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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 8:19am | IP Logged

WinkOhh! (gushing obvoiously). Loved this part Aditi. Loved the way you've described their reactions to each other. So natural and sizzling! Keep them coming. Tongue



Edited by Aussiegal - 11 May 2011 at 12:46pm

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
wow aditee,
she opened up further asking him that he notices all these..u r killing us with chote chote parts..please write more...continue soon..


Edited by RB81 - 11 May 2011 at 8:48am
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Warmth and love does wonders to cold!! Best remedy is a big dose of love...EmbarrassedBig smile Nice one again... the bold blue.. getting warmer...TongueBig smile

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged

All I can do after reading this is...dedicate this song for SHANAK !

 
"Aapki Ankhon Mein Kuch..
Mehke hue se...Raaz haiii...
Aapse bhi Khoobsurat...
Aapke Andaaz hain"


Edited by togepe30 - 11 May 2011 at 9:28am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged
lovely update Aditee, it was very cute!
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditee

 
Its a slow journey, hope you like it!
Its a typical arranged marriage situation.
You find out more about your partner as you go along
Not all in one evening
Nor over forced "dates".
 
Some things she will know before she marries him
Most she will find find out after.
Thats the joy of an arranged marriage
 
Discovering the guy!
Discovering the woman!
 
 
 
You will not hear a "I Love you" neither will you read about them making out in every part!
They will not talk about "feelings and emotions".
 They will also not talk about literature, poetry or world inflation.
They will not make out in public, or behave suggestively
 
Maybe they should
But not in mine...
 
I am trying to capture the life of a young urban couple. Nothing fancy.
He is full of short comings.
He is amazing at work but not in talking endlessly about feelings.
He is not the richest guy on the planet. 
He does not own Marine Drive or half of Mumbai.
He is practical, he knows what he is capable of and what he is not 
He is not the proverbial romance fiction hero with a fierce temper and unlimited s-- drive.
He will not "shake her like a leaf" to get answers.
He will not freeze her with one look
He will not always think about how good looking he is.
 
He is young, popular and ambitious.
 
 
She has been really good at work and relationships thus far, but finds herself floundering.
She is deeply emotional and very poised
She invests a lot only when she cares about something
Otherwise she just floats through life with no concern
 
Very few people are able to know the real her
She likes to keep it that way
 
One of my readers PMed me saying "She is very quiet but very intelligent in her comebacks"
Thats exactly how she is. She is not talking all the time, she speaks very rarely but when she does its spot on!
She has slowly started opening up to him with all this back and forth. 
 
 
They say things they often dont mean.
They dont say things they want to.
 
They are irrational, illogical and impulsive
 
More coming up tonite...
 
 
 
This is exactly the reason the whole story works...it is very addictive. Loving it!!
 
 
 
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Wow Aditee Big smile
Awesome parts 54B and 54C loved it Big smile
Beautifully written very nice Clap
U r just amazing
Clap
Love ur writing enjoying every part Big smile
Thanks a lot Big smile

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
oh-ho!

change! change! change! change! change! change!

2 hours gone by ... between two updates, with them beside each other ... Sahi hain ... loved it!

Keep up the good writing ... your update is worth the wait dear ...

~Cheers,
Dish


Edited by dishbhan - 11 May 2011 at 11:11am

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