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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akansha_lnmdj

han yaar pagal hai kya i noe dat u shalvi😊

hehe oksss πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
                   
 
 
                                                        
 
                                           SCENE-5
 
 

There was some time for emerging of sun above the horizon..

Prithvi and varun was already started making arrangements for their first day..both were getting ready for their assembly..

Varun-prithvi u noe wat..i'm so excited..to become the part of this gurukul..

Prithvi-u are already dear..

Varun-ye sameer kyu nahi uth raha??time to hone wala hai..

Prithvi-mai kya karu..kitni koshish ki ..awaaz de de kar gala baith gaya..pata nahi kaunsi gehri neend mai hai..ruk ek baar fir se try karta hu..

 
 
He takes a glass of water and split on sameer's face..

Sameer cried..kya hua??kya hua??

He finds prithvi & varun both were laughing on him..

Sameer-kya guys..itni achi neend aa rahi thi..

Varun-sam..hum ja rahe hai..assembly ke liye'tu apni neend poori kar..[he said while setting his tie]

Sameer-arre..ye  kya hua..maine to alarm lagaya tha..[he muttered]

Prithvi-aur alarm baja bhi tha..bas tu hi nahi utha..[he was putting on shoes]

Sameer quickly get up..takes towel and bust into the bathroom..

Varun-chal prithvi..hum chalte hai..ye to pata nahi kab aayega..

They exit from the room'

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It was a big hall.as they were coming closer then crescendo was taking place..shaggy walls all around..and a bobbled emblem of gurukul in the front of wall..

Varun-prithvi..ye to kisi palace ki tarah lag raha hai..

Prithvi-I agree..lets go..

Two boys were talking about mr.dhanraj..they saw prithvi and varun..

Boy1-u both are new??

Prithvi-yes..kal hi join kia hai..i'm prithvi..and he;s varun..

Both the boys introduced themselves'

''hi im mayank and he's samrat..

Finally sameer came in a hustle bustle..

Sam-mission accomplished..

All 4 were startles to see sameer'

Samrat-hey r u allrite??.

Sameer-yes I'm..

Prithvi-badi jaldi aa gaya..

Sameer-acha..kal se late aaunga..

Sameer introduced himself with mayank and samrat..

Sam-arre yaar yaha kuch entertainment ke liye hai bhi ya nahi..i mean no tv..no music..& most importantly no gals..dats not fair..

In the mean time the owner of ''gurukul''..mr.shekhar dhanraj entered in that big hall..

Mayank[very faintly]-it can be entertaining for u sameer..[he chuckles]

 

Sam-shut up mayank..

Mr.dhanraj-''aap sabhi ka iss pavitra jagah gurukul mai swagat hai..yaha sirf vahi students rehte hai jo sirf shiksha lene aate hai..baki kisi bhi faltu ki baat ya cheezo ke liye yaha koi jagah nahi hai..pichle 28 saalo se gurukul ko teen cheezo ne sambhal rakha hai..''maan''..pratishtha''..aur anushasan''..iss gurukul ke kuch niyam hai..kuch kayde kannon hai..jinka aap logo ko sakhti se palan karna hai..jaise ki..

Koi bhi student apne ghar nahi ja sakta sivaye holidays mai..

Dusra ye ki koi bhi student 6 baje ke baad gurukul se bahar nahi ja sakta..

Teesra,gurukul mai kisi bhi tarah ka shorr bardaash nahi kia jayega..

Yahi saari baate hai jinka aapko khayal rakhna hai..aap log gurukul ka naam roshan kare..man laga kar padhai kare ..varna ek baar gurukul se nikaale gaye to fir kahi bhi admission milna namumkin hai..

Waqt ko zyada barbaad na karte hue aap apni khakshao mai jaye..[he ordered in a gentle and grave tone]

 

His all words were like a thunderclap to all of dem and specially for sameer..

Prihvi-uff..hw cranky he is guys..

Sameer-me too feel d same..

Varun-me three..

They all walking slowly towards their classroom..

Mayank-actually ye sab naya nahi hai..haar saal fresh batch ko yahi sab follow karne ke orders diye jate hai..aur ek bhi galti hone par student ko yaha se bahar faink diya jata hai..

Sam-wao!! Yaar itne harsh to mere dad bhi nahi hai..it means thieir is nothing except studies..i mean some sports or other activities..

Prithvi-me too thinks the same..actully im an national level player of basket ball ..

Varun-basket ball khelna to mujhe bhi pasand hai..[he added]

Samrat-vaise har saal basket ball ka match hota hai'if u are interested dan u can also take part..mayank aur mai to pehle se hi team mai hai..

Prithvi-really..dats great kk..we both wana take part..

Mayank-ok..sham 5 baje hum practice karte hai..u guys must reach their..and sameer tum??

Sameer-I''l be also dere..mera in dono ke saath hona bohot zaruri hai..

They all chuckles..& leave for their respective classrooms..

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In the evening..it was 5:30 mayank and samrat were already waiting in the basketbal court..they saw sameer , prithvi and varun comin towards them..they were full of excitement..

Prithvi-what happened guys..??

Mayank-we cant play yaar..construction is going on here..[he was strained]

Varun-hey..this is not done..

Sameer thought for a while.. & came to a pt..

Sameer-guys..i have an idea..

Prithvi-what idea??

Sameer-why cnt we play in the garden??[he gayed]

Varun-but sam..vo toh gals hostel ke bilkul samne hai..

Sameer-varun..tum kitna sochte ho..

Mayank and samrat both were ready to ..they rushed to the coach to take permission that if they can play their or not..

Prithvi..sam and varun were heading towards the garden..

Prithvi-I hope coach maan jaye'

Sameer-dnt worry we shud start playing now.

