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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
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Arey cliffhanger nahi hua to story ka kya maza
 
Esp in an online story telling format, cliff hangers make the readers wait and anticipate the next part
 
If I tell everything in every part
 
You girls will read if I post and go on with ur lives
 
Making you notice the last line is my best bet to hang on to you guys!
 
In the product world  "sustaining customer attention" is everything
 
Pata chal raha hai MBA bool rahi hai...woh bhi Finance style Wink
 


Thats a Lawyer's Mind tooo  !!!!

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rbo_d_best

^^ But What about my Imaginations !!!!!


They are getting Wilder by the day ... Just like your FF is getting Hotter day by day !!!!




rbo_d_best : You knw what? Aditee should post a warnin in the beginnin of each n every thread of hers 

"Open at your own risk! All the parts will take u to heaven!" LOL
 

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sorry, don knw ur name Embarrassed
 



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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rockingneha

Originally posted by rbo_d_best

^^ But What about my Imaginations !!!!!


They are getting Wilder by the day ... Just like your FF is getting Hotter day by day !!!!




rbo_d_best : You knw what? Aditee should post a warnin in the beginnin of each n every thread of hers 

"Open at your own risk! All the parts will take u to heaven!" LOL
 

P.S

sorry, don knw ur name Embarrassed
 
 
 
 
Open at your own risk...takes your imagination to places you never thought exisisted.
 
My imagination is running amock...Embarrassed
 



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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
@neha:well said..disclaimer jaroor chahiye..
n rbo_d_best is shalini..shortly called as shals..
 
@aditee: put an disclaimer as neha suggested.."Open at ur own risk.."


Edited by RB81 - 22 May 2011 at 11:36am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

@neha:well said..disclaimer jaroor chahiye..
n rbo_d_best is shalini..shortly called as shals..
 
@aditee: put an disclaimer as neha suggested.."Open at ur own risk.."


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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged

PART 68 A

2:30 PM

Mistry Residence

Ahmedabad

She sits up on the verge having a heart aneurysm . He stood there smiling hands in pockets. In a sparkling white drawstring cotton trousers and a navy Ralph Lauren tee the signature act of a collar up on one side, his feet were bare, she had always seen him with either shoes on or socks on, his bare feet for some reason created havoc in her body.

Shaan: Hey!

Khanak: what are you doing here? (stands up from bed, as if not being on the bed will make him think there is no bed in the room)

He enters and shuts the door softly, surveys the room, its really dark , except for the whirring of the cooler and Woody Allen's voice, and now Khanak's audible breathing there is no other sound in the room

Shaan: Annie Hall?

Khanak: Hmmm

Shaan: Dadi and Ambika  chachi are here!

Khanak: dadi phir se kyon aayi? (irritated, childish) I cant meet anyone. I am not even fully clothed. Are her kids here also?

Shaan grins as he leans on the door. "Nope! They are jet lagged asleep"

Khanak: Don't you know there is a rule? You cannot look gorgeous when your fiance looks like a slob? (she wishes she didn't take off that dark pink suit in order to wear mehandi)

Shaan: Thanks (under his breath)

Khanak: Please aap unko keh do main neeche nahi aaoongi

Shaan: relax they won't ask for you for a while.

Khanak: I am not seeing them. Hmmmpfh!!

Shaan starts to survey the room on foot. She is leaning on the wall by the bed. Watching his every move acutely.

Khanak: Yaha kuch nahi hai, the room is not a museum, jaldi dekhiye aur jaayie

Shaan: I have plenty to see. (walks up to the twin doors leading to the verandah, peeks through the window next to it)

Khanak: The interiors are not done by a Swiss designer. Go! There is nothing to "see".AngryCry

He smiles turns around and walks towards her

Khanak: Shantanu, there are people all over the house (husky)

The use of his full first name tells him shes thinking what he is.

Shaan: there is just the two of us here.

The room smells like some scented oil and of her Forest Essential rose.

She pastes herself to the wall, just as he closes the gap. Her heart hammers in fear.

Khanak: I will rub my hands all over those safed se bhi safed trousers!

He laughs out loud amused by that Hindi.

Shaan: I don't care Khanak, do it! (challenges)

Khanak: You know I will, If they ask me how I ruined my mehandi I will tell them

Shaan: I know you wont ruin it khanak! (playing dodge ball with their faces) But if you do, I will tell people you did it because I kissed you!

Khanak: Shantanu. The door is unlocked! (pleads)

Shaan: Nobody is going to knock. They all know I am up here.

She breathes in gasps

Shaan: I want you to get a taste of how I feel Khanak! When my hands are on the wall by youCryEmbarrassed

Khanak: what do you mean?

Shaan: I want you to know how it feels when you want to but can't touch meEmbarrassed

Pins her to the wall and kisses her. His hands are again on the wall.



Edited by aditee - 22 May 2011 at 4:45pm

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SachDJ

Originally posted by rockingneha

Originally posted by rbo_d_best

^^ But What about my Imaginations !!!!!


They are getting Wilder by the day ... Just like your FF is getting Hotter day by day !!!!




rbo_d_best : You knw what? Aditee should post a warnin in the beginnin of each n every thread of hers 

"Open at your own risk! All the parts will take u to heaven!" LOL
 

P.S

sorry, don knw ur name Embarrassed
 
 
 
 
Open at your own risk...takes your imagination to places you never thought exisisted.
 
My imagination is running amock...Embarrassed
 




DJ! so true!!

And to top it up, it makes us even more crazier than before! LOL

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rockingneha

Originally posted by RB81

@neha:well said..disclaimer jaroor chahiye..
n rbo_d_best is shalini..shortly called as shals..
 
@aditee: put an disclaimer as neha suggested.."Open at ur own risk.."


Embarrassed again Embarrassed

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arre..kya yaar..my name is in the signature na..ok i'm ramani..

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