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MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One (Page 71)

alankitaraj Senior Member

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Posted: 01 August 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged
sorry for late reply this part is awsome & dialogue kya baat h kaash k ab real me bi aap hi writer ban jao show ki 

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sukklover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 August 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged


...4 Pm me dear..Embarrassed..
this updates r  just 
 as...Big smile
i just
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tons of 4 u dear...HugHugHug
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused.

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Posted: 01 August 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
sorry for late comment
amazing update dear
love it loads

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minnie_tweetie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged

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minnie_tweetie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 1:55am | IP Logged

Hello dear friends...thanku for all ur love and support...u have given me...well m really thankful to each one of u...and this update will complete 10 parts of my ss... i really had never thought it wud happen...!!

just wanted to u find this SS fine the way it is going...actually wanted ur opinion...!!!

wud be really glad if u share ur views on my SS with me...

well next part Part 10

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 02 August 2011 at 2:17am

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minnie_tweetie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged

Thanku all for ur encouragement on all previous 9 parts''!!!
hope u like this too...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Geet:  vo sir hum yaha pe?

Maan: isse pehle geet tum kuch galat samjho'meri baat suno'kal raat tum thand ke wajah se behosh ho gayi thi or tumhe temperature bhi tha,,,,isliye main tumhe main yaha par le aaya'.or jaha tak ye waist coat ki baat hai tum thand ke wajah se kamp rahi thi isliye maine tumhe ye pehna dia. Waise tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai ab??

Geet: ab bilkul thik hai sir.

Maan: ek minute ke liye to main ghabra gaya tha'.par ab tumhe dekh kar bhi theek lag raha hai

Geet: iska matlab maine apko kafi pareshan kia na'.sorry sir

Maan: waise raat bhar to pareshan nai hua main itna lekin ab tumne jaldi nai kia to hum pareshani mein zaroor pad jaenge

Geet: pareshani? Wo kaise sir'main kuch samjhi nahin

Maan: baat ye hai geet ki raat se Shimla mein kafi zyade burf pad chuki hai or hume Shimla pahunch ne mein abhi bhi 1 ghanta or lagega''saare raaste jam hai or upar se jis jagah mein hum dono iss waqt hai vo bhi nai pata kiski hai..isliye isse pehle hue koi dhakke maar ke bahar nikale hume yaha se to chale jana chaiye.

Geet: to aisi baat hai'.par maan sir ek baat bolu'..

Maan: haan bolo geet?

Geet: kiski itni himaat jo maan singh khurana ko dhakka maar ke nikal sake???

Maan and geet both start laughing'.

Geet: thik hai sir aap 5 minute rukiye main abhi ready hoke aati hu.

Maan: geet ab garam kapde to zaroor daal lena

Geet nods her head and  goes to get ready ''.suddenly she notices patti and water lying beside the bed'.she understands that maan sir wud have surely done all this'.sees him and leaves.

Geet (self thought) ye maan sir kiyne ache hai'mera itna khayal rakha'meri patti bhi sab ki''muje maan sir ko atleast thanku to bolna chaiya hai

Geet comes out she is wearing a red suit''maan sees her and is lost on her thoughts''he could not keep his eyes away from her.

Maan (self thought) geet tumne ye mujpe kaise jaado kar dia hai..mera to khud pe hi control nahin hai'.

Geet: chale sir

Maan suddenly comes out from her thoughts'

Maan: geet tumne kuvh kaha kya?

Geet: sir maine bola chale ya sach mein daande khane ka irada hai

Both of them leave from the place'.s they come out' was  a real beautiful scene'nothing could be scene besides snow'.trees, cars, everything was under snow''but above that it was difficult for them to walk as the snow was about 3 feet and the area too had become slippery.

Geet: sir hum log aise kaise chalenge'yaha se to ek kadam bhi aage  badhana mushkil ho raha hai

Maan: haan geet par hum yaha par bhi to nahi ruk sakte na'.muje lagta hai roads ka kuch hissa to clear kar hi dia hoga ab tak

Geet: par sir hum roads tak pahunche ge kaise???

Maan: geet aaram-2 se chalo time lag jaega par hum zarur pahunch jaenge

Geet: sir mera to burf mein khelne ka mann kar raha hai

Maan: geet tum thik to ho na

Geet: kya sir aap bhi'..dekhiye ye khoobsurati shayad dubara dekhne ko na mile'jaha tak nazar ja rahi hai sirf burf hi burf nazar aa rahi hai'aisa lag raha hai mano hum kissi jannat main aa gaye hai'..kitni shaanti hai yaha pe'babaji ne aisa khoobsurat nazara dikha diya hai''thanku babaji

Maan is lost in her thoughts'he is continuously staring her'the way she is speaking'..makes him more and more crazy'..

