Posted: 25 July 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sophia21
Can i just say... WOAH!
Ok bout the previous chapter... Brilliant update..
The FR... and the way Anna's txt came ryt at that tym.. Argh i must say.. Anna gt a very bad timing lol.. But damn dey got Nakku..!!
N for this chapter,, I have to give u a standing ovation.. cuz girl, u rocked it!!!
You made me cry and damn u also made me nearly puke haha..
I mean.. Im scared of blood *embarassed* lool.. n errr Roopa's brain n flesh.. *Shudders* u scared me loool..
I knew she wud die.. but lyk dis? Damn.. I gt ghoosebumps nw man.. lol.. But awww the day she finally gets to meet her sis... Anna kills Roopa :( dats jus sad.. N woah.. i wonder how she feels.. bout Dutta spendin a night wid her sis.. eugh.. complicated.. but i feel so bad for TaSha.. especially Nakku atm..
This was one hell of a roller coaster.. Amazing updates!!!
Tinky... Ur on a roll man... Keep it up :P
U ask n den u say it anyway lol..., but yeh thanks...
Or in Anna's mind a perfect timing...he was afterall spying on Dutta lol.
OMG a standing ovation!!!! wow I am truly speechless, chuffed, and exquisetly overjoyed man...I know...I know...it ain't no Oscar lol...but really they way you put it really made me feel great hun! So a big big thanks 2u.
ok crying ur sponsor kleenex has got dat issue covered babe...but the puking daaamn...now dats n issue in itself...whyyy???? Whats so bad dat ur stomach churned man. Oh hun I think everyone would be scared of that much blood and bits n bobs of the brain flying north, south, east and west lol...but seriously dat is wot happens wen sumone gets shot in the head! N plus I wanted to make it gory, in the sense of making the reader really realte to the whole scene..., but I guess thanks 2ur feedback I know no that I succeeded.., but dnt get scared, Dutta hai na woh sambhal lega... oooh u got goosebumps...woohooo, dis is better then I expected, now dat is effect man!
yeah I agree the moment between tasha was 'awkward' man...but dats life...
haha on the roll u got it dude!!!!
Thanks for ur awesome comment babez, loved reading every bit of it! Thanks. tc