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I will post my last 3 part in my 1st THREAD ON IF ..MY SAME friends want me to so for them i doing it ..

PLZZ DO HIT LIKE I HAVE PM 250 PEOPLE LAST 2 TIME DO HIT LIKE AND  COMMENT  PLZZ GUYS..  


Part -77

 

Today, The maan sigh khurana was the happiest person ever.

He fews months ago, he became husband of a such beautiful girl, geet and today he is a father of Twin.

"A father?? A father?? Maan ur a father now!!" he thought to himslef

After geet's arrival in his life'maan's life is completely changed'

Everybody left alone after congratulating them'

In geet hospital Room:

Geet relaxing on maan's arm, on his shoulder.

Maan caresses her hair and kisses her forehead.

"geet'"

"hummm''"

"Thank you, geett'..ajj tumne hamara parivaar pura kar dia' I m a complete man today and a happiest and luckiest person in the whole universe'"

Geet smiles..

"maan'don't thank me, u r the one whom I should b thankful' appne muj jaise ladki ko apnaya'.muje'"

Maan stops her'

"geet, jaan'..stop this thank u thank u' lets see our kids' can u believe it? we are a parents, GEET! Parents'.sweetheart"

And hugs her tightly..

Geet feels contented and happy'

"apne nahi dekha na unhe'..?"

"kaise dekha sakta hu unhe meri misty ke bina' chalo'ham dekhate hai unhe.."

And after a while nurse brings them..

Geet holds baby boy and maan holds baby girl'

"aww'.mera puchi..puchi' maan dekho bilkul apki jaise ache hai mere Jr. maan ki"

"aur meri jr. geet to bilkil tumhre jaise hai geet, bilkul carbon copy of Geet"

Both looks at each other smiling and came close to kiss but

Ooopss''

Hospital'kids'.aur yeah jalim duniya'

"ahem..ahem.."

Prem enters with lots of ballons, chocolates, flowers and gifts off course with heer.

"opps'humne kuch nahi dekha'." Heer says mischievously'

Maan rolling his eyes, "hamne kuch kiya hi nahi..to tum kya dekoge!"

Geet shies and hits him playfully'."MAANN'"

"aree control guys'control'.abb itana intezar kiya hai to thoda aur sahi'.aur ye kya bacho ke samne??? Not good!! Guys'." Prem says pulling their legs 

Maan says playing even with him coldly, "Premm'..Shut up, buddy!!! Hum bhi dekege jab tumhari bari ayegi'" and winks

Heer turns all red.

"BROOO''.."  and hides behind prem..

All other smiles'

Prem sits on stool by geett and holds a girl in his hand and heer holds boy'

"aww'.bilkul meri gudiya jaisi hai'." And kisses her on her forehead

"aur ye mera batija'bilkul bro ki tarah'arrogant, dekho to bua ko dekha bhi nahi rha hai.. aree bachuu'akhe kol ke bua ko to dekha'.!!"

"shut up heer'.not a word against my babies'."

"Ohhoo'bro, just chill I m just kidding'he is soo cute, just like u!"

"HEERRR'..i m not cute'."

GEET: "ohoo maan'abb maan bhi lijiye'U R so cute'mera puchi puchi" and holds his both cheeks and moves I side by side..

MAAN: "accha?? Chaloo abb tum keh rahi ho to I m cute!"

"howww''''broo'' how can uu just'"

Just when heer was going to fight with him

Everybody else comes and sees the babies

They cutely fights to hold the babies,"whose gonn hold the babies, for how long, whose gonn be first one!! Etc'"

Maan and geet sees their little crazy family with  love'

And smiles looking at each other. And maan kisses geet on her nose tip

"Thank you jaanu for such a beautiful gift! I LOVE YOU ALOT"

Geet smiles and kisses him back on his nose tip

" Thanks to u, too'. And I LOVE YOU, TOO!!"

 

LATER

 

They had a grand welcome at home Khurana  Mention was decorated with best  .

Maan became to possessive over his babies.

He would not let anybody touch his precious babies with washing their hands with hand sanitizer.

Geet would try to make him understand, but maan is maan!!

 

After the Grand naming ceremony

Maan named his priencess as "Mahi maan sigh khurana"

And geet named her Jr. Maan as "Abhimaan Maan sigh khurana"

 

First night at home with kids!!

 

Maan had taken leave from office to take care of babies.

He was taking care of geet and babies all by himself.

At night when geet was asleep, he would b watching her and babies sleep peacefully'.

