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FF***ENIGMA***- THREAD 3 (Page 43)

TinkJia Senior Member

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
kuriyee 1hour kad da hogya!!! where r u?
PLz update!

rs12345 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged
keya  me still waiting...
crazydevil87 Goldie

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
pls keya jaldi kro...waiting...
FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged

sorry for mistakes
ignore past precap... it changed slightly...

The fact that how this girl devoted my mind I could not explain. I may self have no control on the urge of my eyes that how hungrily it was looking at her. Every angel it only showed perfection. Pure perfection. Nothing wrong could be uttered about her. She is simply a breathtaking beauty. I rather die then see her with someone els. The affection was only became over welling, the feeling it self have it's own mind, playing trick with every so often. Like I an hulusinatiog! Just one problem in everything I only could see her face! Take few moment ago for instance, my lips nearly kissed a tree. This girl is taking me to the insanity. Her breathtaking beauty have no limit. I am the luckiest man to be in this lonely island with her!- yet here she is, would not leave a single exiting second to let me enjoy the unconditional affection I hold for her. She have to distract.
Geet "sir! What are you looking at? Hurry up!" she snaps.
Maan "coming!"
Geet "this is not your house! Its a jungle! You have to hurry up! We have to find water soon!"
Maan "like I am the one who is walking like a ant!"
Geet "how exactly I am walking like an ant!" she asked annoyingly. & stood behind maan with arm cross.
Maan "you are behind me! I am not behind you! So who is walking slow!"
Geet "i am trying to push you!" maan roles his eyes.
Maan "what trying to push me like this?" he pokes geets hand ever so gently.
Geet "OuCH!"
Maan "don't you dare over react. I did not even touch you!"
Geet "so! You did pike! Awww!"
Maan "natunki!"
Geet "I don't! You do! You are such a lady type of man!"
Maan "what?"
Geet "oh lady wala man hi na! Like even a single touch you awwss! Oopoo!" geet was trying her best to control the giggle! Did not work.
Maan "that's all had enough!" but before he could say a word some people with red tattu surrounded them. It's tribe! Red tribe. Geet instantly came in maans hug. While he securely putting his hand round her. Bringing her in his embrace.

Tribe 1 "wigggabugggawuggg!"
Tribe 2 "bugggabugaahalajabnsms"

They point some sharp dagger at them.
Maan "look! We don't understand! But we are not here to fight!"

Tribe 1 "wyhgggahahahkdbdnj" there was about 12 tribes. Just around them!

Maan "we... No ... Here to fight! We need water! Water!" he points at his mouth!" but to late.. Something sharp injects there neck... & bluff!!!!!!!!!!!!

I slowly open my eyes. Still everything is so burly. & upside down. Maan looked round in condition... Trying to locate him self... Then he realized, he is upside down. Sponing. He felt sick. Then suddenly he also realized. He is bare. Something covering his private & that's all! & few tribe girls staring at him!

Tribe language...
Tribe "welcome welcome! We have managed to capture a unknown beast in our museum. As you observe his every muscle look, how sexy he looks."

Nothing was making sense to maan. All he could gather was eugggaganamsnns!!!!!!!

Tribe "you may touch as he still alive. Get the feeling. Some girls came... Stroking his bicep, broad. Chest... Some licked his stomach!
Maan "what? What the he'll are you doing? Leave me alone! GEET! GEET!!!"
Girls won't leave him aline. He join self have to do something. Maan bends upwards. Luckily his hand was untide. His muscle contract & relaxed further. They all thinking he is trying to put on a show. They clapped & wooed... Afte few minutes if straggle he managed to break free. Jumping down to the ground... Ae backed way... Some came closer...
Maan "back way! I am warning you!
Tribe "wugggaganibsgsbsal"
Maan "geet!!!! Geet!!!" he shouts. No answer.

Tribe "catch the wild beast. Make sure he does not escape!" maan took his chance and ran out of the gap. Scream moong geets name... She screamed back as he was passing by some house... Geet also tightly glued against the tree...
Some male & female. Trying to get some glimpse of her beauty. UFf that made him supper jealous. He instantly ran towards the crowed... Made his way & hugged her tight. She also wearing a similar cloths hiding her chest & private part..
Geet "hurry! Hurry!"
Maan "I am trying!"
Crowd started to come closer but maan freed her & ran to the opposite direction...
Tribes were sliding across trees to trees.. It's easily convinced they will get cought.

next- the run

if you have time pls do lv some comments

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Ha ha ha. They were licking his stomach. And wo Geet Geet chilla raha he.ROFLROFLROFL

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avantika_singh Senior Member

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
OH God !!!Embarrassed!
i never thought Maan and Geet will land in such a situationLOL
Amazing and me dying to knw wat will happen next
sooo pleseee continueWink

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
you made us wait for so long & such a short update OuchAngry
it was funny thoughTongue
next time plz make it longStar

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