Originally posted by meriyaar
reserved: btw i love the title!
that was superb tink dear!
although it had it's sad moments it was very fun-filled.
dutta and naku's confrontation was brilliant! loved how naku poured everything out, she's a brave girl and wat she reli needs now is the love and embrace of her husband. who annoyingly is tryna get rid of her, i guess he has his reasons but doesn't naku's strong love and determination prove that they're relationship can go somewhere. they both love eachother in such a way that no one can explain it not even them, and they know it!
A big thank you in line first of all ! But yeah I know what you mean, but this is why Shastri Ji's bhavishyawani stated that they both are unaware of the importance they hold for each other. And they are both useless for themselves but a shield of some sort for each other. So don't worry babe, be patient, they will come to terms eventually, I promise. But I must warn that they're love story is going to be on the back burner for a while, as the 2nd plot has to unfold and after that it's pure bliss.
ur welcome dear ok so its goo to know that all will be well :) it will be interesting to reasd whatu have in store for then
hopefully dutta will come to his senses soon.
i absolutely loved madhu's character and her introduction was amazing!
she is one feisty girl, yet she's also very sweet. her love for her brother is ever so sweet hope dutta sees that soon as well lol. im sure her and naku will share a great relationship. roops' jealousy is very funny tho but i can see her and madhu forming a friendship. would love to see gaurav and madhu as a couple they're love story will be interesting. oh and i loved her comment 'buy one get one free pricks'
that just cracked me up! and guaravs skills in noticing on how much she resembles the devil that was hilarious! the tiffs between the three is so entertaining. aww and gaurav thinks she's beautiful can see where this is going lol. baaji is always gonna be baaji just gota love him man! he's so damn funny, questioning gaurav like a kid!
Don't worry hun he will. Oh I am so glaaad that you liked Madhu's character! Personally I like what I am able to do with her character too! She has so much potential. She's extermely understanding in every aspect, which surprises everyone, she the sorta person that has answers for everything kinda gal..
Roops' jealousy isn't nothing of concern, it's just how every girl feels when her man ponders over some next gal, so nothing to worry about there.
Well I gues you've figured what Gaurav's and Madhu's connection is, so no need for me to spill the beans there lol.
Oh and you liked that comment, so do I, I use that a lot, but that's what I love about Madhu, cause she's british, there's a lot of unusual stuff that can be put in character here, so I can say you're welcome to expect more. And finally glad that I actually managed to bring a smile on my readers' face, rather then tears.
Baji just loves creating light-hearted problems lol, what can I say, it just goes without asking.
u can do wonders with her character hun! lol yh im kinda with roops who wouldnt be jealous wen u've got madhu she's like a godess lol, but im sure she trusts her guy.
so there is a conncetion btwn the two can't wait to read it!
i like how ur using all her British aspects here coz in the show it went downhill, in way did she seem like a girl from london and u've added everything! nice to there's more to come from her.
aww dear wen u bring tears to our face it means u are a great writer coz u can pull off the emotional scenes and wen we smile it's also becoz ur a great writer!
Baaji is one character that will never change, he is just too good!
kinda feel sorry for kala as much as i hate her i do feel bad for her, coz she is hell bent in becoming a fashion designer and she is in complete awe of madhu coz of her fashion sense. im sure madhu can give her a helping hand in her fashion career. of course she will need to stop being such a b**** to dutta and keep out of his way first!
Lol Kala is still selfish as hell, so don't go getting any idea's regarding her. Well Madhu will be aiding Kala in something Kala never thought she would require her help in.
lol, well there's me hoping for the impossible. hmmm well that sounds interesting...
i like how this chapter was structured everything fit in well, and madhu's scenes were perfect! i dont know why but for some reason i am loving her character soo much. will be interesting to see how her character takes shape in the story. will she in any way try and help dutta and naku get back together? that will be nice
Why thank you. Oh really, you dunno how that makes me feel that you actually have grown to love Madhu in the first chapter that involves her itself! That makes me feel like I've achieved something, personally. Hmm...not sure about Madhu helping tasha come together, but her presence in the house certainly makes the mood lighter, and allows a little air travel more freely between them.
awww hun u hav achieved alot, ur an amazing writer and this ff proves it! im sure i will go on to like her more.
sorry for all the bak bak this my longest ever comment!
woah don't think i've ever babbled so much on any of my other posts lol.
Oh babes ur so sweet, don't worry. I loved every bit of it as usual. Usually I say that I'm smiling when I read ur comment, obviously I was. But most of the time I feel a smile creeping up on my lips, like this......but today my smile was like this..., no jokes! It was perfect.
im glad u like it and wasn't too much of a drag :P nice to know that i could bring a wider smile to ur face :D
anyways thanks agen dear for such a wonderful update and for the pm
hope u update soon
Hun you are welcome as always. Thank you for making my smile that little bit wider.... Most of all I have to add, that I am glad you like Madhu so much. And I do hope you grow to like her even more in the future.
ur welcome dear, and like i sed im sure will go on to love madhu more and more! :)