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'Geet helping Maan wear pagdi"a romantic scene.

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
A scene suggestion to writers: "Geet helping Maan wear pagdi"

This is a scene suggested to makers to show once in Geet in near future:

Scene 1: Its early morning and Geet is not able to sleep,she is thinking about Maan:

Geet is in her room thinking about moments when Maan jumped in her room chupke chupke and took all the risk and then someone came in as

it is loved by present writers to irritate fans:
An edited scene with all moments joined together and Geet thinking about them...


Scene 2: Geet gets up and feels why shud Maan come to her room always as it was so much effort and risk in it..she decides to go down and

meet Maan..since it was early morning and every one must be sleeping...Geet peeps out and while on the way she sees Jugnu mama sleeping

with book on his stomach and bottle in his mouth as if he was a kid...beeji and teji phaji and all are asleep...Geet smiles and she goes down

chupke chupke


Scene 3:
Geet reaches Maan's room and finds him missing and wonder where Maan was and realises he was having bath...she quickly hides

herself...

Scene 4: Maan comes out with out shirt and Geet smiles and hugs him from behind and ( Maahi runs in the background as Maan realises it was

Geet in his room early morning)

Maan: Geet tum yahan? yahan kya kar rahi ho?
Geet: Aaapki yaad aarahi thi toh milne aayegayi
Maan: Geet kisine dekh liya toh
Geet: Maan waise toh aap bade bahadur bante ho aur jab mein yehi line aapse keh ti hu toh kya kehte hai aap

Geet imitates Maan's style:

" Geet tum Maan Singh Khurana ki patni ho,aur tumhein mujh par vishwas hai ya nahi? meine kaha na mein akele hi tumharein parivar waalo ko

sambhal sakta hu"

( Maahi in the background as Maan makes a move towards Geet and Geet gets worried if Maan was upset)

Maan pulls Geet close to her:

Maan: bahut bahadur ho gayi ho tum aur mein dekh raha hu tumhara chuhe jaise jigar mere saath reh reh kar sher jaisa hogaya hai

Geet smiles and hugs Maan...and Maan hugs Geet tightly...

Maan: kya hua Geet,tum itni subah
Geet: bahut yaad aarahi thi raat bhar,aur phir meine socha aap kab tak yu bandaron ki tarah uchal kuud karte rahenge

Maan glares as Geet smiles

Maan: Bandar:
Geet:mera matlab hai
Maan pulls Geet close and very close and lips at kissing distance ( Maahi in the background)

Maan: Sach Sach kaho warna...

Geet with a smile and looking in Maan's eyes

Geet: Woh...

Maan moves closer to Geet...and Geet smiles and a camera trick as Maan kisses Geet...( Scenes shot from behind with no clear lip lock shown

and can be shown if makers have the will to show) ( With expressions of Drashti and Gurmeet with eyes closed as if lip lock was on)

( Maahi in the back ground)

Geet: Maan mein ab aur alag nahi reh sakti,kab tak yu hi chalta rahega.kab tak yeh pagdi ka khel chalta rahega
Maan: arey tum hi toh kehti hona ki balwant singh tumhein accha lagta hai
Geet: Haa so toh hai...Geet smiles...aur meine socha kab tak bechaara roz milne aata rahega,aaj mein hi mil aati hu

Maan pulls Geet close:

Maan: Roz aaya karo Geet apne driver se milne
Geet: Driver sahab meri shadi ho chuki hai,toh kya hua...

Geet pushes Maan;

Geet: Bahut ho gayi badmaashi,aap yeh batayiye subah subah itni jaldi kahan jaa rahein the aap
Maan: Tumse milne,raat bhar yaad aa rahi thi socha tumse sab ke uthne se pehle mil lu

Maahi in the back ground as Geet feels for Maan and hugs Maan tightly again and so does Maan..

Geet comes out of the hug:

Geet: Maan aapki pagdi kahan hai
Maan: woh wahan
Geet: aaj mein aapko pagdi pehnayungi
Maan: tum pehnaogi
Geet: Haan,darji ki pagdi kabhi kabhi banayi hai meine..

Maan: geet rehne do mein pehen lunga
Geet glares and order Maan: Driver wahan baitho uar kahan na mein pehnaungi,buss

Maan sits and Geet smiles...


An entire 2 mins 30 seconds scene where Geet helps Maan wear pagdi..a scene shot in slow motion,edited with close looks of Gumreet and

Drashti shot from front angle and one angle for Gurmeet and Drashti's close looks...that is it no third angle for editing team to get confused.


