now

M: how many mental hospitals are there in Delhi?

Adi is looking at the watch, he didn't hear maan's question. Adi reads the time loudly

Adi: 9.30

Maan mistakes that there are 930 Mental Hospitals in Delhi

M: what? 930?

Adi: ji sir. 9.30

Maan whispers in geet's ears: wow...geet. there are 930 Mental Hospitals in Delhi itself. So you have a lot of options

G:(whispers) haan maan! Even you too could easily get an admission in one of those hospitals

M:(whispers) don't worry about me geet. I'll be alright after you leave Khurana Mansion

G:maan! i won't go anywhere

M:geet! Meri bath suno

Maaneet are continuing their whisperings. Since adi is in semi sleep he couldn't understand anything.

Adi:(st) geet? Ye geet kaun hai? Whom maan sir is talking with?

Suddenly yesterday's mandap scenes pops into adi's mind.

Adi:(st)haaan!!! I got it. Geet is Maan sir's so called wife. yesterday maan sir didn't even accept her. But now what he is doing with that girl

Maaneet are still continuing their argument by whispering in each other's ears. Our very smart adi sir mistakes that for romantic whispers and he is shocked

Adi:(st) ye kya horah hai? Maan sir and romance? Iska matlab... what that geet said is true. She is maan sir's wife.

Adi misunderstands that instead of staying in Khurana Mansion, Maan is secretly staying with geet somewhere else without the knowledge of MSK's family members'

Adi:(st) i think, right now, maan sir is secretly staying with his secret wife. Then why did he refuse her claim in the mandap yesterday. Is maan sir scared of dadima? Why is he hiding his marriage from dadima and others? OMG!!!!! Dadima trusts him like anything. But he is doing so many things secretly. Is this the same Maan Singh Khurana? I can't believe this

Finally, Adi comes to a conclusion that maan has really married and living with geet secretly.

On the other hand maaneet have almost forgotten that adi is on the line. maaneet's argument(whispering) is still going on

Adi:(st) i must inform dadima about maan's sir's secret marriage

Immediately, Adi cuts maan's call.

Maaneet's argument...

Both are almost exhaused...

G: maan! Finally what do you want?

M: I'll want to send you to the place where you belong (buddies...he means mental hospital)

G: maan! I belong to you only

Maan is dumbstruck by her words. It echoes in his ears. He senses that some unknown feeling is filling his heart. He couldn't understand what it is.

M: (st) ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? Ye kaisa ehsaas hai?