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MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One (Page 115)

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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -knirwal-

hi dear...i read ur ss in one go...
i love its...
this is awesome,mindblowing,superb...
keep going...
everything is perfect...
plz maan sab ko jakar kahe ki vo geet se shadi karna chahta hai aur meera se dev shadi kar le..plz...its my request but if u have  another story line then keep going..i love to read that to...
cont sooon...
eagerly waiting...
thanks for pm...
keep going good...


Thanks baby...!!!
well agar aisa kar dia to next update mein sab khatam mera SS bhi...!!LOLLOL
if u want that i will do it...now u tell?????????

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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruti_ms

just read all the parts of teh ff 
loved it
hope things work out soon for dev n meera so taht maan n geet can continue with their love story n romance

update soon 
shruti


Thanku so very much yar
well i hope i dont disappoint u with my future updates
and ya will continue asap

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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukklover

 

 
...Smile
 
 
...4 Pm me dear...Tongue
 
ur updates r
 wid ...Big smile
 
 
 
...
 
 
& ...dear
 
 
 
 
i  ..just
 
 
 
..Big smileTongueWink..
 
 
 
 4 ur updates dear...Clap...
 
4 u.Embarrassed..
 
 
HAPPY GANESH UTSAV TO U DEAR..Smile..
 
 
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Tama
 
 
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
 
Note:
guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...ConfusedOuch
i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry


Thanks dear for ur so so so sweet reply
luv u...!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Water.

Loved ur FF.
It is very well written
Please add  me to ur pm and update soon


Thanks
well added u..Tongue
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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Thanku for ur encouragement and support

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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged

Thanku all for ur comments on the previous parts...!!
hope u like this too...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed



PART-16


Geet was moving towards the drawing room thinking of what happened in her room. She was lost in all those moments that took place between her and maan.


Geet(self-thought) ye main bawri kyu huo ja rahi hu…….ye maan sir muje kya kehna chahte the….

In the meanwhile beeji calls her

Beeji: geet kaha chali gayi thi tu..savitri ji kab se tere bare mein puch rahi thi??

Geet comes out of her thoughts and replies

Geet: vo main bas aise hi

Savitri: koi baat nahin bte ab aap aa gayi hai…mere pass ake baithiye

Geet: ji aunty ji

Maan comes out of the room. Maaneet share an eyelock. Meera is sad because her marriage was just about to fix as all of them were waiting for maan and geet.

Savitri: to maan bte hum chahte hai ki jaldi hi ye rishta jud jayee or meera hamare ghar ki bahu ban jaye…

Maan geet and meera were in shock but none of them uttered a word.

Savitri: maan bte main apse baat kar rahi hu,,apka kya jawaab hai?

Maan: muje apse baat karni hai kya aap 2 minute mere saath chal sakti hai?

Beeji is really tensed after hearing all this but she calms herself down. Geet  signals meera that everything will be fine soon.

Savitri: thik hai bte chaliye par baat kya hai

Maan: main apko batata hu aap please chaliye

Maan and her mom move ahead towards geet's room.

Savitri: kya baat hai maan aap hamse iss waqt kaunsi zaroori baat karna chahte hai?


Maan: mom agar iss waqt baat nahin kari to na jaane kya ho jaega

Savitri: main kuch samjhi nahin

Maan: mom baat ye hai ki main meera se shaadi nahin kar sakta

Savitri: maan hum aapki ye baat sun sun ke tang aa chuke hai bas ab or nahin… aap chahte kya hai muje to samaj nahin aa raha hai….har waqt aap apni manmani karte rehte hai. Or iss waqt jab sab thik ho raha hai to aap ek or pareshani khadi kar rahe hai

Maan: mom agar maine iss rishte ke liye haan kar di to main apne bhai ko hamesha ke liye kho dunga


Savitri: bhai ko kho denge…maan paheliyan mat bhujaiye or hame saaf saaf bataiye baat kya hai

Maan: mom baat ye hai ki dev or meera ek dusre se pyar karte hai or main unn dono ke beech kaise aa sakta hu

Savitri: ye kya bol rahe hai aap maan dev or meera

Maan: ji haan main apko yahi batanae ki koshish kar raha hu

Savitri: par dev ne hame ye kyu nahin bataya..usse to pata tha ki hum meera ka rishta aapke liye dekh rahe hai

Maan: mom abhi ye sab baato ka waqt nahin hai abhi hame meri baat chod kar dev or meera ki baat karani padegi

Maan: muje pata hai apko meera pasand hai to main chahte hu ki aap dev ke liye meera ko chune..please ma

Savitri: par maan dev ko to shaadi se kabhi aitraaz nahin tha ye to aap hi hamesha hame tang karte hai..main jaanti hu ki agar hamne aise kia to aap phir se meri baat bahin sunege

Maan: mom ab main apko or pareshan nahin karunga par aap please maan ki jagah abhi dev ka rishta pakka kijiye

Savitri nods her head in approval.

