FF - Mystery of Mrs.MSK Thread#1 | Part 1 to 27 - Page 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5

dadi still couldn't come out of the shock

jug: maaji! i'm begging you. pl.don't repeat ur mistake

dadi remembers the past and how her own decision ruined a woman's life in the khurana khandan. dadi couldn't come out of her guilty consciousness.

jug: maaji! please listen to me for once. don't take any hurried decision. let geet stay with us for sometime. lets try to find out what happened between maan and geet and then decide

geet is anxiously waiting for dadi's reply

dadi is still in trance

jug:maaji!

dadi comes out of the trance and she makes up her mind and says with determination

dadi: chandu! take geet to maan's room

geet couldn't believe what she just heard

jugnu mama is happy

dev and anni are shocked and they are protesting

dev: dadima! ye aap kya kar rahe hai?

dadi: i know what i'm doing

anni: par dadi! this girl is a fraud. maan bhai hates her. how can you allow her to stay with him in the same room?

dadi ignores anni and comes to geet

dadi: geet beta!

geet looks into dadi's eyes

dadi takes geet's hand into hers. geet is surprised

dadi: i don't know who you are. i don't know whether you are saying the truth or not? i know that maan will never do such things. but i want to give you a chance.

G:thanks dadima

dadi: ek condition hai...

G: kya hai dadima?

dadi: you can stay here for 3 months. in these 3 months if maan accepts you as his wife then it is ok. but if he doesn't, then you have to leave this house without creating any further problems. is it ok for you?

geet thinks for sometime and accepts for dadi's condition

G: mujhe mansur hai dadima

dadi:teek hai

geet bents down and asks for dadi's ashirwad

G:mujhe ashirwad deejiye dadima

dadi tocuhes geet's head and blesses her

dadi: jeete raho beta

geet gets up and smiles. dadi also smiles back and leaves for her room

jug: geet beta! gabrayi math. sab kuch teek hojayga

G: ji mamaji

jugnu turns to leave and notices the cold faces of dev and anni

jug: dev and anni! you two don't interfere in maan and geet's matter. better book your tickets for Canada soon

dev and anni are giving jugnu mama an angry look. jugnu mama ignores them and leaves

dev and anni are coming to geet

anni: don't think that you have won. i won't leave for canada without throwing out of this house

geet is silently watching them

dev: let me see, for how long you can survive here with your lies

geet gives them a stern look and says

G: i'm your elder brother's wife. so you two better behave yourselves

dev:(shouts) how dare you?

geet says with determination

G:mein koi darnewali nai hu. do whatever you want. i won't go anywhere

dev: lets see

dev and anni are giving geet an angry look and leave the place. geet is looking @ them going

chandu calls geet

chandu: geet madam

G: ji bhaiya

chandu is happy that geet is calling him 'bhaiya' and he smiles

chandu: ji ayiye! i'll show maan sir's room to you

G:ji bhaiya

geet smiles and goes with chandu.

 

 

at maan's room

chandu: madam ji! ye hai maan sir ka room. aap aaram kijiye. if you need something call me over intercom

G: thanks bhaiya

chandu leaves maan's room


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Edited by tonyahk - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ammu5


hi wat a dhamaka FF loved it to the core. there is no need for any X rated nor hot romantic scenes 4 us 2 get addicted 2 ur ffs dear. ur homour ,style n light hearted  comedy  is enough 2 killl us.


thanks for encouraging me dear.
Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg u r back
143 tonya

Can't wait
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Maan4EVA


omg omg u r back
143 tonya

Can't wait


hi Kaitki,

happy to see you here after a long time. i had read your comments in the PKL thread. but couldn't reply. sorry for that.

will be looking for your funny remix songs...143 dear
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome 
loved it
maan dont know geet is his room
waiting for next part
Posted: 12 years ago
wow awsome one yaar..i feel she is there for some definete reason ..i wonder wat it is 
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by tonyahk




hi Kaitki,

happy to see you here after a long time. i had read your comments in the PKL thread. but couldn't reply. sorry for that.

will be looking for your funny remix songs...143 dear

hahah thanx Tonya
It will be my pleasure to do some remix songs for you lol
I loved that fan fic...I came accross it by a chance and I couldn't help but read 150 pages in one day it was really funny...you have great sense of humor!!! 
Keep it up!

btw you have started off great with the suspense lol...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by heermeher


okk tell me is it gg to be romcom or serious business


hi heer,

welcome dear.

in the beginning, it will be a mix of both romcom and serious business.  after that you know very well how it will go 🤣🤣🤣🤣

143 dear.
Posted: 12 years ago
i am realy looking forward to this ff 😍 😍
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by teju2292




hey tonya
awesome entry dear
still not read part 1
but u know wat
even i too got that romeo and romeo confusion🤣
i m waiting to see ur new ff
and here i go
i will tell it after i read part 1
ofcourse it will be awesome as usual...
but let me read dear...😉



hi teja,

thanks for this port dear. very happy .

will be waiting for your hilarious comments...OMG! what am i saying? how can you give hilarious comments on what i have written so dramatically🤣
anyways, please try your best to come with hilarious comments🤣

143 dear


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