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MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One (Page 82)

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Posted: 10 August 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged

so awesome 

loved it yaar

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Posted: 10 August 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
it's sooo gud i read this in  one go
awesome
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Posted: 10 August 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
lovely ...i hv jst read the intro and first two parts...they r awesome i'll read all the parts...once i get enough tym..!!!
lovey ss...thnx for the pm :)

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
oh yes!!geet should nod in positive ofcourse!!!
warna hum to priceless maaneet moment miss kar jayenge na!! :( aur kaise ho sakta hai??!!! :0 : )
so sry swthrt...4 late cmnt..i ws having my xm! :(
anyways...all da updates r awsm...swt reminiscence from GHSP..wd perfct blend of imaginary.thnx swthrt..
btw..u hv chng ur profile name..u knw it reminds me of tweetie pee n how it says,"i hv seen the pusssyy cat!" :D lol..
bt u dint ur prof pic..gd!ts ur trademark...

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged

 

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 4 ur ..Clap.
 
..ur updates..really dear...
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tons of  4 u dear...
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P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
 
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...ConfusedOuch

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged


Thanku all for ur comments on the previous parts...!! well most of u wanted to have maan and geet staying in shimla for a day...so did i wanted to...LOL
I have tried my best to bring in more maaneet moments this time hope u will enjoy reading it...Please free feel to criticize...!!

I really want to know and improve myself...now i will complete my stupid chit-chat...and bring in part 12 for y all...!!!


hope u like this too...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed



PART-12

Geet: vo sir aisi bat nahi hai''..actually maine Shimla ko apne sapno mein kahi baar dekha hai''.ki main burf mein khel rahi hu''..or jab aaj mera vo sapna haqeeqat banke meri aankhon ke saamne hai'..

Geet: jaha tak nazar ja rahi hai aisa lag raha hai maano  asman utar kar zameen pe aa gaya ho'kudrat ka ye kaisa nazara hai na''..dekhiya na sir kabhi dhoop hai to kabhi chao hai'.kabhi ujala hai to kabhi andhera'kabhi sardi hai to kabhi garmi'..kahi baarish hai to kahi sukha'or yaha to jaise dharti alag hi nazara dikha rahi hai

Maan is observing what geet is saying''

Maan: geet tumhari baton mein kitni gehrai hai''main kabhi aise kyu nahi soch pata hu

Geet: vo sir baat ye hai ki apne apne aap ko kaam mein itna busy kar rakha hai ki apko apni files ke alawa kuch or samaj nahi aata

Maan: geet''..

Geet: sorry sir par maine to wahi bola jo muje laga par apse ek baat bolu jitna main apko samaj payi hu'.aap bahar se kuch or hai or andar se kuch or''aap bahut ache hai sir or please meri baat maneiye or apni zindagi ko ache dhang se jeena start kijiye''!!

Maan: tumhara matlab kya hai geet muje jeene ka dhang nahi aata?

Geet: waise maine aise to nahin kaha tha par aap keh rahe hai to sahi hi hoga kyuki maan singh khurana kabhi galata nahin hote'.haina'.

Both of them start laughing like hell''

Maan: acha geet tumne bataya nahin tum rukna chahti ho ya jana chahti ho??

Geet keeps shut for a moment'.and then says nahi sir wapis chalte hai

Maan: geet ek baat bolu??

Geet: ji sir

Maan: kuch had tak to main bhi tumhe samjne laga hu'.abhi tum kuch bol rahi ho or tumhari aankhen kuch or hi bol rahi hai

Maan: tumhare chehre pe saaf likha hai ki tum wapis nahi jaana chahti'.agar aisa hai to problem kya hai

Geet: sir aisi baat nahin hai vo beeji mera intezaar kar rahi hongi or phir meera di ki problem bhi to solve karni hai na

Maan: acha to ye baat hai'tum aisa kari abhi apni beeji ko phone karo or unko kaho ki hum kal wapis aayenge abhi toda kaam baaki hai or jaha tak tumhari meera di ki baat hai hum milke uss baat ka solution nikalenge

 

Geet: par aapne to abhi bola ki hamara kaam khatam ho gay hai

Maan: nahin abhi kaam baki hai'abhi tumhe maine jaisa bola waise karo'apni beeji ko call karo or ye tumhare boss ka order hai

Geet: thik hai sir

Maan gives his cell phone to geet and she calls up her beeji nad tells that they will be coming tomorrow

Geet: sir maine bol dia par ab kauns kaam karna hai

Maan: batata hu abibas thoda se intezaar karo

Maan and geet heads towards the tourism information centre and book tickets for kufri( it is a beautiful place nearby Shimla and is quite famousduring snowfalls,,,,,,a major attraction for tourists)

Geet: sir yah ape kaunsa kaama hai??

