Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy
Part 2-
Wow, Vikrant is a 🤬 ...wow...but true
So there is some helplessness on Geet's part to be attached to him. And it doesn't seem like he even enjoys being with her. ...its a very complicated relationship...all he wants his is his benefits
I feel so bad for her. It seems that she even wants to die at this point. ...i would to, the love of my life is waiting and i am marrying another...it basically sucks
But even as she is speaking so sadly, Ayu's voice seemed to bring a little light to her world. ...her family is her only escape and she needs it...
So what's up with parties? Why does she have to appear? ...society image. Of her being such a wonderful and sweet and kind and down right which reflects upon Vikrant's choice making him look better...
Aw, I wished she would wear white. I know how much DD loves white. Aw...DD loves white...thats my second favo, after purple...but ill remember the white hint
I love how he calls Vikrant, mean Uncle. He sure deserves it. After all, the innocent ones always have angels standing beside them. That's why they can tell the devils apart. ...you truly have grown fond of Ayu...and the mean uncle part was just for cracks, and glad someone laughed...innocent ones can see the difference and their opinion completely straight forward.
I also love how Ayu understands her situation. He doesn't stomp like a bratty child. ...the quirks of living with a sister and he understands her trouble so he doesnt want to a burden, although he doesnt know what that means.
I think he's my most favorite character. Geet is...eh... a little pessimistic, not that I don't understand. ...you do love him...her life is basically at the edge of the world. but i hate pessismists too
Oh. This guy is slick. So he married her for fame. I think if Maan offers to pay the money she is in debt of, then Vikrant can release her. But I guess she won't ever ask him. Maan can only offer when everything comes out the bag, and geet isnt all to willing for him to know about the marriage thing...ur right, she will never ask
Love how you incorporated the title with your ending line. It makes me understand the story even more. Glad it helped...i forget that i wrote that, i had to go back and check...lmao
Part 3-
Love the quote. But I disagree with the last line. Love is like playing the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, and then you manipulate the rules in accord to the beats of your heart. ...manipulate the rules
We never necessarily forget the rules. We learn our way around it. ...that makes more sense...basically looking beyond the imperfections...
She seems like a teacher I would love to have. Nice but serious. The story of Danny is interesting. I hope you expand on it. ...she is a example of my first grade teacher...and Danny will make another enterance. He is going to be a cataylst for something...
Haha. Loved Maan's entry. But what is this? He lost his parents too? He seems to have a good connection with Poonam. Lmao, he's already flirting with the teacher. It reminds me of ICarly. Spencer went for a PTC and he ended up dating the teacher. ...He lost his parents too and more on that when Maan's side of the story makes and entrance...Poonam was his only family... Maan works fast for a shy guy. ICarly. I must of missed that episode...Although i can imagine it...
And what's with ball point pen. Haha, he seems like a nerd to me. Nerds of the world unite... But it was Poonam being very ignorant.
But he's so strict on Poonam. But t makes me happy she isn't too anxious over her grades. Strict he is. He acts like the parent. But Poonam knows her capabiltiy, so no worries.
He must really like her to be sending love notes to her so soon after PTC. ...more on that later...I cant reveal updates...But it will all make sense,..promise
Loved this line. "Life is heartless" ...sadistic..dont you think. yet perfect
Wonder what's going to happen. It seems like Maan and Vikrant are good friends. ...um...next update...
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