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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
hey AditiHugHugHugHug
(sorry for being late)
part 57 a 
superb ...

loved the description...

&

shan's  told what he liked about khanak ...amazing description...

where is ur next update...?

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
waiting for the update Smile
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PART 5 7 B

Borivili to Vapi

Mumbai Ahmedabad Shatabdi

May 24th  Tuesday!

She settled comfortably in her seat. There was nobody in the seat in front. It was a window seat, she took her jooti off and lifted up her feet and slid it thru the crack between the seat and the window. The blue curtain was cold. She  adjusted her back to a comfortable position. The blue seats were covered with circular embossing with the letters "Bhartiya Rail-Indian Railways" in English and Hindi.

She smiled and touched a sign. It had been her friend for 8 years now, since she left home for architecture school.

4:52 AM Tuesday FB

He wore  tan six pocket trousers and a maroon tee with some UMASS lettering on it. He hadn't shaved she noticed. She was at her door at  4: 52 AM. Ritu got the door when he knocked softly. Like he knew the teens might be asleep.

Kaki and khanak were in the back room, Kaki was doing pooja and the whole house permeated with the scent of agarbattis, there was also a soft ring of the hand held bell. Ritu smiled and hugged him

Shaan: Kya hua? Still sleepy? (rubbing her head)

Ritu: Nahi

Shaan: Is it Khanak?
Ritu: Ugghh I am supposed to hate you right now
Shaan smiles
Ritu: Not funny!
Shaan: You could move in with us if you like!

Ritu: Arent you getting married also? When are you going to Ahmedabad?

Shaan: It's a secret. I can only reveal to Khanak (grins)

Ritu: Main to 27th ko ja rahi hoon, Tum Sangeet par to aaogey na?

Shaan: Only if you and Khanak promise to dance!

Ritu: Pakka Pakka!

Shaan smiles and walks over to the sofa

Ritu: Chai?

Shaan: Sure

His eyes search, he cant hear the shower, he knows the voice inside is not hers.

Ritu (hiding a smile) Kuch dhoond rahe ho?

Shaan: Not really!

The chanting stops and Khanak walks out

There is a red teeka on her forehead. He has not seen her like this before.

She walks out with the arti plate. Walks over to Ritu in the kitchen and hands her the prashad.

Returns to the living room and stands in front of him. He gets up from the sofa.

She offers the tray, he does nothing for a few seconds, she is looking for his hand over the flame. It does not appear, she looks up at him

 

He captures her eyes.Embarrassed

Ritu breaks their trance with a "Tumhe doon ek aur chai?" from the kitchen

He brings his hand out and swipes on top of the flame.

She watches it go over his eyes, and then to his hair.

She hands him a piece of burfi, he bites directly from it, and waits to see what she does with it.

She nibbles  it slowly and walks away

They haven't said a word to each other yet

Ritu:Khanak? (facing the stove)

Ritu: Kidhar gayi? I thot she was here?

Shaan: Nope!

Khanak and her Kaki  appear, he smiles at both

Kaki walks up to him

Kaki: Tum jaldi aa gaye?

Shaan: Jee

Kaki: Chai liya?

Shaan looking at Khanak "Nahi abhi nahi"

Ritu brings the chai

Kaki: Main bachon ko jagaati hoon (goes inside with her tea)

Ritu: I shud take that shower, since I will have to go do the thing that brings the pay check (winks)

Khanak is in the kitchen mixing sugar in hers

Ritu: Kitna cheeni legi? (horrified)

Khanak: isme tumne daali hi nahi

Ritu looking at Shaan conspiratorily " Man! She drinks sugar syrip"

Shaan smiles "Good to know"

Ritu walks away rolling her eyes

Khanak walks back up to the living room

Shaan: Hey! Ready to be married? (one hand in pocket other holding his tea cup)Embarrassed

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I am still reeling under shock. This may not be how it was or is supposed to be. Will do better next timeCryCry
 
Thanks to each and every one for love and support!
I am visualizing ER's George Clooney while I write this.
It lessens my pain
 
Hope it will help all of you.
I owe each and every one of you a big big hug!
 
 
 
 
 
Lots of love
 
A 

 

 



Edited by aditee - 16 May 2011 at 11:15pm

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Nice part! Loved the chai part...
 
He arrives early
 
He seeks her
 
He is  gentle towards Ritu..almost understanding her pain..
 
He is sensitive enough to not wake her cousins though he might not interact with them
 
He is wide awake to see her off...might not see her for the next couple of days...
 
He makes sure he involves Ritu while talking to her..its not all gushing over Khanak...but when he is alone with her...words are not required...he had given her a bite of his barfi last time...this time he waits and is rewarded.
 
 

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
George Clooney it is then !!  Much much much better choice !! 
thanks for the update !!


thats all for the day or we wll get some more, just  'yes' or 'no' wll do, can go back to my wrk without refreshing the page several times !!
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
hey Aditi ...HugHugHugHugHugHug

wow amazing update ...

loved it...

shan & ritu's convo...lovely ...he understands her pain...&  offers her to move in with  them...lovely description...

loved the chai part...

the line blue...as always...wonderful...loved it...

continue soon
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Ermmm ummm before Purvi reads this part I am imagining Shaan asking me the line in blue!! LOL Hahahaha ok ok Purvi please no chappals, I wear nice high heeled wedges. LOL 
Phenkna hai toh phenk, size 10 pls. LOL 
Aditee a big big jhappi to u too! This update was a nice, sweet, warm, friendly & tender. I liked the camaraderie between Ritu & Shaan. And Khanak now is totally comfortable with it.
That prasad thing was so sweet & touching. He purposely ate from her hand & waited to see what she does with the rest. She nibbled it slowly savouring the taste of it. Or rather the feel of sharing everything with him henceforth.
And his going to Ahmedabad is a secret now? I mean will he land a day after Khanak arrives or what? Or maybe the day before wedding? Most likely a little earlier because I still hope u will show us how Khanak opens up showing him the places where Sooraj & She bonded & created a nest for themselves. Inviting Sooraj's parents, that decision too I believe Shaan will help her to make. Will wait to see how u unravel it all.
Lovely set of flashbacks to keep us entertained for the time being.
Again cheer up & think of this Shaan, it brings me immense pleasure, I am sure it gives u immense joy to create him from scratch to this large life like figure. So keep it up. Thumbs Up

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pls cont. soon dear...

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