FF Deewani#2 Ch 43, pg149, DISABLED - Page 53

Originally posted by: daya0628

tink jaldi update kar na 😳

btw thanks for lovely wishes i did reply but i dunno if you saw so me saying it again Thank you :D

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

 

yeah i'm gonna update 2mrw morning, dis one's long...😳, n my next update won't go up wid out Mish's comment lol...abh baat zidd ki hai...😆

 

 

er no I didn't c it, will go n take a luk, n ur welcum babez...🤗

lol i will chase missy tmmrw for comments 😆

Originally posted by: daya0628

lol i will chase missy tmmrw for comments 😆

Edited by scorpio10 - 12 years ago

Hi Tinks , lovely  update , loved the steamy scene , way  to  go  and hmm , wondering whn will Dutta kiss her in the rain or shower ,, when will he learn abt her truth , how will he react , is he ready ? and nakku's  reply abt handling a drunkwife was awesome ,, waiting for the nxt part eagerly hope u able to update soon 😉

tink!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

 

 

ok Mish woteva u say lol...only tym will tell if ur tellin the truth dis tym...😛😛😛, but yeah once u've posted ur comment everyone else can expect the update in the next half hour loool of u posting it...so I guess I really held u to dat one den huh...😆😛

 

 

Missy update ur comment...i want next update  LOL :P

haha wow 3 pgs of comments...even i a m curious

PART1

Ello my gawjus...so glad ur bak bbe!! :D

 

 

Im finally comenting!! WOOHOO :P hehe

 

 

Ikno im rely late n am rely sory 4 dat.. (> _ ,<)

 

 

Aww tinks u dont kno how much d title of d update gt me all excited!!! Wel i ges by now u wud hav realised dat...havnt u.. :P

 

 

Nywyz now bout d update...hmm so wer shal i strt *ahem..missy clearing her throat*

 

 

 

...for starters...i wanted 2 know ke gaurav ne aisi kaun si baat keh di ke naku ko itna socha aur pareshan hona para...?!?! wa was d 'most shocking news eva... *missy wonders*

 

 

 

Aww my bby dutta stuk..ukno i truely understnd wa hes goin thru..i jus hahte it wen ppl say dey wana tel u suma real imp n den say l8r..it rely pissz u off! Nd ofc our gadha dsnt hav a thng caled patience in him *bilkul meri tarah ;-) *

 

 

 

Lekin hamara sher wit a lot of courage forces himself 4 stay calm...BRAVO!! this must rely be so hard 4 him LOL since we know him a lil 2 wel ;-)

 

 

 

Hmm wel D we know u r ready 4 *ahem* everythng ;-) *blush*

 

 

 

Aree wah!! Since wen did he strt praying 4 nakus bappa..?! *missy luks astonished* yeh toh chamatkar ho gaya!!! LMAO

 

 

 

Omg he soundz so cute wen he said 'i must be a despo' LOL!

 

 

 

Dutta is feelin complete now..dsnt evn need 2 physically be wit her 2 feel her...LOVE IS IN THE AIR... <3

 

 

Or is it...

 

 

PYAR TOH HONA HI THA...PYAR TOH HONA HI THA... <3

 

 

 

Aww bles ukno wen dutta sed he stil wnted 'that closeness of intimacy made him feel secure in the sense that she really was his' it jus refected his inner fear of loosing her...poor guy...hes lost sum1 he love or thought he loved previously...wohi darr abh naku ko khone ka bhi hai...ukno dis feeling must be so scary especially as its with u always..u might 4get about it 4 a moment but it stil creeps up spesh during d most memorable moments in ur life..it creeps up so slyly n brings bak 2 reality from ur daydreams...okay i beter  stop my bashan here lol

 

 

 

Hmm D dos r all d thngs bout naku dat onli u cud see...

 

 

 

Ohh so he is aware of all d gyals hu stil linger arnd him...am surprised hes nt bigheaded bot it all lol but den agen its D wer tlkin bout ;-)

 

 

 

Yep D u finally using ur brain nd going d right way...keep it all in mind wen naku reveals 2 u d ultimate truth!!! PLS DONT ACT LIKE A GADHA ... DO

 

 

ACCEPT MY HUBMLE REQUEST TO U :P

 

 

 

Tinks i jus loved the way u added in sum bits wich r totaly un-dutta-like...like 'see ur a natural' rely brings a smile on d readers face..n keeps d atmosphere light even in d most tense situations...loved  this cheekiness of his...so cutee <3

 

 

 

