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Is this called love?

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
written something after a good gap...hope you like it...
 
                               Is this called love
 
People say to me
That i am in love
Is this feeling called love
caring for her is love or
getting restless on seeing
her in pain is love
Or behaving sweetly with her is love
 
What is Love ??...a feeling
Or the first drop of rain
That makes person
forget his identity
for its first touch
Or water in desert
that makes person
forget his arrogance
for a single drop
 
People say to me
That i am changing
but why am I unaware
of this change
i dont feel any change in me
then why people feel I am changing
i am the same old guy
without any horns on my head
the why people feel ...
 
 
Am I really changing???
I feel I am watching a dream
where everything is beautiful
Her dove eyes makes me wink
Her rosy lips makes me smile
Her pain makes me groan
Her words make me babble
 
But why am I changing
I dont want to change
But i have no control on me
Her sulking becomes my punishment
Her smile becomes my reward
Her punishment becomes my challenge
 
Is these signs tell I am in love??
Then why I dont feel I am in love??
Is this me who is changing
or people have changed their outcome
Is this called love??
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
MERI SURO...PERFECTLY DEFINES GUDDU NOW...LOVED IT

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
it's just like what guddu feels at this moment
Great job!

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
nice - havent seen you around the forum for a while and we missed your poetry Smile

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
your poem mirrors Guddu's feelings and thoughts. Great Job Smile

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
 u described guddu's feeling in your poem

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Very BEAUTIFUL poem ...
 
I agree with the rest you describe Guddu feelings...They are new to him and he sure does not know what he's feeling, so how can he say he's in love...or I love you...,
 
Very deep Sur...

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
it is beautiful Sur. Perfect for the situation and for what Guddu is going through right now.Clap

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