Scene 5: Maan gets upp with pagdi and Maan and Geet stand together and look each other in the mirror which gives image of face that is it(

a small mirror hanging on wall,cant expect a big mirror in drivers room)

Sceen 6:


Geet: Maan dil jeetna toh theek hai lekin hum kaise dil jeetenge?
Maan: Teji phaji se shuruaat karenge
Geet; Matlab
Maan: Humein Pammi aur Teji pahji ki help karni chahiye
Geet; Woh kaise
Maan: Pammi bhabhi ka confidence badhakar
Geet: Hmm..
Maan: Waise Geet,tumhein dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki tumharein bhai hai
Geet: Matlab?
Maan: sab apni hi baat manvaatein hai,saamne waala toh bechara kuch kehne ke layak hi nahi rehta
Maan: ab mujhe dekho na Maan Singh Khurana kya tha aur kyase kya hogaya?

Maan shows his pagdi

Geet: toh meine kahan aapse yeh natak karne ke liye..
Maan: Mein toh pagdi ki baat kar raha tha,tumne ek awwaz utha yi aur mein chup...
Geet smiles and hits Maan on his lips...
Geet: accha..jaise aap kuch karte hi nahi...jyada bhole mat baniye

Maan kisses Geet's forehead and asks her to meet after breakfast in her room where he wud be coming to discuss something


Scene ends:
The above scene is an edited version of my effort to help makers with Geet season 2 and toughest concept on which it is based...

The original scene follows next:


Edited by Drashtisfriend - 08 May 2011 at 8:07am

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Episode 197:

Scene 1: Maan and Maansi come out of the hug and Maan tries to convince Maansi.

Maan: Maansi tumne jo kaha woh sahi tha lekin..( Maan puts his hand in the packet to remove his wallet to show Geet's snap..

Maansi's mama sees Maan and Maansi and asks both to sleep as it was too late and the coming two days they had alot of work..the next day was a party and the other day preparations for karva chaut and Maansi had to prepare alot for it..

Maansi wishes Maan good night and leaves,leaving Maan think about how he shud make her beleive..and wonders how Maansi did not beleive him..and the points she said were valid...

Scene 2: Maan in flashback after he removes his wallet and Geet's snap in it...

Maan and Geet scene in the room..( Maahi musical in the background)

Geet: Maan aapko yaad hai na humein Amritsar ke liye nikalna hai,Beeji ne khaas hum dono ko bulaya hai..
Maan: Haan..
Geet comes close to Maan...and teases him ( Geet with a smile and looking in eyes of Maan)
Geet: Haan,nahi pakka jaana hai..Beeji keh rahi thi unka Driver kahi chala gaya hai aur unhein apne poorane driver Balwant Singh ki bahut yaad aarahi hai..

Maan pulls Geet close to him in his arms:( Maahi continues as Maan and Geet are damn close)

Maan: Ohhh Balwant Singh...Beeji ko yaad arahi hai ya phirrr..tumhein..
Geet:Sach kahu toh mujhe bhi..kitna handsome lagta tha Balwant Singh..
Maan: Accha..( Maan pulls Geet close to himself) Geet tum kuch jyada hi tareef nahi kar rahi ho uski aur woh bhi apne pati ke saamne..
Geet: Geet puts her arms on Maan's shoulders: ( Ab kya karu woh tha hi itna pyaara ki yaad jaati hi nahi)
Maan: Accha aisa kya khaas tha usmein..
Geet smiles and Maahi runs at a higher tone and pitch..
Geet comes close to lips..at a kissing distance and then smiles and rubs her nose with Maan's nose..and hugs Maan..

Geet: Maan aap ek baar phir Balwant Singh baniye na..
Maan: Kya?
Geet: Haa
Maan: Pagal hogayi ho aur mein pagdi nahi pehnewala..
Geet: Arey mein aapko pagdi pehnati hu..

Geet gets out of hug and then searches for a cloth for pagdi..

Maan: Geet kya mazak hai chodo bhi..mein keh deta hu mein pagdi nahi pehnewala.
Geet: Please Maan sirf ek baar mere liye..

Geet finds a cloth and smiles and rushes towards Maan and Maan runs here and there and Geet runs behind Maan and while running both fall together on the bed...Maan down and Geet on him ( Maahi in the back ground as Geet holds Maan's both hands and stretches them straight and holds both hand tightly and smiles and so does Maan...a maahi moment...