Awww both love birds raaton ki aur din ka chain kho diya hai [[sory but had  2 add dat ;-) hehe]] <333

 

 

 

Ikno am askin agen but seriously wa has gaurav sed dat naku is so nervouss about...?? is it dat she has 2 do d FR b4 d competition o suma...wel der defo is more dn dis..dat i kno lol

 

 

 

Ukno wa tinks...i jus loved hw naku in her mind was goin thru wa if's of d whole situation...all d negativ n +tive thngz ... its sucha girly thng 2 do...wel in my case anywy..i always do it lol ... mainly of d postive side..so den i can daydream bout wa ifit rely hapend n get all excited LOL sounds crazy ano lol hehe

 

 

 

Wa is her fav song dem?? Wa was she humming..im actuly rely curious...

 

 

 

Ohh yeh finaly we gona get 1 of d most awaited moments...er no no im not tlkin bout the kiss here or d FR so dw :P i tlkin bout d scene i rely wanted at d strt of dis ff..piano scne wit dutta listening 2 it without her knowing!!! :D

 

 

 

Hmm now wa exactly did she hav in mind wen she gav da sseductive smiles n stf... not d unexpected kiss obviously...so now i do rely wonda..hmm...

 

 

 

Aww it must rely hrut knowing d thng u dream about d most...with d acknowledgement dat u wud never be able 2 get it..in dis case nakus 'stupid but wierd dream' [[>>quoted dis 4 a reason]]..

 

 

 

Loved d song choice!! Im a big piano fan..jus love hearin it..cnt play it myself tho lol...wish i cud...its jus soo romantic...*sigh*

 

 

 

Nd yehe i totaly take it dat its very soothing..!!

 

 

 

Awww bless she backd off cuz she dsnt kno hw 2 kiss...dutta msut find dis so amusing lol [[tbh evn i...actualy 4get it shudnt say dis here lol]]

 

 

 

Omg she is aware dat her saab can be very naughty n wudnt let her off..loved the way u phrased dat bit LMAO

 

 

 

Nd ukno wa i jus cnt wait 2 propely see that side of his *ahem ahem*

 

 

 

Omg i cnt beliv naku sed she cn get thru it all her life! I wonda wa she wud say/tink bout goin all d way...bechara dutta lool

 

 

 

Okay ukno wer nakku can feel his present..his tuch on her  body etc..wen she was goin thru all dos emotions...wa n wer exactly was D..ikno am bein abit 2 specific but it mke thngs more visual..ukno like whether dutta was around admiring her..cuming closer etc..

 

 

 

Hmm naku abh kya hua lol wa bout ur 'stayin witout being kissd all ur life' lol .. bless her.. her dreams r jus like any ordinary gurl... <3

 

 

 

Eekkk he ddnt put his shirt on!! I can jus imagine d reaction sum of d gyalz on here on dat 1!!! Inc kirannn!! LMAO but ukno i rely wanted 2 see wa was goin thru nakus mind wen she saw dutta like dis.cz im sure she wudv got red all over!! ;-)

 

 

 

Ha i bet evn dutta was shokd bout his wish bein granted in matter of minutes!! He must be tinkin 'i shud rely pray 2 bappa more often' lol

 

 

 

Haha surprise surprise..luks like sensible naku broker rules lol

2 ryt bout not stoping sum1 4 dreaming atleast..how totaly me!! :D

 

 

 

 

CNT POST ALL MY COMENT HERE...EXCEEDIN WRD LIMIT LOL...CHEK D POST BELOW ;-)

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 12 years ago

PART2...

Awww naku is duttas top most priority..so cute it was funny hw he sed alcohol is stil his 2^nd priority LMAO

Haha dutta ur soo adorable...n ur not jus bappas fav person ;-)

Loved how he sed 'out of all songs in the world she chooses a song with the word kiss in it...which is exactly what she refuses to give him' i can jus imagine him sighing n lukin adorable doin it!! *daydreams*

Hmm luks lykour D learned suma new 2day lol 'being turned on witout physcl contct'.. god D ofc its possible :P LOL

Awww bby dw of shes tinkin bout u nyh it defo is turnin her on aswel!! ;-)

Absolutly loved hw d kiss strtd of wit openin hair 1^st n goin dwn 2 her neck etc..rather den attacking her lips str8 away lol

Awww gud 2 kno dat naku realisd dat dis is it..no more escapades hehe

Ukno i myt sound lyk a ryt besharam n an idiot but i ddnt get how her kissd her lips without turnin her around..if u get wa i mean..im jus erm curious...lol

