arjuhi ff...fanaaa chapter 14 10th june 2011 pg 18 - Page 9

Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!
It was bolder than I expected but thats not a bad thing! It's what we asked for😳
It takes someone really mature to be able to write scenes like that and to write them in a tasteful way so well done😃
It was a great chapter and really expressed well the honest raw passion that we can see between arjun and arohi😊

Great update and i look forward to your next!😊
Posted: 12 years ago
hayo rabba inni hot hot update..yr u r very bold..;)
gr8 chap..continue soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by KMHfan4ever


Wow!
It was bolder than I expected but thats not a bad thing! It's what we asked for
It takes someone really mature to be able to write scenes like that and to write them in a tasteful way so well done
It was a great chapter and really expressed well the honest raw passion that we can see between arjun and arohi

Great update and i look forward to your next!
i totaly agree wit u honey!!
 
it was rely bold but in a gud way...
 
mayb not 4 every1 2 read but i loved all ur efforts..seriously everythng was gr8...d chemistry we see on telly b/n was jus a hot here...sizzeling n sexy!!
 
im surpriesd arohi jus stopd der doin not much lol gues she was too busy enjoying herslef..lettin arjun 2 tke control 4 once😉😆😆
 
awsome update sweetie..
 
update soon.x
Posted: 12 years ago
wowww,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i lik it vry much,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, dis is vry good update we all want it 
Posted: 12 years ago
guyz thanx 4 appreciating i hav 2 agree yeh hot update ke liye mein ne ek romantic novel ki help li thi mein bhi mature nahi hoon keh yeh sab khud se likh sakoon
Posted: 12 years ago

He lifted his head and looked into her eyes, his gaze simmering with emotion.

N lost in the eyes of arjun n n tired of continuos love makin she dozed offf

N arjun cud'nt help but giv a sigh n doze off 2


chapter:11               khud phaas gaya!!!!!!!!

 

Nxt morning

Arohi woke up to find her self tightly wrapped in arjuns arms n memerories of of their love makin kame in her mind makin her blushn she shuk her hed 2 get bak to the real world………..

She sloly got up 4m 4m the bed n kept arjuns hand near her pillo so he was catchin the pillo instead of her……………

She got up n went 2 d bathroom 2 hav her bath

She finished bathin n wore her dress n with her lace at the bak open(zip bandh thi haan)

N open wet hair went to arjun n put her wet hair on his face n …… arjun smelled it n smiled to sloly open his eyes seein arohi n 4nt of him he said:

Mein jis din ki bhi shuruwat tumhe dekhke karo who acha hi hoga

N arohi after listenin this sloly hits arjun on his shoulder n says :filmy

N moves to open the curtain n arjun after getting beatin is like:

 haiye mein mar jawan"

n sloly gets up in a manner so tat arohi doesn't no n goes behind her n puts his arms around her makin her breathless n says gudmornin n kisses he shoulder n nek n moves  her wet hair away movin down…………….. n closes her lace tightly n says my morning kiss………n comes c'lose 2 his cheeks sloly arjun closes his eye n arohi lightly slaps him n runs away sayin looo stikin out her tongue…

arjun tries to catch her but fails n she runs away dwn……..

n wen arjun comes dwn arohi is servin breakfast 2 michael(arjuns elder bro) who is datin luvdeep her cousin)  he comes down 2 her n says arohi itni patni vradha kabfice ja raha se ho gayi ab apni pati ke saath chalo n arohi hesitantly asks him kahan n arjun says kapdhe nikalne

n arohi is blushin n arjun says k mein office jar aha hoon toh tum mere kapdhe nikaldo

😉he winks at her n says wardrobe mein se n chukles n goes away just to c dadi standin over there in a strict face arjun stops chuklin n dadi says arjun aaj offc jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi ………………………. N arjuns becomes happy in his hrt n acts a lttle "par dadi aaj imp meetin hai" ……………….toh arohi says "dadi jaane di jiyena" n says yeh meetin k liye yeh kab se taiyaari kar rahe hain" "hain na arjun" arjun had no option but to say yes n dadi also says k  agar bahu keh rahi hai toh tu jaa arjun sulks n starts  going to his room n arohi almost chuklin says mein tumahe kapdhe nikaal dungi………………………………………………wardrobe mein se…….😆

Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update!!! Love the romance between them!!! Thnx 4 the PM!!! ðŸ˜³
Posted: 12 years ago
hehe loved it
poo arjun plans went in vain lol
Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update
 
loved it
 
pls cont soon n pls make it longer nxt time lol.x
Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update  and plz pm me  :)

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