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FF-M&G I LOVE U updated on page 49 (Page 21)

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:11pm | IP Logged

amazing update

continue soon

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
i think its yash who did dis do cont soon

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
I'm feeling weird with Yash character,whether hei is not the one who did everything & put that blame on Armaan.

wonderful part ...

loved it ..awesome!!!
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
loved this update... nice one... i liked the way u revealed the past without any dragging... update the next soon...

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part 12

Rahul:hum bhi kis baat ko le kar bath gai kuch aur baat karte hein 

On the other hand geet was driving on full speed she didn't knew where she was going she remembered the day when she went to rescue sameera

---------------------past---------------------------

geet went on the place she bought 2 crore with her after an hour a person came.he was covering his face

person:to tum  ho geet handa

geet:sameera kaha ha

person:paisa kaha ha

geet:ye rhe

person:paisa dedo

geet:pehle btao sameera kaha ha

person:agar me kaho me us ko mar diya to

geet:me tmhje zinda nhi choro gi

person:jana chati ho in sab ke pecha kaun ha

geet:kaun ha

person:aarman

geet:just shut up mjh ko pata ha tm jhoot bol rhe ho.wo sameera se buhat pyaar karte ha

person:aarman ne mjh ko paisa diye the aur agar yakeen nhi ha to wo abhi muskan ko bhi kidnap karwane wala ha

Geet:sameera kaha ha

Person:aarman ne bola us ko mar do

Geet:tum jhoot bol rhe ho 

Person:9233182365x us ka number ha na

Geet:tum ko kaisa pata 

Person;kyun ke ye mere boss ha

Geet shocked 

Geet:just shut up mjh ko meri behen do samjhe

Person:yakeen nhi ho rha ha.ye lo ye suno

Geet heard it

Aarman:sameera tmhre pas ha.us ko kuch mat karna geet paisa le kar arhi ha samjhe.

Geet was shocked nhi ye arman nhi ho sakte

Person:ab bhi yaqeen nhi ay ato phone karo

Person dialed the number.

Aarman:hello tum to wahi kidnapper ho

Person;ha

Aarman:geet tmhre pas puhanch gai le kar paisa us ko sameera de do( plzzz.i beg u ) this was not listened by geet

Geet:mjh ko yaqeen nhi ha sameer kaha ha

Person:wo mar gai

Geet was shocked jhoot bol rhe ho tum.

Person:agar yaqeen nhi ho rha to ye video dekh lo

The video showed how the person took sameera and killed her

Geet was in tears she had bought the gun she took it out and shoot it on his leg and then she called the police the police took the person.

Geet reached home dadima rahul arman and arjun came running

Dadimaa:sameera kaha ha

Rahul:di sameer akaha aha

Aarman:kuch bolo plzz geet kaha ha sameera

Geet:she burst out and sat on her knees crying yelling us ne mar dala sameera ko mar diya.and tehn muskan came to her mind she didn't trusted the person because she trusted aarman.she was tryng difficult to talk

Geet:muskan kaha ha

Arjun:abhi to yahi thi aarman tere sath thi na

Aarman:ha wo abhi upar gai thi

Geet:aarman tum ne kiddnaper ko phone kyun kiya tha

Aarman:geet mjh ko us ne kiya tha aur me ne us ko btaya bhi tha ke tum puhanch rhi ho paisa le kar

Geet was little convinced but not fully she was broken from inside but for dadi and rahul she wanted to be strong.

They all were crying and shedding tears.muskan was lost they didn't knew anything about her.she put maximum police to find about muskan.police found sameera body it was bitterly beaten.it was in a worst condition.

Geet went to her body and hugged her and cry her heart out.as if like her soul has been taken away from her body it was time to take the body away

Dadimaa:beta ab jana padege

Geet:dadimaa muskan so rhi ha us ko kuch nhi hua samjhi ap

Rahul:di plzz sambhalo apne app ko

Geet:rahul me thapar mardungi abhi uthe gi ya roz subha mjh ko tang karti ha.

Dadimaa was scared that geet was not excepting it

Aarman:geet sameera mar chuki ha get that

Geet slapped aarman.but he didn't sad anything he knew hat was he condition.

Geet:nhi aisa nhi ho sakta

Aarman:chup geet chup

Aarman and everyone took the body away.

After some days they didn't get anything about muskan

------------------------------------present--------------------------

she came back to home and went to sameera room she saw her room she kept the room same.she went and hugged her things and cried then she wnet to tarce she wanted to finish her life she didn't want to live she rememberedthat it was all her fault .

geet:why did I love u arman why agar me tum se pyaar hi karti to aj enhi hota.

She was broking things when maan heard he went to see wat happen and he saw geet sitting with a glass piece in her hand

Maan:geet he shouted and everyone came

Geet:she threw the glass her hand was bleeding a bit

Dadimaa:geet kiya hua app theek ha na

Arjun:geet dimagh sahi he tmhre kiya karne wali thi

Rahhul:di ap bhool gai hamere zimadari he ap ke kandhon par

Maan:geet agar tum ko kuch ho jata to

He hugged her not letting her go he was scared to lose her.

Geet:I m sorry wo me

Maan broke out of the hug and was really very angry

Maan:kiya sorry ha agar tum ko kuch ho jata to tm ko kuch nhi hota lekin jo tmhre pecha hum reh jate un ke bare me socha he is pure ghar ki zimedari tmhre kandhoon par ha geet tum aisa soch bhi kaisa sakti ho.tum ko kuch ho jata to me mar jata

Geet looked him in shock

Geet:yelled tm ko andaza he meer stah kiya hua ha mere behen meri wajah se ja is duniye me nhi he is se ziyada bura kiya ho sakta ha meri ghalti ki waja se sab saza bhugat rhe hein

Maan:sab nhi sirf tum he was so damn angry

Geet:kiya matlab

Maan:sab ko dekho inhone ne age barhne ssekh liye he arjun bhi to muskan se alag hogaya par kabhi bhi us ne kuch kaha ye tmhre tarha kuch kiya.nhi na kyun ke us ka pyar amar hogaya ha.aur agar abhi sameera hoti to kiya wo tmhe aisa dekh kar khush hoti nhi us ko dard hota aj bhi jab wo tm ko dekhti ho gi to us ko dard hota ho ga.sameera tmhe apni maa manti thi aur agar tmhri maa ya dadimaa dard me ho tum ko deukh hota ha to sameera ko kitna hota ho ga

Geet remained quiet and silently left

Dadimaa:thank u maan bete tum ne us ko sahi samjhaya

Rahul:thanx bro I think ap geet samjh jai

Maan:nhi dadimaa mjh ko lagat he me ne kuch ziyada bol diya

 

Precap:

Past:

Muskan body found all the blame on aarman

Present:

Geet:nhi maan aj tm ne sahi kaha shayad me ghalat thi tum sahi keh rhe ho mjh ko khush rehne ho ga.thanx sameera mjh ko dekh kar ab khush ho gi I miss her tum ko pata ha maan us ko me ne pala tha bachpan se.she smiled mein bhi purani baton ko bhool kar age barho gi

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
yippeee . me first  Big smile

nice update 

it was painful ,,, OMG Sameera and Muskaan got killed ... 

I think its not Armaan ... he was also trapped ... 

continue soon

love
Sana



Edited by sindu555 - 19 May 2011 at 12:38pm
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Ab toh i m pakka sure ye sab yash ka kaam hai warna armaan suicide kyun karega if he wanted the money only do update soon

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