Yep naku u beter be redy but not jus 4 a taster lol nd if dis was a taster den god ul be dead wen its tym 4 d main meal nvm dessert LMAO!! ;-)

Readin d eyes bit was truely adorable...shws love insted of lust..in a way der isnt much diff b/n d 2 but den agen it der is huge gap ap b/n dem...yh ikno .. it complicated stf loool

Aww dutta giv d gurl a chnce 2 breahte man!! Haha

Poor gurl dus wana see d daylight lol

Ohh piano bhi KMH ban gaya abhi!! Chalo baji nahi toh yeh hi sahi LOL

Lol naku nt bein able 2 resist herlf 4rm feelin him up hehe

Areee yeh lo abi abhi kiss finish hui hai n nakus sahi/galat ka bashan shuru!! Tut tut lol

Absolutly lloved d after-kiss convo b /n dem!! It was so ocute...cud totaly sense nakus nervousness

Haha u go D..lol hes is bein so cheeky wen he sed hes alredy kissd her so evn its its nt right...ders nufin dey cn do bouti t now :P u tel er D!! LOL

Hum to sab...kya ;-) LOL

Omg ofc d perfect way 2 correct ur 'doing' is by returning it!! LMFAOOO!!!

So naku wa r u waiting 4 :P hehe

Hahaha naku pakri gayi!!! Told d truth 1^sttime lol loved dis bit...haha

Awww dutta understnds her more den shes herslf dus!! <3

Ha bet dutta is now glad dat she hasnt ben taught hw 2 kiss!!!! Warna gaurav ko D aise luks deta ke..*shudders evn at d thought of it* LOL

Yep praticals are alwaysfar more 'interestin n 'enjoyable'den theoretical part!! ;-) hehe

Godd i jus love his naughtiness!! Its damn cute!

Okay ukno her dream..i ddnt thought it was at all wierd n duna y any 1 of us wud tink dat lol...dey wud either be d most unromantic person eva o a ryt saddo...[[no offence intendd upon ny1..]]

Its 1 of my mny fantasies...*blush* rain can be so romantic...*sigh* ... lyk naku i always drmt d sme...lol

Oh dis time shes leavin 4 real...wich only means tasha romance is ending soon 4 dis update :(

I loved d last bit the most man...both of dem giving an overall view n d impact dat kiss had on dem

Bet naku is glad 2 kno dat she wont find any more lipstick stains oon his shirt oda den hers... LOL

Even tho bth tasha wud hav realised realised dat dey wud onli kiss 1 anoda all der life..or wud wnt 2...i was so sweet d way dutta pointed it out...kinda like reassuring naku dat 4 him its onli naku n no! Els...bless

Oh i jus love it wen dutta blushes..shies away..more dden naku...its soo cutee!!< 3

Omg i was actualy waiting 4 naku 2 mention or rather dant-ing dutta 4 drinking LMAO!!! But naku toh naku hai..she has 2 do it hatke ;-)

Nd yeh he answer as always amuses nt onli dutta but me also...kya impact chor ke gayi hai dutta pee ;-)

Ddnt kno she had d guts 2 say dat man..

Hahaha now tinks su myt hav anoda update redy wer we/dutta finds naku drunk ;-) omg dat wud rely b 1 awesome scene!!! *hint hint*

Oh yeh it beter be 'so far' insted of 'ever'!! ;-) :P hehe

Ooohhh D finkin of der HM?!!!! WOOHOO!! Cnt beliv dis D is using his brains man!!! Keep it ma boi!! LOL

Even i wonda wa kind place she wud prefer ... mayb a lil cottage sumwer nice..ukno propa fairytales style...okay i tink i beter stop tinkin lol

SHOWER?!! NOW DIS HAS 2 B D BEST IDEA DUTTA HAS COME UP WIT SO FAR!!! LOL

Ofc shower wud do man!! Das 1 gud thng bout dem so y not mke d most of it ;-)

Yeh we kno dat D..nd we definatly wil b waiting 4 dat ;-)

Loved d lil reference bak 2 nakus bappa...naku ka asar ho raha hai iss par LOL

Okaay den im done wit d coment..FINALYY LOL!!

Enjoy reading...its jus as long as ur update lol

Sowi agen 4 d delay bbe...

Love u lots hun

Lukin 4wrd 4 d nxt update...in haf n hr :P

mwahhhxxx

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628

Missy update ur comment...i want next update  LOL :P

haha wow 3 pgs of comments...even i a m curious