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AR Pyar Tera, Pyar Mujhe Keechay Teri Ore Part 7 (Page 8)

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Amazing part. Loved it

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hey AR fanfic mein lonavala means a start of a new relation
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nyc part ... loved it so mch ... thanx 4 d pm n continue soon plzzz ...


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Awesome updates
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cool parts ...

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awesome ff
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Pyar Tera, Pyar Mujhe Keechay Teri Ore - Part 5

"Armaan bhaiya!" came the little kids voice.Armaan drops his bag and opens his arms wide to give the kids a hug.The kids had loved him since his first visit.Armaan sees Bua and goes to greet her.Armaan bends down and takes her blessings.

"Kaise ho bete?" Bua asked.

"Acha hoon," Armaan replies.The kids became quiet which made Armaan and Bua surprised. The kids were never quiet only if someone had yelled at them.They turn and see the kids staring at Riddhima while Riddhima gave them a nervous smile.Armaan walks over."Bacho yeh hai Dr. Riddhima aur yeh meri help karne aayi hai." Riddhima sees Bua and walks over to her to get her blessings.Bua was a little shocked to see a girl dressed in a knee length dress is getting her blessings.Armaan was quite shocked himself but turned his attention to the kids."Okay so who wants to play soccer?" The kids cheer and run after Armaan who started running.

"Tumne Sanjeevani main kab se join kiya hai?" Bua asked Riddhima.Riddhima looks at her nervously.

"Abhi do din pehle," Riddhima said.Bua nods.

"Main sab ke liye khana lagti hoon," Bua informed Riddhima.

"Main aap ki madat karo?" Riddhima asked.Bua, again, was shocked.

"Nai beta tum lambe safar se aayi ho, tum aaram karo," Bua said and walks away.Riddhima sees a picnic table and sits on the bench and watches Armaan and the kids play soccer.

Somehow, Riddhima's eyes always drift off to Armaan.No matter how hard she tries to get her eyes off of him they always go back to him.Riddhima felt like she was going crazy so she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath and when she opens them her eyes go on Armaan. Riddhima shakes her head and looks down with her eyes close.Riddhima didn't hear Bua call them in for lunch so she just sat there.Armaan noticed her so he walks over to her and taps her shoulder.Riddhima opens her eyes and looks up at Armaan.He giving her a grin and Riddhima quickly stood up but stumbled but then straightened herself.

"Tum theek ho?" Armaan asked seeing her fumble around.Riddhima nods quickly with her big eyes.Armaan gives her a puzzled look."Khana lag gaya hai." Riddhima nods and follows Armaan inside.

"Armaan bhaiya mere saath bethe," a little girl said.

"Nai mere saath," said a boy.The girl and the boy kept on fighting.

"Okay, okay enough," Armaan said.Armaan bought the little girl to where the boy was and sat between them."Ab khush?" Both of the kids nod and start eating.Armaan smiles and starts eating himself.Riddhima smiles seeing the kids love Armaan so much.Her eyes well up thinking about her parents.She never found them.Riddhima is an orphan.Riddhima has been searching for her parents but has never been able to find them.

"Riddhima, tum kadi kyun ho aao betho," Bua said breaking Riddhima's thoughts.

"Uh...ji," Riddhima said and sat across from Armaan.Armaan looks at her and sees her sit there and not taking any food.

"Riddhima, khana dekh ne ke liye nai, khane ke liye hai," Armaan said making the kids laugh. Riddhima felt embarrassed because the kids were laughing at her.Riddhima puts some food in her plate and starts eating.

"Armaan aur lo," Bua said putting more in his plate.She had been doing that for the past fifteen minutes.

"Nai Bua maine kha liya agar aur khaya toh mera pet pat jayega," Armaan said leaning back.

"Jab se woh tujhe chod kar gayi tu kamzor ho gaya hai," Bua said but then realizes what she said.Armaan looks at Bua with hurt eyes and Bua felt bad.She felt like an idiot for saying that.Riddhima was still sitting and heard that.Riddhima looks at Armaan and sees his pain in his eyes.There must have been something really tragic that made Armaan sad.Armaan got up and left for the room he was staying in.

"Bua, kaun Armaan ko chod kar chali gayi?" Riddhima asks standing up.Bua looks at her and knows she cannot tell Riddhima.

"Main nai tumhe bata sakti," Bua said.Riddhima nods understanding.

There was a knock on the door and Armaan opens it.He sees Bua and Riddhima standing there.Armaan sighs and opens the door fully to let them in.Bua and Riddhima walk in while Bua went to go put some of Armaan's clothes in the closet.Armaan and Riddhima look at Bua confused then at each other.Armaan asks Riddhima through his eyes to what happened to Bua.Riddhima just shrugs as she didn't know herself.Bua turns around with a smile making Armaan and Riddhima smile back at her.

"Woh humare paas aur kamre nai hai toh Riddhima ko tumhare saath iss kamre main rehna padega, Armaan." Bua said.

"Kya!" Both and Armaan and Riddhima exclaim.

"Main aur Riddhima ke saath room share karo?No way!" Armaan said.Riddhima's becomes mad.

"Mujhe bhi koi shauk nai hai tumhare saath room share karne ka," Riddhima said crossing her arms across her chest.

"Lekin Riddhima to so gi kahan?" Bua asked.

"Main kahin bhi so jaogi lekin Armaan ke saath room nai share karogi," Riddhima said looking at Bua.

"Good mujhe apna own kamra mil jayega," Armaan said sprawling on the bed.Riddhima realized that she would have to share a room someone else and that would probably be the kids.Riddhima loves children but she hates it when someone disturbs her or annoys her sleep.

"Sorry beta tumhe yehi sona hoga," Bua said and walks out of the room.Riddhima turns her head and glares at Armaan while he just gives her a grin showing off his dimples.Riddhima felt butterflies in her stomach seeing his dimples.Riddhima turns her head away from and looks around nervously.

"Okay so tum zameen pe so jaana aur main bed pe," Armaan said.Riddhima looks at him mad again.

"No.Tum zameen par so ge aur main bed pe," Riddhima rephrased his sentence.

"Nai Riddhima main bed pe," Armaan said.

"Main," Riddhima argued back.

"Riddhima main," Armaan argued with gritted teeth.

"Armaan main," Riddhima said.There argument kept on going and going on.During fights like these, people get annoyed easily but for Armaan and Riddhima, they kept on going like they were pros at this fight.



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