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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
aweswome update... i even starting visualizing scenes infront of me.. looks like u took me to a different place... lovely update

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
 

congratulations-desi-glitters-18

what sensous magnificent
marvelous update
love love it
i'm glad ur back
with such a splendid
update
cant wait to read next
part
this 4 yu
Rose for You 
 

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
Reet...

Honey that was fabulousClap .. A roller coaster of feelings . God they love each other and hurt each other to the core .They are mirror images of each other...So passionate, volatile and possessive of each other to the boot. The confession scene brought tears to my eyes...Phew finally the dam of will broke ..I could picture the stormy night...almost an echo of their turmoil. 
The foreplay scene was sensuous , divine and steamy ... 
Looking forward to see the team's reactions to the new couple. The about to be kidnapped girl...wonder how Geet will find her presence ...

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Update soon. The wait is killing!
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Reet i loved all the updates...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
Reet thanx for the English translation...loved the update...i had butterflies in my stomach. reading the intimate moment ..i love the way Maan pacify her...and their cute fight during the making out...i really like the fact that instead of making Geet change and Maan getting seduced by it (as how it is showed most of the times in stories)..u made Maan change her in between the foreplay...it was the icing on the cake...i think it's a wise idea that it was a foreplay and that they didn't make love...as there are too many havoc right now around them..but the foreplay itself was hot...i loved when Maan called her miss Bollywood..teasing her...pls don't kill us and update soon...need to see their cuddle in the morning...and if the gang will know that geet was in maan room...waiting impatiently

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Loved it yaar but that's not fair i thought they will make love not fair.Cry
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
CONGRATS  4  D  NEW  THREAD..!!
waiting for the another morning of this night...hope you will write soon...please don't make us wait till eternal...pls...update another part..honey...love you...for the best FF in the world...muah muah muah...

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