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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanku all for ur comments on the previous parts...!!
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PART-14


Maan is really tensed on what all was happening with him'. he could not control his anger and started with his thai-chi'.reliving all his happy moments he had spent with geet in shimla.


He is trying to suppress his feeling for geet and at the same time he is concerned for his mother's health.


He breaks mirror and is bleeding badly but it seemed no one could stop him at that point of time.

He did not stop and continued with his thai-chi. Used fire and played with him all around'..


Geet on the other hand is in her room and is lost in maan's thoughts. She thinks to call him and inquire her about his mother's health. But then thinks that its too late to call him.

She was feeling bit restless but could not find any solution. She finally calls up maan. Maan's cell is ringing but he is not responding to the call.

Geet tried several times but the result is same''now Geet is getting more restless. She is getting worried about maan.


Geet(self thought) ye maan sir phone kyu nai utha rahe hai,, sab thik to hoga na. pata nahi muje aise kyu lag raha hai ki koi mushkil aane wali hai. Hey babaji please sab thik rakhna. Aisa karti hue k baar phir call karti hu kya pata iss bar vo phone utha le.

Maan is still busy with his thai-chi.


Maan's cell is ringing but this time nakul hears maan's cell beeping. He tries to tell him but maan singh khuarana did not reacted.

Finally nakul picks up the call

Nakul: hello

Geet: maan sir main apko kab se try kar rahi hu aap phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai?

Nakul : ji aap kaun sahib thoda busy hai

Geet :oh sorry muje laga maan sir hai please aap unhe kahiye geet ka call hai or koi zaruri kaam hai

Nakul: ji aap hol kariye main ek bar phir try karta hu

Geet: thik hai main hold karti hu

Nakul goes and tells maan about the phone call. Maan refuses to hear the call.  Nakul again says sahib kisi geet ka call hai unhe apse koi zaruri kaam hai


Maan hearing geet's name responds back'.comes out of his anger'..geet ka call hai pehle kyu nahi bola muje'do muje phone.


Maan's hand is bleeding badly. Nakul says sahib aapke haath se to khoon aa raha hai main abhi first aid box laya . geet overhears this and is more tensed now.

Geet (self thought) he babaji to meri ghabrahat galat nahin thi koi gadbad zarur hai

Maan: hello geet.

Geet: sir apke haath se khoon aa raha hai aisa kya hua hai'bataiye muje?

Maan: kuch nahin geet sab thik hai bas aise hi

Geet: please sir mujse kuch chupaie mat,,,,,bataiye kya baat hai muje kuch thik nahin lag raha

Maan: geet tumhe mujpe vishwas hai na main bol raha hu sab thik hai

Maan's words were enough to calm down geet.

Geet: calo thik hai sir maan leti hu par aap mera phone nai utha rahe the

Maan: vo aise hi geet''par ye batao tumne iss waqt call kia sab thik to hai na

Geet is unable to say anything. She kept shut as she wanted to listen maan's voice

Geet: vo sir aise hi

Maan: aise hi geet tum thik to ho na..raat ke 12 baj rahe hai or tum muje cal karke bol rahi ho ki aise hi call kia

Geet(self thought) he babaji ab kya kahu'muje to khud samaj nai aa raha ki maine phone kyu kia

Geet: sir maine isliye phone kia tha..kyuki main apse baat karna chahti''nahi sir main apki mom ki tabiyat muhna chahti thi

Maan: geet kya bol rahi ho?

Geet(self thought) he babaji ye main kya bol rahi hu.

Geet: nahin sir maine isliye phone kia tha kyuki main apki mom ki haalat puchna chati thi

Maan: vo thik hai ab geet

Geet: chalo shukar hai baabaji ka'acha sir main phone rakhti hu'aap apna khayal rakhiye ga and cuts the call

Maan(self thought) geet tab tumhe kya batau kya ho gaya hai'muje koi na koi raasta nikalna padega

Geet: he bhagwan aaj to main phas gayi thi'shukar hai babaji ka maine samay par baat sambhal li'..par maine sir ko call kia kyu'.kyu main har waqt unke bare mein sochti rehti hu'..oye jhalli chup kar abhi meera di ka soch''

Geet: he babaji maine maan sir ko meera di ke bare mein to bataya nahin'..idhar udhar ki baatein kar li jo batana tha vo bhul gayi'chalo ab kal baat karungi

 

Next morning everyone is busy in preparations both at maan's and geet's place.

Maan is really upset with what is happening but finally decides to go. On the other hand meera leaves everything to her destiny''geet is busy in preparations with her beeji for the guests.

Bell rings and its geet who opens the door''..maan comes in front of her and she is really happy to see him but all of the sudden her expressions are changed when she sees him with his family. Maan on the other hand is shocked to see geet at that place.

Both of them left shocked'''πŸ˜•




 

Precap:  geet is crying in her room and maan comes and consoles her''.😳😳😳


 

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part 
buri baat aise hi rokdiya.
loved it pls cont
Posted: 12 years ago
nice one
do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Maan angry in a dilemma...Maan does nt know waht to do! Maan's inner turmoil well portrayed. One side is his mom n on the other side is Geet! Maan doing tai chi! Geet senses Maan in trouble n calls him. Geet upset n worried when she hears Nakul saying tht Maan's hand is bleeding! Maaneet love each other! Geet does nt know y she phoned Maan! Geet then asks abt his mom. Maaneet meeting at Geet's house...both r shocked! Precap is interesting! Hope Maaneet's marriage is arranged. Dev n Meera love each other! Dev needs to say everything!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
continue soon...
thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...
precap😲 why geet is crying dearπŸ˜•...can't wait any more please continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...

finally they will get to know what is going on...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

First of all congratulations for completing 100 pages of ur thread abhi toh shuruwat hai aise bahut saare pages baki hai

ok coming to the update
 
loved maan's tai chi...
 
hmm... tho maneet ek dusare k baare mein soch rahe hai
 
geet maan ko call tho kar dethi hai par ye usse khud nahi pata k ussne maan ko call kyun kiya...
 
Geet isse loveria kehthte hai jo aapko aur maan ko ho gaya hai
 
Waise update was small but mindblowing
 
Hmm..ye tumne galat jagah aakar bannd kar diya main kitna wait kar thi k jab maneet aamne saamne aayenge toh kya hoga abhi i have to wait for the next update
 
precap looks promising😳😳😳
 
continue soon
 
love-Piya