Geet: Aaj mein aapko pagdi pehne bina nahi jaane dungi..kya hai Maan...ek choti is request hi toh hai na..
Maan: Accha theek hai

( Maahi moment as Geet helps Maan wear pagdi...entire 2 minutes and 30 seconds of Maahi used to show the pagdi scene where Geet enjoys making Maan wear pagdi...and close shots of Maan and Geet shown)

Geet: Wow kitne cute lag rahein hai aap..( Geet pulls Maan's cheeks)
Maan smiles...
Geet kisses Maan on his cheeks and says
Geet: Maan aap haftein kamse kam teen din Balwant Singh bankar aaya kijiye..
Maan: Accha teen din,saat din kyu nahi
Geet: Nahi mujhe toh do do Dusht Danav chahiye,ek Maan ke roop mein aur ek Balwant Singh ke roop mein
Maan: Ohh..jo hukum begum sahiba
Geet: Waise bhi Maan,Balwant Singh ko dekh kar bahut pyaar aata hai uspe..( Geet gives a naughty smile to tease Maan)
Maan: Muhje toh darr lagne laga hai Geet
Geet: Woh kyu
Maan: Ab tumhein Maan se jyada Balwant Singh par pyaar aarah hai toh
Geet: Bilkul nahi,mere Maan se accha,saccha aur Sidha iss duniya mein koi aur hai hi nahi.
Maan: Accha
Geet: Bilkul,aapki sacchayi hi kaafi hai Maan aapse beinteha pyaar karne ke liye,aur phir mein yeh jaanti hu aap kabhi koi galat kaam nahi kar sakte,isiliye toh aap jo kehte hai jo karte hai usspar poori tarah vishwas karti hu,kyuki mere liya Bharosa aur vishwas dono ka buss ek hi swaroop hai " Maan"..

Maan comes out of the flash back and realises what he had done to Maansi by hiding about Geet and her resemblance and he talks to himself and feels he indeed hide truth from her when he recollects words of Maansi which expressed how much trust she showed in him dadi maa and adi as well as pinky.

Sceen 3: Maan thinking about his earlier plan was the best option when he wud take Maansi to the room and he feels that was the only option..

Scene 4: Early morning...Maan gets to know that Venu had come to meet him...

Maan and Venu meeting...Venu sees Maan and comes near him and hugs him...

Venu: I am there with you dude...
Maan: I know
Venu: Dadi maa ne bataya Geet ke baarein mein, I was shocked mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi horaha
Maan: Maansi ne bhi yakeen nahi kiya
Venu is left shocked: ( Tumne Maansi ko bata diya)
Maan: Haa lekin usse meri baat par vishwas nahi hua aur karti bhi kyu aaj tak mein aur dadi maa usse Geet ki pehchaan chupatein aarahein the.
Maan: meine dhoka diya hai usse aur ab woh kabhi nahi samajh payegi ki meine aisa kyu kiya
Venu: Maan,uski galti nahi hai aur phir kaun vishwas karega,mein bhi nahi karta agar mein Maansi ki jagah hota

Maan looks with a question mark

Venu: Haa Maan itna aasaan nahi hai aur phir Maansi pyaar karti hai tumse,jab tak woh apni aankhon se Geet ki tasveerein nahi dekh leti usse yakeen hona mushkil hai

Maan: Mere kehne ke bavjood bhi aur mein bhala kyu jhooth kehne laga usse

Venu: Uska dil nahi manage,mein acchi tarah jaanta hu Maansi ko aur shayad woh shock mein hai ya phir uska yeh vishwas ki dadi maa tum adi aur pinky usse kabhi zhooth nahi keh sakte usse andherein mein nahi rakh sakte,yeh vishwas shayad usse Geet ki sacchayi maane se mana kar rahi hai.

Venu: Maan meri maano toh ab iss baat ko Mumbai lautne tak taal do,mein baat karunga Maansi se
Maan: Nahi Baat karke koi fayda nahi,woh keh chuki hai ki agar aisi situation ho toh woh kabhi kisi shadi shuda se shadi nahi karegi
Mein nahi chahta usse ab koi aur takleef ho,buss uska Geet ki sacchayi jaanna zaruri hai aur phir uska kya faisla hoga mein jaanta hu

Venu: tumhein lagta hai woh..

Maan: Mein usse hamesha hamesha ke kho dunga aur saath hi kho dunga Geet ka ehsaas..( Maahi in the background)
Maan: Mera ek kaam karoge
Venu: Haa kaho

Scene in slow motion with sound off as Maan explains his plan to Venu

Break:

Venu: Tum mujh par chodd do..waise tum lautne kab waale ho
Maan: Waqt lagega
Venu:kyu?
Maan: yahan ek panga hogaya hai
Venu:kya
Maan: Maansi ne apne nanaji ko mein uska fiance hu aisa present kiya hai

venu laughs and Maan glares...

