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~ ZINDAGI ~ Maaneet ff~part 8-pg 22 ~11 july (Page 12)

Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
awesome update...
so maan was already married to sam when he met geet...
i'm loving it...
continue soon...

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maan-ki-sanjana IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Oh dear...Maan is married to Sam??
Brilliant twist...but want to know what happened!

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SakshiGarg Goldie

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
hi hinal... actually i was busy in exams... so jst got the tym to read ur FF... first of all congrats 4 this FF... n yeah it is really nyc... keep it up dear... loved it... btw Maan was earlier married to sameeraConfusedShocked... dat was a bit disappointing... but chalo ... if i m nt wrong mahi is sameera n maan's daughter...n sameera died while giving her birthCry...its jst my guess ... dont mind!!!!Big smile

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..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Part 6 -

Geet:"Mr.Maan Singh Khurana" n her jaws dropped open.

Shilpa nudged her n Geet closed her mouth.

Geet:"Sameera Di ye aapke pati hai???"

Sameera:"Ha Geet ye meri hi pati hai"

Geet:"Di ye sadoo aapke pati kaise ho sakte hai"

Maan said with anger:"Excuse me,tumne mujhe sadoo kaha???"

Geet:"Ab sadoo ko sadoo na kahu toh kya kahu?"

Sameera:"Geet tum Maan ko sadoo kyu bola rahi ho?"

Geet:"Mr.Maan Singh Khurana aap shayad bhool gaye hai ki mein kon hu?"

Maan:"Kya hum phele mile hai?"

Geet:"Oh toh aap sach much bhool gaye.Koi baat nahi abhi yaad dila deti hu.Aapko yaad hai last year aap KC Bangalore Branch mein ek project ke liye aaye the"

Maan:"Ha par ye tumhe kaise pata???"

Geet:"Toh aapko woh intern yaad hai GEET MEHTA jo aapko is project mein help kar rahi thi???"

Maan:"Ha mujhe yaad hai"

Geet:"Geet Mehta mein hi hu"

Maan:"Ho toh Miss Bangalore Express kaise he aap???" n smirked as he knew Geet would get irritated by calling her Miss Bangalore Express.

Geet murmered:"Dusht Danav aaj tak woh naam nahi bhoole" which was heard by Shilpa.

Shilpa:"Oh toh yeh the aapke boss Geet Didi" n smiled mockingly at Geet which she didnt miss to understand so Geet whacked Shilpa's arm n glared at her.

Sameera:"Oh Geet toh tum ho Miss Bangalore Express" n started laughing.

Geet:"Sameera Di aap bhi mujhe pe haas rahi ho" n faked anger.

Maan:"Ha Sameera isse gussa mat dilo warna yaha pe volcano phat jayega"

Geet:"Aapna gussa kabhi dekha hai hamesha naak pe behta rehta hai tayar phatne ko"

Shilpa helped Sameera to sit back as she knew the fun would start now.

Maan:"Acha toh batao uss din office mein uss bechari Anjali pe aapna gussa kyu nikala???"

Geet:"Ah ha ha Bechari aur woh bhi woh Anjali.Dekha Sameera Di yeh agar Anjali ko bechri kahenge toh koi bechari ladki ko kya kahenge???"

Maan:"Ha toh tumhi baat do ke Anjali ne kya kiya tha?"

Geet remembered the fight she had with Anjali bcoz Anjali saw her hugging the guy in the parking lot n then going to dinner with him n later entering his house.

Geet:"Woh mein aapko nahi baata sakti" n felt tears stinging her eyes.

Maan:"Ha tumhare pass koi explaination hi nahi hai toh Anjali sahi hi hogi"

Hearing this Geet felt very bad that Maan without knowing the whole matter camr to conclusions n tears started coming.

Geet just ran away from there.

Shilpa:"Geet Didiii"

Shilpa said sorry to both Sameera n Maan n went behind Geet.

Sameera n Maan were left behind confused.

"Mama mama hum ghar pooch gaye" Mahi shaked Geet.

Hearing to Mahi's voice Geet came out of her thoughts n they went inside the house.

Mahi,Shriya n Sameer went to play in Mahi's playroom.

Maan n Yash went to his study to discuss their new project n Meera went to her room to freshen up.Meanwhile Geet went to the kitchen to make coffee for Maan n Yash.

Later at night,Geet called Sameera n said:"Sameera Di I'm sorry mein aapko bina bataye hi chali gayi"

Sameera:"Koi baat nahi Geet actually mujhe sorry kehna chaiye Maan ke wajah se tum ro rahi thi"

Geet:"Sameera Di aap sorry mat bolo aur mein Maan ji ke wajah se nahi ro rahi thi actually kuch purani yaade yaad agayi aur mein emotional hogayi"

Sameera:"Thik hai Geet agar tum kehti ho toh mein sorry nahi bolungi.Acha hum kal kahi milte hai plz mein ghar mein akeli bore ho jaati hu"

Geet:"Thik hai Sameera Di kal hum movie dekhne jaate hai"

Geet woke up early n went to the park near to her flat.There she 2 young girls playing badminton n Geet went near them n they asked her if she would join n so they started talking.

Geet:"Aapka naam kya hai???"

Girl 1:"Mera naam Roopali hai" n smiled.

Girl 2:"Aur mera naam Pooja hai" n she asked:" Aapka naam kya hai Didi???"

Geet:"Mera naam Geet hai aur Roopali mein tumhe Roops bolungi aur Pooja tumhe Poo.Thik hai"

Roops:"Thik hai Geet Di.Friends???" n brought her hand forward

Geet:"Friends..." n shaked her hands n then Poo's n then all 3 shared a group hug.

Roops:"Geet Didi aap Delhi mein nayi ho kya???"

Geet:"Ha Roops.Tumhe kaise pata???"

Poo:"Woh Di hum yaha har subha aate hai par aapko aaj tak nahi dekha isiliye"

Geet:"Oh ok.Acha chalo mein chalti hu mujhe late ho raha hai.Hum kal phirse isi time pe milenge aur tumhara ghar kaha hai???"

Roops:"Di hum yaha padhai ke liye aye he aur hum XXX apartment mein rehte hai"

Geet:"Arre wah mein bhi ussi apartment mein rehti hu chalo chalte hai" n all the 3 left together.
Geet n Sameera watching movie

P.S.-you all must be wondering who is Roopali n Pooja actually Roopali [rsroopali] is my elder sister n Pooja [poojaaddis] is her best friend n a good friend n sister to me n they both r the closest persons in my life n so thought to add them here.

guys this is Roopali

n this is Pooja
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Edited by hinal_maaneet - 09 July 2011 at 3:33pm

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
me first   Big smile

nice update 

Banglore Express cracked me up LOL

continue soon


Edited by sindu555 - 25 May 2011 at 2:33pm

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
very nice update hinal
Maneet's fight was great.
Maan  sadoo
Geet  bangalore express
nice names for both.
So the know each other from before.
Wonder what must have triggered Geet's reaction
when she was talking about anjali in bangalore.
Roops and Poo in wow.
Waiting for more of the past to be revealed
continue soon.

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:01pm | IP Logged

waiting 4 next part
thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged it

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