~ ZINDAGI ~ Maaneet ff~part 8-pg 22 ~11 july - Page 15

Posted: 12 years ago
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continue soon ...
Posted: 12 years ago

That was superb hinal..totally loved it

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii Guys
sorry for not updating for a long time
but will try to update by this weekend
till then a teaser for u all

Past

Meet Geet n her twin Yug...

Geet meeting Prem...

The reason her father hates her n Meera has become more protective about her...

Present

Who is Mithun???

thanksss

love,
     Hinal
Posted: 12 years ago
Bachcha u better update it soon...oh new entry  cant wait cant wait cant wait...update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
nicee updatee n thanks for adding mine n roops bak bakk thats was so sweet of u 

Posted: 12 years ago
      
            
Part 8

Past
Next morning Geet woke up early n saw that even Shilpa was awake.She freshened up n then they both went to the park n met Roops n Poo there n played badminton for an hour n then Geet went n made breakfast n after sometime the 3 returned n had breakfast.

Roops:"Acha di mein chalti hu aaj meri exam hai"

Geet:"Arre Roops ruk yeh dahi sakar kha ke ja tera kaam ache se hoga"

Then Roops took the keys n left.

Shilpa:"Toh Pooaaj kya kar rahi hai?"

Poo:"Mein toh ghar ki safayi kar rahi hu.Kitna ghanda hogaya hai"

Geet:"Shilpa tu Poo ke saath unke flat mein rehna mujhe kuch kaam hai toh mein late ho jaungi aur mein lunch banake jati hu"

Poo:"Arre di aap mat banao mein bana lungi"

Then Poo n Shilpa go to the flat after Geet gives their flat keys to Shilpa.

Geet gets ready n takes a small box from her suitcase n keeps it in her handbag.Then she prays in the small mandir she made in one of the shelf of her room n left for Khurana Mansion.
   
KHURANA MANSION,
As Geet reached Sameera came n they both hugged.

Sameera:"Geet tum agayi tum thik toh ho na"

Geet:"Ha di mein thik hu aur aap bahar kyu ayi"

Sameera:"Woh actually mein Maan ko bye kehne ayi thi woh do din ke liye Mumbai ja rahi hai"

Geet:"Oh di aap toh ghar mein akeli hogayi hogi na"

Sameera:"Ha par mujhe iski adat hai"

Geet:"Di dont worry mein hu na mein yahi rahungi Maanji delhi wapas ajaye tab tak"

Sameera:"Lekin Geet Shilpa akei ho jayegi na"

Geet:"Dont worry di woh akeli nahi hai woh humare neighbours ke saath rehegi aur woh humare friends bhi hai"

Sameera:"Thik hai par ek bar usko call kar lena"

Geet:"Chalo di hum terrace pe jate hai" n they go to terrace n Geet helps Sameera to sit comfortably.

Geet:"Di aapko meri life ke bare mein jana hai toh mera bachpan bhi jana hoga"
    
Ninteen years back,
21st DEC,BANGALORE
Hiten Mehta was very happy that his wife Gouri had given birth to twins,a boy n a girl.

Hiten along with his princess Meera went to see the twins.Te boy had features similar to him n the girl was like her mother but her eyes were the same shade of hazel as her father.

They named the boy Yug as he was the first son in the new generation n named the girl Geet as she would be the song of their life.Gouri was very happy to have her babies safe n healthy in her arms.
    
AFTER 5 YEARS,
Yug n Geet were the apples of everyone's eyes n Meera was too protective about them.She has also got 1 more sister named Shilpa 2 years back.

ON 1st JUNE,
Geet n Yug had joined the school.It was their first day n like all the kids even they were nervous n excited also.

Hiten n Gouri had left Meera,Geet n Yug in the school n left for the office.

Yug made a new friend named Vrinda n both sat together.As the class started all the benches were filled except 1 where a cute looking boy was sitting.

Geet went n sat next to him n said:"Hi My name is Geet"

Boy:"Hi My name is Prem" n they shaked hands n started talking.

During lunch breakYug came to Geet n called her:"Geet chalo waha jakar lunch karte hai" n Geet agreed n they went.

After they finished their lunch Geet went to wash her hands at a open tap which was near the place where they were sitting.Some boys came n pushed her when she was about to wash her hands.Yug saw this n he came to help Geet but the boys pushed him also.

Then Prem came along with a teacher n the boys were punished for misbehaving.Then he helped Yug n Geet to get up.

Yug said Thank You n went near Geet n checked whether she was hurt n saw that her knees were scarped n blood was coming.Prem then gavehis white handkerchief to Yug who tied it n then he hugged Geet who was crying.

Yug:"Shh Geet dekh tu ab thik hai na toh ro mat plz"

Geet then calmed down n said Thank You to Prem.

That evening when they left school Yug n Geet had made 2 friends Vrinda n Prem n from then on they became the best of friends.
    
PRESENT,
Geet after sometime went to kitchen n told the servant to serve dinner n she went n called everyone.All had the dinner n then they called it a day.

Meanwhile Geet was clearing the table n the phone rang.

Geet(self thought):"Bilkul sahi samay pe phone aya hai" n picked the phone.

Geet:"Ha Bhai yaha sab thik se hogaya"

Geet:"Toh aap log kab arahe ho???"

Geet:"Bhai Mithun ko phone toh do mujhe usse baat karni hai.Kitne din hogaya usse baat nahi huvi"
    
PRECAP-

PAST
Why Hiten hates Geet???
n more about her time in Bangalore

PRESENT
Who is Mithun???
     
Im so sorry guys i told I would update last week but couldnt do so
but from now on i can update on weekends only mostly sundays so plz bear with me

I wrote only the one sided conversation but if u guys want both the side conversation do tell me

P.S.-Character sketch n pictures updated on page 1


Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt
so 3 sisters 1 bro
geet & sam so sweet
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

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