He was caressing her hair and was bending down to kiss her lightly to not to disturb her sleep, but just then his priancess started crying..

He immediately woke up to take her in his arm so geet don't get disturb..

But she woke up any way'. And was watching maan..

"aree reee'meli prlincess ko kya hua?? Rona kyu aa raha hai baccha?? See daddy is here' bolo princess ko kya chahiye...ye dekho.. kya hai? (showing her doll) Doll!! Apko acchi lagi?? Baby saw it and again started crying' "aree reee kya hua baccha?? Dekho mama uth jayegi ni baccha.!!!"

Just then geet came by his side..becuz she couldn't see her baby cry.

"maan, do muje'priencess is hungry..!!"

"Aree jaan?? Ohh ya..how I couldn't undersand this!"

"itz okay sona'deere deere app samaj jayege!"

And she took baby with her to cot and put her on her lap and started to feed her, and covered her private part, but maan stoped her

"ye kya geet?? I wann see my baby having her food!"

"maann'lekin..app"

"shuuu'.dont b shy honey'.how can u forget that I hv seen everything, and claimed every part of ur body as mine.! So don't be shy.. umm?"

And he bend down a little and kiss her forehead, then eating priencess baby and upper part of her B****s.

Geet turn all red.

 

WITH BABY AROUND THEY NEVER NOTICE THAT DAYS WENT TO EARLY AND THEIR LITTLE BABY grown big  time went to fast for them'..each day  looking after them brought new happniess in every once life ' whole family had good time with each other 'with lot of fun around baby and with child like fight brought them more togther they freindship and love just grown up as always with their love they always had lot of hugs and kisses  '..

BUT

 Maan became too possessive for his babies each and everyday .

And geet had to handle two dhust danav.

Abhimaan sigh khurana was really a good boy. He was always by his mama's side. Every body would tease him as "mama's boy!" and he would proudly say, "yes, I m my mama's boy, my mama's abhimaan!" and geet would just smile proudly at that her boy

And

Mahi sigh khurana was a total daddy's girl. She was all like maan. Whatever her daddy would say she would everything exactly like him'.

And geet had to handle these two drust divan of hers'

 

At dinning table

"KHANA'.KHANA'KHANA'"

Maan and his mahi was screaming and making a loud noise with spoon and dishes..

"haa baba..la rahi hu'" GEET

"babajii..plzz save my poor mama from this drust danav's" abhi

"kya kaha'''.??? abhi ke bacche'.shutt upp okkkay'me and daddy are hungry' if ur not then just b quite' stupid!! Hump'." MAHI said and moved her face other way..

"hayee'.mera baccha'..oyeee'.mere bacche ko dhamka mat samji'tera khana me la rahu hu' (geet came hearing mahi's words to her ladla with belan pointing at her) maan was all the while watching these drama'

Geet notices this

"MAANNN'..dekho na tumhari prianncess'mere bacchee ko sata rahi hai'." Making a cute face'

Maan came to senses

"accha?? Priencess?? Aisa nahi karte baccha' he is brother na??say sorry'."

"haa'.sorry aur me?? aur vo bhi mere chote bhai ko?? NOO WAY DADDY'"

"Hayee'isske taiver to dekho'maan I m telling uu'.ur spoiling ur priancess'.and oo ms. Queen..he is only 2 mins younger than u'okay?"

"priencess'.no baby'.say sorry to champ"

"sorry champ!"

And both hugged each other. Happily'

And maaneet watched them lovingly'.

 

"hayeee''mere baccheee!! Kisi ki nazar na lageee'.."

Maan, champ and priencess''.  "ooo MOM! Ms. Drama queen!!"

And rolled their eyes!!

 

They were a happy happy family, enjoying their lives greatly'finding happness in every small things were their treasure, they enjoyed with their childeren with the kids around the family also behaved like kids they lived their child hood memorie again with kids around ''.they where most adorable kids after all they where maan sing khurana children'and as always maan has his best in everything ...!!

 

 

 

Precap: Leap! FF ending very soon.. one more part max. 2 parts!!


Sorry for any mistake thank you 'avoid it guys plzz I don't have time now days  so ' hope u understand ..

Hope you guys like the update plzz do hit like and commnet thank you 'sorry for late update '



Edited by madhavipatil - 10 November 2011 at 10:20pm

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
amazing update
love it
thnx

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
wow..superb update.
do continue plz.
thx

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
tnnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
awesome dear

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Wow superb part sweetie
i jst lovd it
the names of junior maaneet are fab

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