Varun-I think sam is rite..

Both mayank and samrat wailed unitedly..

''we can play here guys..''give the ball mayank..and smarat throws the ball towards sameer..and he catches it..

They were playing in zest & rumbling the ball from each other..

Sameer-prithvi catch..[he whinned]

Prithvi catches the ball and start running..he was running in his own daft.that he didn't saw a girl of nearly his age.with short browny hairs.very pretty carrying some pamphlets ..for her college show..

He collided with that gal & they both spilled in the fountain which was.very beautiful  and clear located in the corners of garden to increase its affinity..

 

 

Pehli nazar mai kaisa zaddo kar dia..[prithvi took out his head which was submerged into the water]

Tera ban baitha hai mera jia..jane kya hoga kya hoga kya pata..iss pal ko milke aa ji le zara..[damini also takes out her head which was below the water]

Mai hu yaha..tu hai yaha.[prithvi wipes his face and retreat his hair]😳

Meri baho mai aa aa bhi ja..[damini's hair were wetty]

O jene ja dono jaha mei baho mai aa aabhi ja..[damini sees heim and so prithvi]😳

 

She sees her clothes were ruined now..she was full of anger..prithvi was continuously staring her ..

Sameer and varun were watching all this ..

Sam-yeh kya kar raha hai??

Varun-mujhe kya pata..

They were expressionless..

Damni was full of anger..she was soaked..they both slowly & safely comes out from the water..both were soaked completely..

She scolded prithvi contemtously..

Damini-cnt u see??.whts ur problem..??look..this is not the place to play..

Prithvi was still watching her..that gal was very different according to him..she was fascinating him more and more..

Damini-hello..she clicked..are u deaf'??

Prithvi realized what he was doing..

Prithvi-galti ho gayi..sorry[he apologized]

Damnini-galti..tumhari vajah se mera dress kharab ho gaya'jante ho mai kaun hu??

                           '..Damini shergill..

[she paused]

Prithvi-acha..mai to darr gaya..[he imitates her]

Varun & sameer were laughing on her..damin gave them an angry look..and they stops laughing..

Prithvi-kya hua..what does you think of urself??...i already said sorry na..mera aisa koi intention nahi tha..it was just an accident..

Damini-oh really!!..meri saari mehnat bekar kar di..mere saare pamphlets kharab ho gaye..and my dreaa u ruined it..[she said harshly]

 
Prithvi-lagta hai tumhare paas kafi faltu time hai waste karne ke liye..but sorry mere paas tumhare saath argument karne ke liye time nahi hai..
 

Lets go guys..[he ordered his frnds]

Damni was astonished to see his behaviour..no one has been so rude to her'

 
Damini[in her mind]-this guy is such a mess!!
 
                          SCENE-8

She takes her way to the gals hostel..she enters in her room..her roommate was singing the song joyfully'

Damni was already irritated ..she cried..''stop this roshni''

Roshni turned & saw her best frnd damni wetty and grabbed ..she was startled to see her like this..

Roshni-whtas dis??are u allrite??

Damini-oh ..dnt ask me anything yaar..[she was wiping the dirt which was flared on her clothes]

Roshni-arre bata na..tu kahi gir gayi kya??

Damini-giri nahi gira diya..

Roshni-tujhe..kiski itni himmat [she was dismayed]

Damini-tha ek sarfira..usse zyada rude,arrogant aur selfish insaan maine apni life mai nahi dekha..[she sits on the bed]

Kahi mil gaya na..toh[she starts twisting that cloth from which she was cleaning the dirt..]

Roshni-arre yaar..itna gussa tere liye acha nahi hai..remember chehre par dark circles aa jayenge..[she said innocently]

A little smile came on damini;s face..

Damini-acha..tu keh rahi hai to gussa nahi karti..[she was smiling]

Roshni-hmmm..ye hui na baat..

They both hugs each oder..

Roshni-acha sun tere dad ka phone aaya tha..[she was completing her sentence wen damini interrupted her]

Damini-tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ki unka phone uthane ki koi zarurat nahi hai.[she said harshly and left]

Roshni-damni sun to..pata nahi god kisi kisi ko itna tension kyu deta hai..[she helds her teddy bear]sabki life mai kuch na kuch missing hota hai..meri life mai bhi..

She was discontended..she steadily took out a photo which was under her pillow ..it was a cute boy nearly 7 years old in shorts..

 
 
 
''kaha ho tum varun..kitne saal ho gaye..par aaj bhi mujhe tumhari hare k baat yaad hai..kaash mujhe pata hota kit um kaha ho'[she was apprehensived]
 
                      ~PRECAP~
        savni and varni's meeting
Edited by akansha_lnmdj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
u rock aku...πŸ‘ superb..πŸ‘ πŸ˜Šlovely upd.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

awwwsuum wrk...sis

plzzz add me in ur pm list..
i jst luv d song completely fits on my prida...πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Akansha, thks for pm. awesum update. Luved first meeting of PRIDA. waiting eagerly for next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesumm... :)

 
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update and loved prithvi and damini's fight
prithvi staring at her πŸ˜‰ and thanks for the pm ,update soon😊
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
-Mima...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow dat was awesome. I loved de meetin totaly. Nice entry and rosh s so sweet. Waiting for next update. And i luv your dp
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting part
ur a grr8 writer
cont soon n keep me updtd
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Posted: 12 years ago
luved it aaku...awesumm!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
haha luved d lazzzyy sameer..waking up late and prithvi n varun always ready n preparedd
Prithvi n Damini alwaysss fightingg
n Damzz n Rosh'zz scene...aww soul sisters
noww really waiting fr savni meet...waitinggg!!
update d nxt part sooonnn!!!
n thnx fr p.m
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