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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Hey Aditi,

This one is going to be long.. so pls bear with me Smile


I hadn't read your FF till this weekend..
First time when I  saw ur post updated it said part 14 or so ... so I thought I have to read 14 parts together...
But I was very busy at work and kept postponing...
When I saw part 47 updated, I felt very sad that I am not able to read it due to lack of time .. if the FF has reached part 47, it shud really be very good...
Finally I copied all the parts onto a notepad over the weekend and started reading...
I was so engrossed in it that, Believe me, I have skipped my lunch and had my dinner only after finishing part 49... My mom was so curious to know what I was reading Smile
On sunday I saw 50A , I was so thrilled...

I shud say, ur awesome... you keep the reader curious abt the coming parts...
Many of the parts I have read twice or thrice like the one in which he wants to know everything  abt her... It is so natural and real...
I loved your writing... I love the way they fight... the way they are immensely attracted to each other and yet she denies it... It happens with many of us ... Although we know at the bottom of our heart how much the person means to us,but  we deny in front of them... we deny in front of the world...

Bottom line ... I have no words for u gal... u are just amazing...
I am such a workoholic... Can't imagine myself sitting in my cube and waiting for your next update amidst so much of work that I have got to finish...
That is what u have made me...

Keep writing...

cheers,
Ujjwala

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
aditee both updates in new thread are superbSmile
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Hi Aditi, wonderful update as usual. Again dont have the words to describe how well you've written this bit (or the others). At work at the moment but keep on finding myself logging every few minutes for the next update! Jaldi se post kaar na yaar!! Love it!!! WinkThumbs UpTongue

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 7:45am | IP Logged

PART 52

Modi& Dastur

May 2nd Monday

 
Shaan: Naraaz ho mujhse?

Khanak: Nahi to (aloof)

Shaan: Did Ram talk to you about the score cards? (crisp)

Khanak: I am in a meeting with him actually. When the phone rang, I rushed to get it.

Shaan: As per the initial contract specs, we have an independent auditor score our vendors quarterly and, the first review is tomorrow. Can you and Ram make it?

Khanak: I have to check my Outlook. Can you hold?

Shaan: Khanak...

Khanak (ignoring the tone) Its not too bad...

Shaan: Nachiket's admin should be sending you an invite.

Khanak: Ram may have gotten it already. I can check with him.

Shaan: It usually takes 2 hours, since its your first its good to block out three.

Khanak: Thanks

Shaan: Did Paula tell you about the passport forms?

Her heart jumps, "Nahi!"

Shaan: I reviewed them one picture does not have a signature at the back.

Khanak: Yikes!

Shaan: Its OK, she shud be sending those to you, or if you plan to attend the scorecard review you can stop by and sign it.

Khanak: OK

Shaan: Getting you the US visa has issues, lets see how we can pull it off in the week after we are married. Passport will be in maiden name, visa in married Khanak Mistry... Khanak Gujral. (casual, preoccupied, matter of fact)

Hearing him say her name like that for the first time sends a flicker of thrill through her system, it spirals to a crescendo around her heart, sending a gush of color all over her body.

Khanak: I don't have to change my last name.

Shaan: We've been through this already Khanak, unless you want us to fight some more? (firm)

Khanak: I am just making it easier to get that visa. Since I can't wait to see Chesapeake Bay.TongueTongue (sarcastic)

Shaan: Careful Khanak... your enthusiasm is spilling over, don't trip on it (back at her!)Big smile

Khanak: I have to go!

Shaan: What time do you plan to get home tonite?

Khanak: I have meetings clear until 7 I think.

Shaan: Oh! 8 then?

Khanak: closer to 9, I have to get some forms from a  friend's place.

Shaan: For who?

Khanak: Sonal.

Shaan: Who is Sonal?

Khanak: My bua's daughter, nursing college.

Shaan You have to get it at night? (a spark of possessiveness and protectiveness)

Khanak: I ve missed two appointments.

Shaan: Where are these forms?

Khanak: Umm... Anushakti Nagar! (careful)

Shaan: what?(incredulous)

Khanak: That's what the address says.(confused)

Shaan: whose house?

Khanak: A friend from my local.

Shaan is totally silent, she can hear him hiss

Khanak: Ab main jaaoon? (plea)

Shaan: Can it wait until the weekend?(angry). Do you have to go to a stranger's house at 9 PM?

Khanak: Nahi! I am working this weekend.(indifferent)

He is gloriously mad!

Shaan: There is some verbiage that goes with the score cards, Nachiket wants you guys to have access to it before the review. If you don't see it in your in-box until tonite, contact Parul.

Khanak: Hmmm

Shaan: Enjoy your freedoms until May 29th Khanak! (curt, violent)

Click! 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
wow aditee,
u updated next part..even though she was sarcastic she'll be happy to go to chesapeake bay..she has freedom till 29th may..he is definitely overprotective n possessive of her..continue soon..


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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Hey Aditeee...
 
Dropped in to say Congratulations on reaching 50 and a second thread !!!!
Keeppp up the great work !!!!
 
Have to catch up all the missed parts ...Very busy lately ... Will try to cover up tonite !!!!
 
Take Care !
 
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loved the updates keep it up!
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Hi Aditeee, 

Let me begin with a Big Thank you First to Lana... Hug for getting me to read Casa & to you for writing & letting me drool on this FF...As said  I was introduce to your FF via Lana..knowing me she knew i wld abs love this Shanak from Casa.. 

It was prolly last thur when i was almost done with my work & decided to start reading Casa... read like 4 chaps at one go and i was gripped and taken.It completely intrigued me leaving for wanting more... Came Friday.. got in to work only to be thrilled to know My boss is away  for the next cpl of days.not a penny of work done on that day... started rereading from the begining once again & trust me all i did was just read 16 - 20 chaps at one go.. & wrote to Lana ...Darn Shaan's into my system taken my sleep away...! decided to go back home & finsh it.. but unfortunately domestic work too over till l Sat Late night...& all i know i finished reading the rest of the Chap till 3 am,, & that says a lot.. Aditee. 

Crispy, to the point, no clichd crap. realistic & yet such faiytale. Inshort  ur fab writer.. please keep up the work and let this phaze be as slo as it can be.. I am sucker just like Lana for these eye convers, attractions& physicality ti its min bareest and yet the zing of romance is in their air... 

 Shaan leave ms me wanting more and more.. All long his never ending persuasion towards Khanak & yet he once does not push her , gives her spaces & time & yet aware of each other presence.. & stil being that possesive & protective abt her.. She does get it,  ack it in many ways... whines for choosing his work over her and yet if he wld be around he would pouring him with question of  what and why? she loves to play with fire ... LOL doesn't she..?

ummm...I was hoping to know more what happened before he left.on Sat?.. Did she whine more,? Did he make another full blown move before he left since she gave him full access to her face?  Darn.. i am now left wondering whats he gonna do...clearly we know how protective he is am pretty sure he not gonna let her go alone... he will be at her office door waiting for her..  LOLLOLLOLLOL





Edited by purvimeh - 09 May 2011 at 9:30am

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