"Beauty And The Beast" [RT-MC]New Promo Pg 148 - Page 5

Posted: 12 years ago
yupsss really awesome update... 
Posted: 12 years ago
lovely FF khushi...sorry for late comment...
hiten and gauri characters are total surprise...👍🏼
part 1 is awesome...nice starting...waiting for more
do cont soon😳
Posted: 12 years ago
hey ..a very good start..
plz add me to ur pm list
and y is Robby like that..
Edited by sweetnandu - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for the lovely comments guyz 
will update soon 
Posted: 12 years ago
khushi... cool ff dear... keep updating fast... its so lovely... 
and m so happy to c a rajjy and mugs ff... wooowww
so coolll... very cooolll update part2 fast ...
Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2 

Robi hugs kuhu very tightly as he was getting emotional that time

Kuhu: chodo mujhe 
n she moves back 
Kuhu : is ghar me saara kaam mujhe hi karna padta hai n tum itni zor se pakdoge to kaam kaun karega 
robi smiles
kuhu: ab has kyu rahe ho , hv this food n uske baad mujhe home work karwao 
robi: ok i'll , but y hv u not done ur home work at yet 
kuhu: kaun karwata :(
robi: ok dnt be upset i'll help u out 
kuhu kissed robi n goes to take her books 
robi calls massi maa 
Massi maa: yes robi 
robi: hw's maa 
mm: she's f9 , asking abt anurag n u 
robi dnt reply
a pause 
mm: shud i leave
robi : y hv kuhu not done her h.w.
mm: i hv tried that she can do that, but she became so naughty these dayz , i cant handle her 
robi got angry : then y r u here , u cant handle a kid 
mm got upset
robi: leave n tk cre of maa.
she leaves n kuhu came wid books, robi helps her in her wrk n soon she got tired n sleep on robi's lap , robi makes her comfortable , picks up his ph. n goes outside 

robi calls laboni, she's living with taposh n his wife in silligudi 

robi: maa, hw r u 
laboni: m f9 robi, hws kuhu n taani 
robi: thy r f9 
laboni: u seemed to be worried 
robi: yes maa , m worried for kuhu , she's getting naughty day by day 
laboni: send her here for few dayz 
robi[in anger]: no maa, u noe, i cant stay away from her 
laboni: then call sum governace for her , so that she's wid u always n thr's a person also to take care of her 
robi: but here , i cant trust any1, if u noe any1 n if she's trust worthy , send her to me
laboni: ok i'll send sumone , but u tk cre , bye
robi: bye 

robi turns n sees ananya standing behind 
he ignored her 
ananya: robi , listen to me 
robi: i dnt talk to strangers 
ananya hold his hand: m stranger , m ur elder sis 
robi[shouts]: leave my hand , hw dare u hold my hand
ananya: y r u dng this to all of us 
robi: wat did u said , m dng this , no u hv done all this, its all ur fault mrs. basu 
ananya feels bad : i noe it was a mistake but wat happen is destined 
robi: yes it was destined n wat abt kuhu , is it her destiny to live like this 
ananya: no robi , i can understand , but listen to me 
robi: ok wat do u wana say 
ananya: thr's no need to call a governace for kuhu , m here to take care of her 
robi : ohhh yes u r here , the person who spoiled her life , is saying this, u hv no right to cum closer to kuhu 
ananya[got angry]: wat did u said , i hv no right , she's not only ur niece , she's also imp to me 
robi: if she's so much imp to u , u shud hv listen to dada before 
ananya[tears cum out of her eyes]: m srry for this
robi: plz dnt waste my time 
n he leaves without listening her n she was left hurted n crying.
Robi in her room ...
sees mouli's pic 
a hand come from behind on his shoulder ...
mouli: u dnt look gud in anger 
she makes him lie on bed n closed his eyes n slowly kissed his forehead n as he opened his eyes , no one is here , he looks here n there n sits looking her pic ...

"Badle Raaste Jharne Aur Nadi, Badli Deep Ki Tin Tin
Chhede Zindagi Dhun Koi Nahi, Badli Barkhaa Ki Rimjhim
Badlengi Rituein Ada.., Par Main Rahoongi Sada..
Usi Tarah Teri Baahon Mein Baahein Daal Ke Har Lamha Har Pal

Zindagi Sitaar Hogayi, Rimjhim Malhaa Hogayi
Mujhe Aata Nahi Kismat Pe Apni Yakeen Kaise Mujhko Mili Tu"

In the morning 

Ananya leaves early n reaches jail 

Ananya: Hw r u 
Ritesh turns : Y hv u come here 
Ananya goes closer to him n puts her hand on his hand across the bars : u noe it 
Ritesh: hws every1
ananya: sab theek hai 
ritesh: hw r u , y looking so upset 
ananya: nothing , missing u
ritesh: robi se kuch baat huyi kya
ananya: vo samjhta kyu nhi , we r not responsible for wat happen 
ritesh moves back: no ananya , he was right , u r not but m responsilbe for wat i hv done to him 
ananya: no ritesh , it was a mere mistake 
ritesh: no its not , it was a crime 
ananya [tears cum out of her eyes]: kab theek hoga sab 
ritesh; dnt wrry , i hv done a crime n getting punishment for that but robi n kuhu r innocent , god can't be so brutual to them 
ananya nodes...
n leaves for home 

on the other hand 
laboni calls robi n told that she has send taani's cousin thr as a governance, she's a gud n innocent girl n will tk cre of kuhu .

Kuhu was playing in the hall n robi was sitting looking at her , soon a girl enters the hall n pics her ball 
kuhu: robiii 
robi turns n cum to her : who r u n hw u entered the house without permission 
girl: hii m nandini n she gives her hand for shake towards robi , but robi dnt n calls massi maa 
mm: yes robi
robi: takes her to the guest room n tell her hw to behave here n her duties 
nandini: sir, laboni aunty has sended this letter for u 
robi takes it n leaves 
nandini sits down n shake hands with kuhu n introduces herself n kuhu like her n goes bck to play n nandini looks at robi ... he was going bck to his room.

Precap: 
Nandini Feels love for robi.
Robi Slaps Nandini .

Edited by BhartiKhushi909 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Wah khushii jii...grt👏👏...aapne jis tara TL ko modify kiya hai..its superb👏😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Great upd8!!!!!
Pls cont soon & thnx 4 da PM!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful!!!
loved it...
thanks for PM khushi di.
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG khush wow wt a cntinuation.Gosh robi s so rude bt awww he lvs kuhu so much..
Haww nandini will get a slap,poor gal..
Awesum part,update soon n thanx 4 pm.

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