Maan: tum hass rahein ho?
Venu: Relax relax aur haa tum normal rehna please warna Maansi socch mein doob jayegi aur Maan agar sach mein Maansi nahi maani toh yaad rakhna mein hu,mein usse mana lunga aur haan

Venu forwards his hand towards Maan

Venu: Live every moment Maan,koi guilt mat rakhna,tumne koi galati nahi ki aur mera yakeen maano maansi naraaz bhu hui toh jyada din nahi reh payegi " She is yours" ...warna tumhein aise nahi milti, aur yeh ittefaq nahi ho sakta..

Maan smiles and shakes hand with venu but is still without hope and feels he is guilty indeed but does not express it just thinks in his mind.

Break:Maansi comes in:

Maansi: venu tum yahan kaise aur kya baat hai,Bharat milap ho raha hai kya baat hai any good news guys..
Venu: Haan mein congratulate kar raha tha Maan ko tumhara fiance jo ban gaya hai

Maansi smiles and closes her eyes as she feels embarraased

Maansi: Woh karna pada,koi option hi nahi tha
Venu: Lekin bechara mera dost Maan,yahi kyu?
Maansi: Toh kya tumhein karti aur phir agar tumhein banati toh bakul se tumhari shadiii?
Venu: aah hmm Maan ho theek hai..mein toh aavi mazak kar raha tha
Maansi: good,good thats like a good friend
Maan: Waise Maansi yeh weird idea tumharein dimaag mein aaya kaise
Maansi: Yeh Venu isne sikhaya
Venu: Meine
Maansi: aur nahi toh kya?
Maansi: Maan,aap jaante hai,yeh mujhe apni patni banakar US legaya apne dad se milwane aur property transfer kar vaane..
Maan: woh kyu
Venu: arey chodo na...ab toh yeh tumhari patni hone waali hai..

Maahi runs in the back ground as Maan and Maansi are left speechless and Maan looks at Maansi and Maansi at Maan and both with expressions as Maansi's desire is to be with Maan and Maan knowing it wasnt possible...

One Screen and two pictures:

Maan and Maansi looking at each other with respective expressions.

All episodes on this link in discussion: 200 episodes of Geet season 2 written in same manner as entire episodes.
 


Edited by Drashtisfriend - 08 May 2011 at 8:07am
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Atleast 10 minutes can be utilised in this scene in first 5 scenes and 6th scene was stretched but will be loved by fans more than Dev or

nandini's or mamaji's extended comedy...

The time to shoot last part would still be comparitively lesser considering how comfortable Drashti and Gurmeet are with each other and

their chemistry...and timing...


Serious commitment and planning and vision to design Maan and Geet's scene is what is lacking in present writers and director's role i cant

comment on that.

The above scene has no significant impact on the storyline and does not take it forward quickly but one moment

" Geet helping Maan wear pagdi" which is shot brilliantly,explored properly and treated without rush and haste will give Maaneet a moment

to cherish for long."

What the present writers are doing is they are busy bringing in parallel track characters in between to interuppt Maaneet scenes and it is

irritating indeed.

More emphasis on rushing thru maaneet scenes and concentrating more on dev and nandini's track...resulting in mess from all sides.

"A change in vision to calming down and concentrating more on Maaneet scenes from parallel tracks is what will help current writers explore

the presently on brilliant track in a manner desired by fans."

Apart from that parallel track scenes are stretched where they are now getting into nerves,instead of that like i did with scene 6 of this

entire scene,a maaneet scene stretched will be welcomed more than the parallel tracks scenes.

As far as the pace of the story is concerned,scenes like this will slow the track and i guess that is what is desired by Nissar,makers and fans

as well but to understand that Maaneet scenes have to felt more than thought and one needs vision for them and not career backdrop.

' If ever you see earlier episodes,a similar formula was used by writers which gave series Geet more than a million fan followers who are as

crazy as rajni fans."




Edited by Drashtisfriend - 08 May 2011 at 8:07am
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nyc ds scene will b a real treat if cvs consider it ...hope smthng like dat hapns in cming weeks...
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You have thought up some very nice scenes...hope the Cvs think of including/showing something like this in future...would be interesting...
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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
thanks folks hope so we get to see them
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I like the scenes you have written.. They were lovely.. I think you  should be a CV!!! Lol... But I definately think they should include the scenes...=]
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may be someday i will i am done with 200 episodes for geet season 2..

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