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MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One (Page 62)

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 4:08am | IP Logged
 
 
 
read last three updates.. sorry couldnt comment earlier..
all three parts were mamazing.. and simply a pleasure to read em..
maan and geet are just tooo perrrfect.. Wink
the way maan gets bothered by seeing geet in tension was just too adorable to read..
maan's feelings were beautifully written wen he was talking to himself after geet left his cabin.
and ABSOLUTELY LOOVVVEED the hug..
cant wait to read more
do update soon
 
 
 
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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Thanku all for ur encouragement on all previous 7 parts''!!!
hope u like this too...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed



PART-8

Well both of them were lost in each other''geet finally broke up the hug and went impatient'.she was very embarrassed on the whole incident.


Maan tried talking to her but she ran away towards the car as it became difficult for her to face maan.

Maan came back in the car''both of them kept silent for sometime'.maan wanted to make geet comfortable with what all happened so he finally spoke up...

Maan: geet main to tumhe kafi bahadur samajta tha par'..

Geet(looked up at maan hesitatingly) sir vo jo hua uske liye

Maan: jo ho gya ab hum uske baare mein baat nahi karenge or tumhe bilkul bhi pareshan hone ki zarurat nahi hai''sab kuch thik hai''hum dost hai na''hai na???

Geet(nods her head in approval)

Maan: waise geet ek baat batau'..ab to sach mein bhookh lag gayi hai'..dekho na tum kuch kha payi or na hi main

Geet(now was bit comfortable) to apke kehne ka matlab hai ki sab kuch meri wajah se hua'agar aap jaldi aa jaatein to aisa kuch nahi hota

Maan: vo kya kehte hai geet(ulta chor'.something)

Geet: kotwal ko daante'ye kehna chahte hai aap

Maan: haan bilkul yahi thanks tumne apni tareef khud hi kar di

Geet: haw'aapne muje bola?


Maan and geet started fighting like kids''that moment made them more close to each other.

Scenes changed:

Meera tells beeji that she is going to her friends place. As she is about to go beeji stops her.

Beeji: puttar itni raat ko ja rahi ho sab thik hai

Meera( is bit nervous as she is going to meet dev) nahi beeji aisi baat nahi hai sab thik hai'.main jaldi wapis aa jaugi

Beeji: thik hai puttar dhyan se jana'waise ladke wale kuch din baad ayenge'..vo Mrs. Sharma ka call aya tha'.shayad unhe koi zaruri kaam aa gaya hai

Meera ( bit relaxed listening this): thik hai beeji main chalti hu and hugs beeji.

Dev is waiting for meera at the coffee shop. Meera comes and hugs dev. She is crying badly. Dev consoles her and tells her to sit.


Meera:  dev ye kya ho raha hai hamare saath, kya socha tha or kya ho gya.

Dev: meera tum rona band karo hum milke sochte hai, pata nahi ye kaisi musebat aa gayi hai, main bhi mom or bro se baat karna chata tha par ghar pe to bro ki shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai

Meera: dev hame jaldi hi kuch sochna hoga, kisi tarah se ladke wale kal aane se ruk gaye hai'par next time main ubhe rok nahi paugi

Dev: pehle tum chup ho jao'.ek minute kya kaha tumne kal tumhe dekhne aa rahe the

Dev(self thought) ye ho kya raha hai, kal mom bro ke liye bhi ladki dekhne ja rahi thi or yaha meer ke liye ladka''kahi mom meera ki hi to baat nahi kar rahi thi bro ke liye'.ye to confusion badti hi ja rahi hai

Dev: meera ek baat batao tumhe dekhne aa rahe ladke ka naam kya hai???

Meera: muje nahi pata dev, bas ye pata hai ki geet jis company mein kaam karti hai uss company ke vo hai

Dev is sensing that what he thought was going all correct and asks meera in which company ur sister works??

Meera: khurana technology

Dev: meera ye to hamari company hai'.bhul gayi mere bro uske MD hai'.or muje samaj aa gaya hai tumhe dekhne jo ladka aa raha hai vo koi or nahi mere bro hai meera.

Meera(shocked) kya?

Dev: haan meera subah mom ne muje bataya tha ki unhone bro ke liye jo ladki dekhi hai uska naam meera hai or tumhari sab baato se ye to clear hai ki tumhare liye bro ka rishta aaya hai

Meera: ab kya karein dev'or mere dimaag mein ye baat pehle aayi hi nahi'main to apni hi tension mein khoyi hui thi.

Dev: filhaal to kuch nahi kar sakte'bro kaam se Shimla gaye hai 1-2 din mein wapis ayenge..unse baat karke hi ab kuch ho payega..par tum tension mat lo

Meera: arey geet bhi to Shimla gayi hai'

Dev: lagta hai bro geet ko apne saath lekar gaye hai

Meera: dev muje to samaj nahi aa raha kya hoga'.sab thik to ho jaega na??

Dev: meera please tum tension mat karo tumhe hamare pyar pe vishwas hai na..dekhna sab thik hoga

Meera: thik hai dev..par ab main chalti hu'beeji mera wait kar rahi hongi'tumse baat karke meri tension kaam ho gayi hai

Dev: bas meera bro ke aate hi main unse baat kar lunga

Meera: okay dev,,,bye, kafi der ho gayi ab main chalti hu.

Both of them leave.

Meanwhile Geet and maan are stuck in a jam. Due to snowfall the roads are jammed'.they are stuck on a highway.

Geet: hey babaji'aisa kyu ho raha hai'.problem pe problem'..kafi excitement ho gaya ab babaji'bas jaldi se Shimla pahuncha do

Maan(looking at geet and smiles)Big smile

Maan: geet ye trip to zindagi bhar yaad rahega

Geet: haan ye baat to hai upar se ek karishma bhi hua

Maan: vo kya

Geet: hamari dosti


Both of them were feeling sleepy'..as it was quite late'..

Geet was feeling cold as it was snowing heavily outside'she dint said anything to maan and kept silent'.as the time passed her condition got bad'and finally she got unconscious. Maan finally noticed geet's condition'.called up her name many a time but she dint replied'...maan is tensed as what to do now?????ConfusedConfused

 

Precap : will maan find some shelter and help his geet???

Well hw was part 8 friends..please do comment and share ur views'.!!Embarrassed



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Yipee me first

ok maneet scenes thode kum the but i can understand story k liye ye zaroori tha k dev n meera ki kahani pe bhi dyan diya jaaye
 
well i love chor n kothwal wala comment...n their cute fight...
 
good dev meera ko bhi pata chal gaya k maan n geet work together ...
 
o maan geet ka dyan zaroor rakhega hmm...should i expect a roop tera mastana seqWink
 
love-piya


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Originally posted by piya-

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

loved part 8 ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Originally posted by piya-

Yipee me first

ok maneet scenes thode kum the but i can understand story k liye ye zaroori tha k dev n meera ki kahani pe bhi dyan diya jaaye
 
well i love chor n kothwal wala comment...n their cute fight...
 
good dev meera ko bhi pata chal gaya k maan n geet work together ...
 
o maan geet ka dyan zaroor rakhega hmm...should i expect a roop tera mastana seqWink
 
love-piya


lets hope it works dear...LOLLOL

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