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PART1
Ello my gawjus...so glad ur bak bbe!! :D
thank u hun, glad 2b bak, but now ur not here lol...π
Im finally comenting!! WOOHOO :P hehe
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Ikno im rely late n am rely sory 4 dat.. (> _ ,<)
better late den nevaaa, at least ur here, n dat wot counts...π
Aww tinks u dont kno how much d title of d update gt me all excited!!! Wel i ges by now u wud hav realised dat...havnt u.. :P
well actually I fink I do lol...I hav a phD on u by now lool...π
Nywyz now bout d update...hmm so wer shal i strt *ahem..missy clearing her throat*
wen ur ready...π³
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...for starters...i wanted 2 know ke gaurav ne aisi kaun si baat keh di ke naku ko itna socha aur pareshan hona para...?!?! wa was d 'most shocking news eva... *missy wonders*
well Missy didn't get it, so Tink has posted it in the next chapter now...π
Aww my bby dutta stuk..ukno i truely understnd wa hes goin thru..i jus hahte it wen ppl say dey wana tel u suma real imp n den say l8r..it rely pissz u off! Nd ofc our gadha dsnt hav a thng caled patience in him *bilkul meri tarah ;-) *
yeah yeah Mish, we all now how much u wanna show the world how much u n Dutta 'r made 4 each other' ππ, but yeh I no wot u mean man, wen ppl say tell u later, n u start finking all these tings in ur mind...π³, even I ain't got patience man, I hate waiting...π
Lekin hamara sher wit a lot of courage forces himself 4 stay calm...BRAVO!! this must rely be so hard 4 him LOL since we know him a lil 2 wel ;-)
definitely hard for him, dats y he dnt no how to tame himself, but nonetheless trying...π
Hmm wel D we know u r ready 4 *ahem* everythng ;-) *blush*
girl dis guy was born ready, or shall I say 'born dis way' lol, but den I'm not really a big fan of Lady Gaga, but dat songs alwryt...π³
Aree wah!! Since wen did he strt praying 4 nakus bappa..?! *missy luks astonished* yeh toh chamatkar ho gaya!!! LMAO
jai ho...jai ho...π
Omg he soundz so cute wen he said 'i must be a despo' LOL!
π€£ I no innit, but den we've all kinda bin der, wen we need sumones help who u thought u wudn't ask in a million years, but den wot do u go n do, u get despo looo...π
Dutta is feelin complete now..dsnt evn need 2 physically be wit her 2 feel her...LOVE IS IN THE AIR... <3
yeah the air in his lungs loool...βΊοΈ
Or is it...
yeah in his lungs...I jus sed so...ππ
PYAR TOH HONA HI THA...PYAR TOH HONA HI THA... <3
tu tu tu ru, parapaa paaa raaa rri raa, } 2
ra ra ri ra ra, ra ra ra ri ra } 2
haiii haiii haiii hai hai hai...
sorry cudn't help it, I actually really luv dis song, one 4rm my typical list...π
Aww bles ukno wen dutta sed he stil wnted 'that closeness of intimacy made him feel secure in the sense that she really was his' it jus refected his inner fear of loosing her...poor guy...hes lost sum1 he love or thought he loved previously...wohi darr abh naku ko khone ka bhi hai...ukno dis feeling must be so scary especially as its with u always..u might 4get about it 4 a moment but it stil creeps up spesh during d most memorable moments in ur life..it creeps up so slyly n brings bak 2 reality from ur daydreams...okay i beter stop my bashan here lol
u no actually dat was a gud bashan...π, really well described lol, I cudn't hav sed it in better words myself, honestly...π, dat is exactly wot he fears, but yeh der is sum sense of dat guy fing of 'gettin sum' lool...π³π³
Hmm D dos r all d thngs bout naku dat onli u cud see...
yep
Ohh so he is aware of all d gyals hu stil linger arnd him...am surprised hes nt bigheaded bot it all lol but den agen its D wer tlkin bout ;-)
well he prob is, but I jus havn't dat side of it yet, but dats y I mentioned it cos he no's he makes the ladies go weak in the knees,upon the sight of him...βΊοΈ
Yep D u finally using ur brain nd going d right way...keep it all in mind wen naku reveals 2 u d ultimate truth!!! PLS DONT ACT LIKE A GADHA ... DO
yes he got a brain 4rm the gr8 Oz, coz he was clever enuff to follow the yellow brick road loool...ππ, n he got a heart free in form of a clock wich is now ticking down to his real stormd dat landed him in Oz 4 a short whileππππππ...sorry u no me...ππ³π³π³
ACCEPT MY HUBMLE REQUEST TO U :P
R E Q U E S T S L O W L Y R E G I S T E R I N G
Tinks i jus loved the way u added in sum bits wich r totaly un-dutta-like...like 'see ur a natural' rely brings a smile on d readers face..n keeps d atmosphere light even in d most tense situations...loved this cheekiness of his...so cutee <3
c, dats wot I was tryna say about him being a bit of a casanova u no wot I mean, but the fing is wen ur in a situation like dat ppl often try to fink of a way to make the problemo luk a bit better, I mena who wants 2 sit n cry, like the real dramas lool
Awww both love birds raaton ki aur din ka chain kho diya hai [[sory but had 2 add dat ;-) hehe]] <333
...nice addition...ππ
Ikno am askin agen but seriously wa has gaurav sed dat naku is so nervouss about...?? is it dat she has 2 do d FR b4 d competition o suma...wel der defo is more dn dis..dat i kno lol
well I'm gonna use Gaurav's words here..."My way, or the higway"
...well go find out lol, otherwise I'm gonna be here a lot longer den expected...ππ, u'll find out soon...π
Ukno wa tinks...i jus loved hw naku in her mind was goin thru wa if's of d whole situation...all d negativ n +tive thngz ... its sucha girly thng 2 do...wel in my case anywy..i always do it lol ... mainly of d postive side..so den i can daydream bout wa ifit rely hapend n get all excited LOL sounds crazy ano lol hehe
ditto man...π
Same here, dis scene is sooo me, I do exactly dat,try to fink of woteva way it can go, n den mentally try to preapre myself if I fink the situation is likely to go dat way...π
Wa is her fav song dem?? Wa was she humming..im actuly rely curious...
