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FF -'''battle of love and fear '[part 3upd. pg 15] (Page 7)

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bfolnmdj

hey akanksha !

really interesting start !  do add me in the pm list  Big smile


---Ifrah
thxx ifrah..added u dear..i willl pm uSmile

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Tich...

nice concept akansha.. mohabbatein in lnmdj way. loved it.
the character is very nice.. please start soon..
thxx tich..dat vm is made by deepika..ita awssum naWinkWink
i will update soonSmile

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:32am | IP Logged

                       

 
              SCENE -1
 

It was early in the morning..warm so bright..birds were chirping at the edge of woods..shekhar dhanraj was already awaken & rejoicing the moments..he was feeeding bait to the pigeons & sparrows..

mr. dhanraj[to himself]-kitna acha lagta hai..agar sab kuch niyam aur kaayde kaanon se ho..in gurukul ki hawao mai pichle 28 saalo se kabhi koi milawat nahi aayi hai..aur aage bhi ye ek hi dishao mai bahengi..jo sirf sacchai aur vafadari ki pehchaan hai..

it was obvious that the feeling ''love''

is not a part of his life..he was all alone with his statistics..,dominance and daft behaviour..he has taken an oath that the plesantries or feast cannot become the part of gurukul...there;s always a wall standing between gurukul and outer world...

                          SCENE-2

In the afternoon..a taxi stopped near the main gate of gurukul..a boy nealy 23-25 year old..tall & very handsome..stteped out from it..he stood in front of the gate of gurukul..

''yahi hai meri manzil

 
 
waqt aa gaya hai..aapne aap ko sabit karne ka''

he felt pleased tha he had finally reached his destination..he slowly walked towards the gate..when the watchman stood up in order to stop him..

watchman-ji..kisse milna hai??

boy-mai prithvi..[he said faintly]

watchman-acha..naye ho??

prihvi-ji haa..kya mai andar jaa sakta hu??

watchman-haa..bilkul jao..[he opens the door]

Prithvi was a bit frightened..he censored that this place is very quite and calm..and why not?afterall it was in the dominance of mr. shekhar dhanraj..who is popular for their ruthless and straight forward behaviour..

prithvi bust in the room that was alloted to him..

prithvi[in his mind]-hmm..room to kaafi acha hai...[he says while keeping his luggage]

mai yah akela to rehne se raha...[he reflected]..i hope jo bhi ho.he should be sincere one..

                       SCENE-3

A black car was coming which slowly fades and finally stops at the main gate of gurukul..a boy whose eyes were covered with the sunglasses..he slamed the door of car...motioned his driverto leave..

he was tresspassing through the gate..when that watchman stops him...

watchman-arrey bhai..kaha ghusse chale aa rahe ho??

the boy removes his glasses from eyes..in full attitude..

''tum kaun hote ho mujhe ye poochne wale..''

watchman-mai yaha ka guard hu..aur tum kaun??

boy-tum mujhe nahi jante..sameer khandelwal ko nahi jante..mere dad ne mujhe yaha padne ke liye bheja hai..varna mai apni marzi se yaha kabhi nahi aata..[he luks here n there]

watchman-acha..to aisa kaho na..aao andar..[he signified]

sameer-hmm..ab aaye na line par..

 
he was startled..as soon as he was proceeding

sam[to himself]-abey ye kya hai??..itna sunsaan ...

he was walking steady and soon reached to the room...he knocked the door..

sam-arrey koi hai..

prithvi opened the door..sameer was yawning..prithvi welcomed him courteously..

prithvi-hi..come inside..

sam entered in the room and cried ''ye kya hai''

prithvi become shocked..kya hua??

sam-ye room to shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya yaar..

prithvi-jaise bhi hai..hume isi mai rehna hai..[he consoles him]

sam-i think u r rite..hi i'm sameer khandelwal..naam to suna hi hoga[he flared his hands]

prithvi-this is prithvi..

they both shook their hands...

sam-acha ye batao ki yaha rooms aur garden ke alawa kuch aur hai bhi??

prithvi-pata nahi..mera bhi aaj pehla hi din hai..

they both started conversation...

prithvi-this gurukul is very splendour.

sam-and their is stillness all over...it seems like wind are also ordered to blow in a particular direction only..

sameer told him that he came here reluctantly...& prithvi told him about his family..

sam-acha yaar ye bata mujhe ek aur bed dikhai de raha hai..it means ki hamare saath koi aur bhi rahega..rite??

 
prithvi-me too thinks so sam..i can call u sam na..[he asked]

sam-offcourse dude!! u can call me anything that u like..[he gives hard on his chest]

when a rustling sound marred their talks..a boy was coming towards the room..as fast as he could..he was holding his bag and some books..when suddenly the books spilled down..he exclamate ''oh..WTH!!!

sam-oh..a'm sorry yaar..[he apologised]

boy-no..its kk[he said briskly]

 
prithvi peered out the gate in order to see what is happening...

sam asked him to come inside...

prithvi welcomed him gleefully...

prihvi & sameer introduced themselves to the boy..

boy-i'm varun mehta..nice to meet both of u..