Maan: geet abhi thodi der pehle tum hi muje keh rahi thi na ki zindagi ko dhang se jeena chaiye'..main koshish kar raha hu to kya tum  iss koshish mein mera saath dogi??

Geet: to ye kaam tha'waise agar aisi baat hai to main apke saath hu sir'..

Geet and maan both share smiles and leave for kufri''

Scenes changed:

Dev is bit tensed he wants a solution for his and meera's life.

Dev (self thought) bro aap kab wapis aaoge muje jald hi apse baat karni hai''mom se to abhi main baat nahi kar sakta'..iss waqt aap hi hai jo meri help kar sakte ho'.he picks up his cell and starts calling maan but then thinks'this is not the right time telling him'let him come back then only I will tell him everything and hears nakul calling his name'..

Nakul: dev saahab

Dev: kya baat hai nakul'itna harbara kyu rahe ho?

Nakul'chaliye sir lagta hai madam ko kuch ho gaya hai

In kufri'.

Maan and Geet are enjoying the beauty of the snow covered mountains''the sightseeing'..geet is overwhelmed by maan's changed behavoiur'..he was more like a kid who is enjoying every minute of his life.

Geet: vo dekhiye isr'chotte-chotte bache burf se kya kya bana rahe hai'chaliye na hum bhi unki maddad karte hai

Maan: nahin geet tum jao mera mann nahi hai

Geet: kya sir aap bhi'..chaliye aapki marzi main to chali

Maan notices geet making snowman with those kids'..he was not able to take away his eyes from geet

Maan(self thought) ye geet ne mujpe kaisa jaado kar dia hai'..mera khud pe bas nahi raha'.par jo bhi hai'.muje mazaa aa raha hai'thanks geet'.tumne mere zindagi ko ek nayi disha de di hai.

Maan moves towards geet, helped her in making snowmans'..started playing with snow'' and enjoyed the day.

Both of them leave back towards Shimla''

Geet: thanku sir'.aaj maine apni zindagi sa sabse khoobsurat din bitaya hai or ye sab apki wajah se hua hai

Maan: thanks to muje tumhara karna chaiye geet'agar tum muje meri duniya se baahar nikalne me maadad ki hai

Geet: maan sir aap jaante hai main na hamesha se apni zindagi ko apne nazar se jeena chahti thi par apni padai or apne ghar ki situations ke karan muje kabhi mauka hi nahi mila'par aaj main bahut khush hu

Maan:haan geet tumhari khushi tumhari aankhon mein dikh rahi hai'..

Acha geet ab aage ka kya plan hai

Geet: plan matlab?

Maan: muje to kafi thand lag rahi hai aaj itna zyada burf main khele hai hum log saare kapde bhi bheeg gaye hai

Geet: thand to muje bhi lag rahi hai maan sir

Maan:Isse pehle hum dono hi bed par pade ho hume change kar lena chaiye

Maan and geet leaves for the hotel'.but due to more crowd the rooms availability was less'hence they got one room.

Geet was feeling awkward about this.

Maan: main jaanta hu tumhe ye thik nahi lagega par muje bharosa rakho geet'.iss baat ka bhi hum koi solution nikal lenge

Geet: par sir

Maan: pehle change lar lete hai geet buri tarah se bheeg gaye hai phir koi or hotel ke liye search karte hai

Geet: thik hai sir

Maan and geet went to the room''asked geet to change first''.maan opened his waist coat and shirt and was in his black vest''!!

Geet changed and came out'..her hair were open'..and she was looking more beautiful at that time'..maan lost in her thoughts and her beauty'''started approaching her'.geet was also not able to control her feelings this time''and there come " roop tera mastana sequence"



Sequence went the same way'as we all had already seen''.but finally maan's cell rang up and both maan and geet came out of their dream world.

Geet was feeling guilty of what all happened'.could not face maan'..

Maan was in a state of shock after the call'.geet noticed him and asked '

Geet: kya baat hai sir

Maan: hame abhi delhi wapis jaana hoga'.meri mom ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai and leave for delhi

 

Please comments and tell me how did u find the Shimla sequence'I tried my best to what I could bring in for u all'..i will be waiting desperately for ur comments''!!!Embarrassed

 




Edited by minnie_tweetie - 01 September 2011 at 2:50am

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
awesomeee!!!!
 
loved maneet moments!
I hope that maan's mom will not pressurize him to marry meera!
 
continue soon!

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