eeehhh u picked up on dat, u no, knowing me u no I wudda put the song in, but I didn't do dat on purpose, coz there is her favourtie song yet to reveal,but lemme tell u one ting, unlike the rest of her songs dis one is actually a typical choice...π³π³π³
Ohh yeh finaly we gona get 1 of d most awaited moments...er no no im not tlkin bout the kiss here or d FR so dw :P i tlkin bout d scene i rely wanted at d strt of dis ff..piano scne wit dutta listening 2 it without her knowing!!! :D
I sooo knew it wud be u...( n dats not the lottery I'm talkin about lol, although dat wudda bin gud ), wen I was writing I thought u wud prob like dat more den the kiss...er do u...π, n I did promise u in d beginning of dis ff dat dat scene wud cum...π³π³
Hmm now wa exactly did she hav in mind wen she gav da sseductive smiles n stf... not d unexpected kiss obviously...so now i do rely wonda..hmm...
lol how about *hint hint* towards the title...π, her 'fanstasy kiss'
Aww it must rely hrut knowing d thng u dream about d most...with d acknowledgement dat u wud never be able 2 get it..in dis case nakus 'stupid but wierd dream' [[>>quoted dis 4 a reason]]..
ok so wots the reason, I'm gonna b turning in2 d slow on here now...ππ³
Loved d song choice!! Im a big piano fan..jus love hearin it..cnt play it myself tho lol...wish i cud...its jus soo romantic...*sigh*
I luv it 2 bits, I get dis weird feeling wen I hear piano music espesh a particular song, so ur lyk Roops, who wants to watch but no play...π
Nd yehe i totaly take it dat its very soothing..!!
wickeddd innit...i jus luv it, u must've heard the song...??π
Awww bless she backd off cuz she dsnt kno hw 2 kiss...dutta msut find dis so amusing lol [[tbh evn i...actualy 4get it shudnt say dis here lol]]
well it happens to d worst of us lol, it ain't suttin u go n do a course on now is it...π, n wot is u were gonna say, u no dats gonna bother me now...π³...????
Omg she is aware dat her saab can be very naughty n wudnt let her off..loved the way u phrased dat bit LMAO
aaw thanks...π³βΊοΈ
Nd ukno wa i jus cnt wait 2 propely see that side of his *ahem ahem*
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG, I can't believe u, well actually I can, but I cnt believe u spilt the beans lol...well I wonder wots gonna happen 2u we u read dat scene lol...coz it's gonna b a little...erm...well...er...kinda censored...if u lyk 2 call it...but den nutting is gonna happen if u get me...but it will be portrayed dat way,...oh just w8 4 it, n u'll c wot I mean, if u memba by den lol...π
Omg i cnt beliv naku sed she cn get thru it all her life! I wonda wa she wud say/tink bout goin all d way...bechara dutta lool
lol she doesn't fink about stuff like dat...yet...n Dutta ain't no bechara, he runs Naku lool...π
Okay ukno wer nakku can feel his present..his tuch on her body etc..wen she was goin thru all dos emotions...wa n wer exactly was D..ikno am bein abit 2 specific but it mke thngs more visual..ukno like whether dutta was around admiring her..cuming closer etc..
yeah Mish, I get it u want ur personal trailer lol...no problemo...π
Hmm naku abh kya hua lol wa bout ur 'stayin witout being kissd all ur life' lol .. bless her.. her dreams r jus like any ordinary gurl... <3
wen u got a guide kissed like Dutta who'd wanna get thru thier life widout being kissed by a super hunk like him...π³
Eekkk he ddnt put his shirt on!! I can jus imagine d reaction sum of d gyalz on here on dat 1!!! Inc kirannn!! LMAO but ukno i rely wanted 2 see wa was goin thru nakus mind wen she saw dutta like dis.cz im sure she wudv got red all over!! ;-)
well the fact dat she was facing the other way helped her miss dat important but little detail lol...but even I'm a weakass wen it cums 2 shirtless guys...ask Suvi lool...π, but yeh coz her n Dutta started kissing n were so like absorbed in dat moment she didn't clock on his shirt lol, until after wen she put her hand on his chest...π
Ha i bet evn dutta was shokd bout his wish bein granted in matter of minutes!! He must be tinkin 'i shud rely pray 2 bappa more often' lol
lol exactly, I wish Bappa wud listen to me like dat too...π
Haha surprise surprise..luks like sensible naku broker rules lol
2 ryt bout not stoping sum1 4 dreaming atleast..how totaly me!! :D
well the truth is ur either dis way about suttin or dat way, n lets say naku's crossed the borders wid one kiss lol
CNT POST ALL MY COMENT HERE...EXCEEDIN WRD LIMIT LOL...CHEK D POST BELOW ;-)
huni ur talkin 2 expert here in posting mega long posts lol...wen dat msg cums dw about it, just go back 2ur empty post n paste it agen n it will post lol...providing u copied n pasted it...π
But neways meet u in abit...π...
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