sam-tumne mera naam to suna hi hoga..

varun-umm...nahi..

they all grinned..

varun-u guys r awsssum..

sam-aare hume tujhse milkar double khushi hui..[he said in his nautanki way]

varun-yaha library kaha hai..?

sam-kahi tu raat bhar jagkar to nahi padega na..mujhe neend nahi aayegi[in fully nautanki style]

prithvi-nahi..agar tumhe padna ho to we have no problem..[he makes a smiley face]

varun-dont worry mai itna padaku bhi nahi hu..

sam-to fir to tujhe..

he rumbled varun and took him to the window of their room

''vo dekh hamare room ke bilkul samne girls hostel hai...

varun-mujhe pata hai[he said innocently]

sam-lo..pata hai..dekha prithvi ..ye to humse bhi aage nikla[he raises his voice]..

prithvi-sam ..tu kyu pareshan kar raha hai isse..[he whinned]

come here varun...take some rest..u must be exhausted..

varun-thx..thats really so sweet of u..[he makes a smiley face]

                        SCENE-4

In the evening sam was lying on the bed..& playing game..in his phone..prithvi was solving the puzzle and varun as usual reading the book..placidly..

suddenly sam leeped up from the bed..

''jeet gaya''..

prithvi & varun both stood up with amazement...

prithvi-sameer tu pagal hai kya..

varun-ha..mai to darr hi gaya..

sameer-kya yaar...kitne boring ho tum dono..ye sab band karo..[he snatches the book from prithvi & varun ]

they both were starring sameer blankly..

prithvi-tu ye kya kar raha hai..??

varun-sameer plz mujhe meri book vapas karo..!!![he motioned]

sameer-dnt worry guys..mil jayengi..mil jayengi..thodi thand rakho..[he convicted]

 
pehle ye batao ki tum logo ko kabhi koi pasand nahi aaya..kabhi kisi se pyaar nahi hua..??

prithvi-hum yaha pyaar nahi padai karne aaye hai..

sam-ye mujhe bhi pata hai..par tumne socha to hoga hi na..ki tumhe kaisi ladki chahiye..

he becums serious...& so prithvi and varun..it was a dilemma for prithvi and varun..

prithvi slowly walk towards the window..a gint on his face..

sameer & varun both wer lukin at prithvi..

prithvi disclosed..

''vo ladki jise mai apne liye pasand karu..use bado ki respect karna aana chahiye..jo palat kar jawab na de..she shud be lax..shud be a homemeker..aur sabse badi baat use apni limits pata hone chahiye..

sameer gave a big hand..on prithvi's lines..

sam-maan gaye...ye jo saari qualities hai na..ek ladki mai to milne nahi vali..jaisa tu hai na tere upar to kisi bijli ka girna jaroori hai..kyu varun??

varun was himself lost in deep thoughts..

sam clicked in front of his eyes..

sam-kaha kho gaya..??apni vali ke khayalo mai? hmm...

varun hesitates..''nahi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..vo bas meri friend thi..''.he stops after sayin dat..

sameer teases him..''humne to poocha hi nahi kaun thi..

bata na varun kya baat hai..??

after convincing a lot he agreed..

varun-actullly hum saath padte the..saath homework karte hai..v wer used to be together everytime..

                     
 
prithvi-fir kya hua..??

varun-then she left dat place..suna hai vo yahi rehti hai..[he folds his arms]

prithvi-kya!!! fir to tujhe use dhooondne ki koshish karni chahiye...

varun-are u kidding me?? dis is a big country...

sam-arre dhoondne par to bhagwan hi mil jaate hai..fir to ye ek ordinari ladki hai..

varun-nahi yaar..vo to bachpan ki baatein thi..ab meri manzil kuch aur hai..[it was obvious nw dat love is nomore in his life]

ab mujhe apni books vapas milengi??[he was heading towards sameer]

prithvi stopped him..

prithvi-ruk ja varun ye humse pooch raha hai..nw its time to take his class..

prithvi-tujhe kaisi ladki chahiye..??

sam-mujhe..mujhe to koi bhi chalegi..[he was trying to skin]

varun-koi bhi matlab...andhi..behri..langdi?he asked with elation]

sameer flickered and shouts..''varun''

varun and prithvi started running sameer took a pillow & runnin behind that..they were doing pillow fight..all wer havin a nice laugh!!!

                   ~~precap~~

        damini and roshni's entry..



Edited by akansha_lnmdj - 27 May 2011 at 1:29am

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
hey nice intro of the boys. loved it. Oh my God! Pri ke choice tohLOL. sach mei bijli girna hi padega.
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Hi Akansha, luved it. Entry of Prithvi, Sameer nd Varun was perfect. Sameer as usual is nautanki nd Varun is very studious. Waiting for Girls entry, also Prithvi Damini's first meeting. Waiting eagerly for the next update.
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
it was awesome loved it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
loved the boys entry.. waiting for the girls..
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged

awww very  nice intro…sameer s sdeucha a nautanki

I luved dey were having fun…n de dia were really good…..

Awesum waiting for girls entry…dis ff s gonna be loads of fun J)

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