Maan(self thought) geet tumhari khoobsurati or saadgi ke saamne to ye kuch bhi nahin haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Geet sees maan lost somewhere else'..she slowly picks up snow in her hand and throws it on maan''!!

Maan: tumne kya kia?

Geet starts laughing and again throws snow on him''this time maan could not controlhimself'..he also picks up snow and throws it on geet'..both of them start playing with snow'..geet runs away from maan in order to protect herself and is about to slip'..maan holds her and both of them share an eyelock'..maahi all the way''!!

Both of them are lost in each-other ''.and snowfall starts again'..

Finally its maan who breaks up the eyelock'..geet bit embarrassed''but maan again makes her feel comfortable'

Maan: dekha geet tum agar gir jaati to?

Geet doesnot says anything''

Maan: geet burf dubara padhne lag gayi hai'hume yaha se jaldi hi nikalna hoga. Tum aisa karo mera haath pakad lo'.hum aaram-2 se raod ki tarf chalte hai.

Maan offers his hand and geet finally agrees' this time its geet who is getting a mixed emotions on her feelings''she holds maan's hand and they start walking'..Many a time geet was about to fall but maan used to save her'.and finally they reached the main road'.!

Maan: finally hum log main road pe to pahunche'..or upar se roads ka ek part bhi clear hai'chalo hum Shimla to pahunch jaenge

Geet was still confused as to what was that feeling like''.she had never felt like this before''.!! Both of them sat in the car''geet was still unable to understand her mixed emotions she was going through the moment'.!! Finally they reached Shimla'''maan saw geet a bit confused''finally he thought to break her silence'.

Maan: geet  shimla aa gaua hai'.tum apne ghar par bata do ki hum pahunch gaye hai'vo tension kar rahe honge

Geet: o babaji, main beeji ko phone karna to bhul hi gayi'vo pareshan ho rahi hongi'..yaha par main call kaise karuConfusedConfused

Maan: geet mere phone mein thoda network hai tum chaho to mera phone use kar sakti ho

Geet: par

Maan: itna socho mat chalo jaldi se call karo

Geet call her beeji and tells her that she has reached Shimla and was late due to heavy snowfall''..!!

Geet( self thought) ye maan sir kitne ache hai'mera kitna khayal rakh rahe hai''!!

Geet: maan sir thanku aap mere lie itna sab kar rahe hai

Maan: geet tumhe koi beemari hai thanku ya sorry bolne ki'tum bhul gayi hum dost hai'or dosti mein no sorry no thanku''Wink

Geet: phir bhi'.aap'

Maan: geet tum baato se hi sab kaam kar leti ho kya?

Geet: ji main kuch samjhi nahin

Maan: geet muje kafi bhook lagi hai'please tumhari izziat ho to kuch kha le'.ek to itni burf hai'upar se hotel dhoondne mein bhi tym lagegaCry

Geet: haan sir chaliye

Geet and maan heads towards their new mission to find a hotel and finally they were successful'..

Maan: chalo shukar hai kuch to acha ho raha hai'ab jaldi chalo geet'.warna iss baar behosh main ho jaunga'..LOLLOL

Geet: chaliye sir'.main nahin chahti ki aisa kuch ko

Geet (self thought) ye mere saath kya ho raha hai'kyu main maan sir ke alawa kuch or soch hi nai pa rahi hu''har baat mei vo hi aa jaate hai'.unki kar baat mein main kyu kho si ja rahi hu''..

Well how was it friends'..well I tried my best to bring this part full of maaneet moments''well please come up with ur valuable comments and suggestions as to how did u find this part'.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Will be waiting'..!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 01 September 2011 at 2:50am

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Ok I knew u would b updating today...aakirkaar aapne promise jo kiya tha
Well...update was fab...
Maan is cho sweet n caring...isse pehle geet apne sawalo se usse gherna shuru kar de...maan ne geet ko sab detail mein samjha diya
Oh finally geet k dil mein bhi kuch kuch hone laga haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Loved their mahi mahi seq...hai abhi bhi uski surili dhun mere kaano mein ghunj rahi haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
wow maneet ko snow mein kheltha dekh mera bhi dil snow snow khelne ka kar raha hai
Hmm...maneet eyelockEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed geet baar baar gir rahi thi n maan usse samal raha thaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
geet is telling maan k ye saara nazara jannat ki tarah khoobsurat hai
bt acc to me...jab maneet ek dusare ka haath tham kar uss barfeeli wadiyo se guzar rahe the then mere dil mein ek hi baat aayi...
Amazing, romantic and beautiful update
YE lo main toh bhool hi gayi

Edited by piya- - 02 August 2011 at 2:42am

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
awesome update continue soon

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