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AR Pyar Tera, Pyar Mujhe Keechay Teri Ore Part 7 (Page 3)

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Pyar Tera, Pyar Mujhe Keechay Teri Ore - Part 2

She walks in through the door after knocking on it.She sees the back of a chair but could see the top part of a lady's head.She clears her throat to get her attention.The chair spins around and there sat Dr.Keerti.Seeing Dr.Keerti's face, she felt herself shiver because of nervousness and fear.

"Dr.Riddhima Gupta, two minutes late," Dr.Keerti said as she stood up.The girl's eyes went in shock as she heard that.She was only two minutes late."Bohut kuch ho sakta hai do minute main.Ek patient ki jaan bach sakti hai.Ek baat meri yaad rakhna, I hate later comers." Riddhima nods and looks down.Dr.Keerti walks up to her."Aap ka pager aur stethoscope." Riddhima takes it from Dr.Keerti with a proud smile.Dr.Keerti saw her smile and knew she was happy to become a doctor and knew that she will do justice to her work."Welcome." Dr.Keerti said that with a smile and walks out.

"Hitler," Riddhima's mumbles and walks out.She was looking around that she didn't know when she bumped into Keerti's back.Keerti turns around with a hard stare and Riddhima looks down."Sorry ma'am."

"Dekhe chaliye Dr.Riddhima," Dr.Keerti said.Riddhima nods."Toh Dr.Muskaan aur Dr.Anjali yeh hai Dr.Riddhima Gupta humari nayi intern." Anjali and Muskaan smile in victory knowing they had won the bet they had made with the guys."Aaj yeh aap dono ke saath rahe gi."

"Yes ma'am," Anjali and Muskaan say.Keerti walks away to do her duty.

"Hi I'm Anjali," Anjali said with her hand out for Riddhima to shake.Riddhima shakes her hand.

"And I'm Muskaan," Muskaan held out her hand and Riddhima shook it."Chalo." They start walking through the corridors and in front they see Rahul and Atul at the nurse station.Anjali and Muskaan look at each other with a smirk which was all oblivious to Riddhima.

"Hey guys," Anjali said happily.The guys look at her a little weird seeing Anjali so happy.Its only sometimes that you see Anjali a little too happy.

"Dekho yeh hai Riddhima.Nayi intern," Muskaan said with her hand Riddhima's shoulder.Rahul and Atul drop their file as they know they have lost and now have to be servants of Anjali and Muskaan.

Armaan was coming from behind when he noticed the girl in the white dress.He had seen her in the morning but hadn't seen her face and still hasn't.Since Armaan had her bracelet, he decided to go return.Armaan starts walking towards them while he was looking down pulling out the bracelet silver bracelet with diamond studs on it out of his pocket.When he looked up he didn't see her anymore.

"Kahan gayi woh?" Armaan said as he looks around."Kya hai!Duty ke saath saath uss ladki ke peeche bhi bhago jiske ko main jaanta bhi nai." Armaan shakes his head and puts it back in his pocket.

Riddhima was walking around the hospital as Muskaan had told her to get some file from the nurse station.Riddhima walks past the Children Ward but then walks back as she sees them all sitting there gloomy.Riddhima didn't like to see kids with their faces all sad and gloomy.She thought to go make them happy so she walks inside.Riddhima clears her throat and the kids look at her.

"Kya hua bacho itne bore kyun lag rahe ho?" Riddhima asked them.

"Iss hospital main kuch karne ko hai hi nai," said a little boy.Riddhima felt her face fall as she heard that.

"Iss hospital main bohut kuch hai," Riddhima said with a smile."Aao chalo ek game khelte hain." Riddhima pulls out the hair tie from her hair and holds out her hands and soon the kids come and form a circle.They all start singing and move around in circles.

Armaan was walking by but he stopped as he saw the kids laughing and having fun.Armaan felt really bad for the kids that are admitted in this hospital.What did they ever do that made them have to come and stay here.But seeing them smile and having fun made his heart swell.Armaan noticed the doctor with them.Her hair was opened and the wind blew making it fly but he couldn't see her face.Armaan shakes his head and walks away.

"Hey Armaan," Muskaan said as she saw him walking.

"Hi Muski," Armaan replies.

"Tum nayi intern se mile ho?" Muskaan asked.

"Nai abhi nai," Armaan said.

"Chalo main tumhe usse mila thi hoon," Muskaan said holding his arm.

"Nai Muskaan mujhe General Ward main kam hai toh phir kabhi milo ga," Armaan said.

"Alright," Muskaan said.

"Okay, bye." Armaan waves and walks into General Ward and at the same time Riddhima walks out of the Children Ward.

"Tum Children Ward main kya kar rahe thi?" Muskaan asked as she took the file from Riddhima.Muskaan smiles as she thought of an idea."Rahul!" Muskaan said as she saw him.Rahul saw Muskaan look at him so he turned to go but Muskaan had already said his name.

"Uh yeah," Rahul said nervously.

"Meri liye ek cup coffee lana," Muskaan said with a sweet smile.Rahul gives her a fake smile.

"Of course," Rahul said and turns around.

"Mere liye bhi," Riddhima said.Rahul turns around and looks at Riddhima mad. "What?Tum already jaa rahe ho toh mere liye bhi le aana." Muskaan laughs and Rahul walks away groaning.

Rahul walks out with two cups of coffee in his hands and making sure he doesn't drop them because the stupid waiter had to fill them up to the top.As Rahul walked carefully and kept his eyes on the mugs, from the front came Dr.Keerti which he didn't notice.Keerti looks up and sees Rahul holding two cups coffee making her confused.

"Dr.Rahul," Dr.Keerti said scaring the crap out of Rahul.Rahul looks up at Dr.Keerti with fear in his eyes of getting scolded.

"Aap ke paas do cup ke coffee kyun hai?" She asked a little mad as one of the doctors is to busy carrying coffee instead of looking after a patient.Armaan came and heard the conversation and started to laugh but controlled it as he knew why Rahul was carrying cups of coffee.

"Woh kya hai main break pe hoon aur main do cup isiliye leke jaa raha hoon kyun ke...kyun ke..." Rahul had no idea what to say and that is when Armaan comes in to save him.

"Dr.Keerti maine actually Rahul se coffee mang vayi thi," Armaan said standing next to Rahul.Armaan takes the cup of coffee with a smile."Thanks man."

"No problem," Rahul said a little worried but happy.

"Dr.Keerti, Dr.Shubhankar aap ko dhund rahe hain." Armaan said.Keerti blushes and smiles at the mention of her husband.

"Alright," Keerti said and walks away.After she was out of sight Rahul sighs in relief.

"Tu do cup kyun leke jaa rahe hai ek Muskaan ke liye aur ek Anjali ke liye," Armaan asked.

"Nai ek Muskaan ke liye aur dusre nayi intern ke liye," Rahul said.Armaan bursts out laughing.

"Nayi intern ne tujhe gulam bana diya uska," Armaan said while laughing while Rahul frowned.

"Haan hanso hanso," Rahul said but its been pretty long since anyone has heard Armaan's laugh."Waise tujhe hans kar dekh kar acha lag raha hai." Armaan stops laughing but still has a small smile on his face.

"Thanks," Armaan said and walks away with the cup of coffee.Rahul was watching him walk away when he realized that he took the cup of coffee that was Riddhima's.

"Abe meri coffee toh deke jaa," Rahul yelled after him.


Second part.Hope you all enjoy!

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nyc part ... still AR hav nt officially met ... eagerly waitin 4 dem 2 meet ... thanx 4 d pm n continue soon ...

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