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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
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Part 9

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Geet :"Kaise hu baby???"
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Geet :"Ha yaha sab thik hai aur Mahi bhi"
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Geet :"Acha tum kab arahe ho???"
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Geet :"Tum kal arahe ho na.Thik hai tumhari fav hi banaongi aur ha Maan tumhe lene ajayenge aur bhaiya aur bhabhi arahe hai na???"
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Geet :"Thik hai. Chalo mein phone rakhti thi hu tum aapna khaya rakhna aur Bhaiya ko zyada pareshaan mat karna think hai" n cut the call.
       
In Maaneet Bedroom,
Maan was busy doing his work when Geet enterd their room n then she changed n went n took the laptop from Maan n told him that Mithun,Bhaiya n Bhabhi were coming tmrw so he had to go to pick them up from the airport.

So Maan :"Mithun ne toh mujhe kuch nahi bataya"

n then Geet told :"Ha woh Mahi ko surprise dena chatha hai aur agar aapko phele bata diya hota toh aap Mahi ko bata dete isliye"

Maan :"Oh toh Maa - Bete ne mujhse baate bhi chupa ne lage hai.Ab toh sazaa zaroor milege" n gave a naughty smile to Geet.

Geet understanding his intentions started moving back while Maan started moving towards her n when she was cornered Maan in a husky voice said :"Ab kaha jaogi Mrs.Khurana" n started kissing all are face except her lips to tease her.Geet having enough of his teasing smacked her lips on him n kissed him passionately n when they were about to go further someone knocked their room door breaking the moment.

Geet :"Maan jao na Mahi hogi" n then Maan opened the door n saw Mahi standing there with her fav Brown Teddy.

           

 Geet giggled seeing Mahi there while Maan carried Mahi with him n kept her on the bed n then he slept on 1 side while Geet slept on the other side.Both hugged Mahi n then kissed her forehead n slept holding each others hand.
       
The Next Morning,
Geet was busy preparing all Mithun's fav dishes,Mithun Maan n Sameera's son but from when he was Geet was the one who took care of him n she was his mother only.

As she was preparing Mahi came n said :"Mama,Papa aap ko study mein bula rahe hai" n left to play with Shriya n Sameer.

Geet then went to the study n Maan  pulled her on his lap n said :"Geet mein aaj office nahi ja raha so jaldi se kaam khatam karlo phir hum Yash aur meera aur bacho ke saath bahar ghumne chalte hai " 

But Geet told :"Nahi Maan mujhe aaj bohut kaam hai mujhe aaj Mithun ka fav khana bana na hai aur Bhaiya - Bhabhi ka room bhi saaf kar wana hai" but Maan didnt listen to her as he was busy playing with her hairs n then Geet waked his hand that was playing with her hair n got up to leave but Maan pulled her back n said :"Plz Geet mana mat karo na plz phir kal se toh Mithun ajayega toh tum kaha mere saath time spend karogi" n made a baby face n Geet just couldnt refuse him n said :"Thik hai phele mujhe khana bana ne do phir hum bahar chalenge" n gave a peck on his lips n ran away before her could catch her.

Geet prepared Mithun's fav dishes n then they all went out to the KINGDOM OF DREAMS whcih had recently opened in Delhi n all enjoyed a lot

 

[Plz do see this website to know more about KINGDOM OF DREAMS
     
 In the evening they had dinner in a Chinese restaurant n then Maan,Geet n Mahi dropped Yash,Meera,Shriya n Sameer at KM n left for the airport.

While going to the airport Mahi fell asleep on Geet's lap n Geet was caressing her head lovingly n after Maan saw Mahi alseep he held Geet's hand n Geet smiled.
     
At The Airport,
Maan was carrying Mahi n Geet was getting restless as the flight has not yet arrived.Maan held Geet's hand n rubbed his thumb on her hand to calm her down.

After 15 mins the flight arrival was announced n then after 15 mins came Mithun n took her blessings first n then hugged her n said :"Missed u Mama"

Mithun
 

Geet :"Missed u too baby"

Yug :"Acha sirf bete ko miss kiya hume nahi" n made a fake angry face.

Geet then hugged Vrinda n told :"Nahi Bhaiya aapko miss nahi kiya par bhabhi ko bohut miss kiya " n showed her tongue to Yug.

Yug :"Thik hai tumne mujhe miss nahi kiya na toh mein chala jata hu" n turned back to leave when Geet stopped him n said :"Bhaiya aapko bohut miss kiya" n hugged him n tears started flowing from her eyes.

By then Mahi had got up n she hugged her Bhaiya n was asking him all questions. Meanwhile Yug n Maan hugged.

Geet stopped her n told :"Mahi baki baad mein puch lena abhi chalo ghar jana hai na sab thak gaye hai" n then Mahi went n hugged her Maama n Maami n they all went to KM.
       
Precap-

Past
why Geet's dad hates her?????

Sorry guys no past in this part as i wanted to introduce Mithun soon
 
            
 
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
MissPurpleFreak thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great part!
 
Saba xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet 
sooo cute
loved da entry of mithun
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a cutee part!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
bechara maan b4 he cud do anything mahi came ha ha
mithun is so cute
loved geet yug convo
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i read this in one go
pls send me the om of this story  dear
lovable one


love,
abi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update! Can't wait for the precap!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update... was very cute filled wid lovey dovey scenes... 
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Interesting way . Good leading . 👍🏼
Loved it ⭐️

Thanks for pm 😊