Savitri: par bte hum meera ki ma se kya kahein?? Hum dev or meera ka naam nahin de sakte hai…meera ki ma unhe galat samjhengi

Maan: Ma ab aap sochiye kya karna hai main dev ko call karke bulata hu.

Maan calls dev and tells him to come at meera's place immediately.

Beeji is sitting tensed.

Beeji (self thought) aisi kya baat hogi,,,,sab thik to hoga na. hey baabji meera ka rishta bas ache se ho jaye, mehere rakhna.


On the other hand Geet is confident that maan will surely get meera out of this problem.

Maan and savitri devi comes out and sits with all of them.

Beeji: kya baat hai sab thik to hai na?

Savitri: ji baat ye hai ki hum maan ka rishta meera se nahin kar sakte

Everyone is shocked hearing this. Beeji is in tears. Maan signals geet not to worry everything will be fine.

Beeji: kya baat hai behen ji humse koi galati ho gayi hai kya?

Savitri: ji nahi aap aisa bilkul na sochiye muje meera bahut zyada pasand aayi hai or isse main apne ghar ki bahu zaroor banaugi

Beeji: main kuch samjhi nahin

Savitri: baat ye hai ki hum meera ka rishta apne chote bte se karna chahte hai

Beeji: matlab?

Savitri: ji matlab ye hai ki hum chahte hai ki aap apni beti ka rishta mere bte dev ke saath karein


Beeji: mere liye to dono hi ek hai…par achanak se?

Savitri: apki sochna bilkul sahi hai….abhi maan jab hame isliye andar lekar gaye the to unhone bataya ki dev meera ko pasand karte hai

Savitri: mere dev bhi utna hi honhar hai jitney maan hai….muje yakeen hai ki apko isme koi aitraaz nahi hoga na

Beeji: ji muje kya aitraaz hoga….

Meera feels relieved hearing this but she did not expressed. Maan and geet too were happy.

Meanwhile Dev comes at place and everyone sitting and gossiping. Dev is going on with the same feelings. He comes and sits next to maan.

Savitri: dev aap kaha chale gaye the? Aap jante the na hum rishta pakka karne aye the or aap hi chale gaye

Dev: vo mom bas aise hi

Maan: kya dev aise hi….aaj itna important day hai or tum gayab ho gaye?

Dev: nahin bro aisi baat nahin hai

Maan: to kaisi baat hai

Everyone starts laughing. Dev feels bit awkward.

Dev: mom meri tabiyat thodi kharab si lag rahi hai main ghar jana chahta hu

Geet: itni bhi kya jaldi hai JIJA JI

Dev: nahin vo and then realizes JIJA JI,,,,kya??

Savitri: haan bte thik hi to kaha geet ne….JIJA jito lage na aap unke jab apka rishte meera ke saath hua

Dev: main kuch samjha nahin mom

Savitri: bte hame sab pata chal chuka hai

Maan: haan dev or isliye humne tumhara or meera ka rishta pakka kar dia hai agar koi pareshani hai to maa mere liye baat kar sakti hai(looks at geet)

Geet surprised that what did maan said

Dev: aisi baat nahin hai bro muje koi pareshani nahi hai

Everyone are happy with this decision now…and so is Dev , Meera and her Beeji. Dev and meera share eyelock.

Savitri: chaliye ab izazat dijiye hame,, ab to aana jana laga hi rahega,,, hum jaldi hi in dono ki sagai bhi tareek nikalwate hai

Beeji: ji jaisa aap thi samjhe

Savitri: chaliye hum chalte hai…..waise dekh lijiye hum chahte kya the or kya ho gaya

Beeji: ye hum or aap kaun hote hai ye sab taqdeer(destiny) ki baatein hai

Savitri: bilkul sach kaha apne

Dev and meera together take blessings of Mrs. Sharma, Savitri devi and Beeji.

They are about to leave wherein geet comes from behind and stands behind maan.

Geet: thanku sir.

Maan: its okay geet aakhir pyar ki jeet ho hi gayi.


Saying so he leaves.

 

Precap: adi: maan sir ka accident ho gaya…..CryCryCryCry



How was the update friends…? Tried my best to remove the entire confusion. Please do comment I will be waiting…..!!!

 

 

 



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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by shruti_ms

just read all the parts of teh ff 
loved it
hope things work out soon for dev n meera so taht maan n geet can continue with their love story n romance

update soon 
shruti


Thanku so very much yar
well i hope i dont disappoint u with my future updates
and ya will continue asap

im sure u wont disappoint me with the updates
i loved ur writing style n how u dont drag the story 

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Posted: 07 September 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruti_ms

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Originally posted by shruti_ms

just read all the parts of teh ff 
loved it
hope things work out soon for dev n meera so taht maan n geet can continue with their love story n romance

update soon 
shruti


Thanku so very much yar
well i hope i dont disappoint u with my future updates
and ya will continue asap

im sure u wont disappoint me with the updates
i loved ur writing style n how u dont drag the story 



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